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Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands

3 - Nowadays, a growing number of people focus on an issue that which is the most important for human beings...

Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
"The importance of hardship"- UC Prompt

2 - My first thought is that you should let go of the first sentence. Someone who does not know you...

Undergraduatetesfaw - Nov 16, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
UC prompt 1 "Operation Iraqi Freedom"

6 - It's a moving essay, but it doesn't really show how it shaped your aspirations. Your dad going to war...

Undergraduatesamicaligirl92 - Nov 15, 2009Moonshadow0302 - Nov 19, 2009
UC prompt 2: Significant achievement (Soccer)

6 - Your essay topic seems good and nice organization but you probably just need to work on a few small...

Undergraduatecalderon - Nov 15, 2009JennB2288 - Nov 17, 2009
Calli (Common App. Essay) - Something can fall in a heartbeat.

14 - It's really good! I don't think that I can point out anything that hasn't already been pointed out. Very...

UndergraduatetobeJames - Nov 15, 2009HeyJude92 - Nov 30, 2009
"I am an Athlete" - UC Prompt #2

9 - maybe you want to start out with an anecdote for your introduction to make it sound even more interesting....

Undergraduatesillygrav - Nov 15, 2009ihurdleyou - Nov 25, 2009
TOEFL Parents are natural teachers

16 - hitchhike, no problem, we are learners. Thanks for your thoughts on my writing. kevin, thanks for helping us!...

Writing Feedbackmargarita - Nov 15, 2009margarita - Nov 29, 2009
"born to immigrants from Japan and Croatia" - Common App Diversity Essay

3 - As the only first-generation daughter born to immigrants from Japan and Croatia, my upbringing was a strange blend of...

Undergraduatezomgyams - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica

2 - No using cliches at EssayForum! :-) Just kidding... cliches are people, too. By the way, thanks so...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
"never to bet against my parents" - GRAMMAR EDITING

3 - Why is it one long paragraph? That is the most important thing. One idea, one paragraph... that is the...

Undergraduatesongbird91 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression

3 - thanks for the help...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009Maethirion - Nov 17, 2009
Do I even need too use alot of Quotes in a essay?

8 - No too many quotes will make your essay without well supportin commentary...

Essaysgain - Nov 15, 2009mshalavadi - Nov 17, 2009
How I Role Model (UC PROMPT #1)

5 - I see that Susan got the errors... but little things could be improved, like... no comma is necessary here:...

UndergraduateKMA - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
Prompt: Describe ex of your leadership.

3 - Ha ha ha, awesome, we need more people like you!! How could anyone not be impressed with this essay?...

Undergraduatebrobson - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
"Never Really Considered Myself...." --Common App Short Answer

3 - Run on sentence: I never really considered myself to be quite the athlete; after years of dropped basketballs and...

UndergraduateJS2010 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Senior Prom Committee Extracurricular 150 words or less

2 - I chose this job to create something that was worth remembering in high school. With only seven people,...

Undergraduatekaryenu - Nov 15, 2009lahariv - Nov 15, 2009
First generation student - Common App/ Topic of your choice

4 - Don't capitalize generation in that first sentence. Use a hyphen for self-learn. A little bit of assistance...

Undergraduatedjrmt - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
'studying politics in-depth' - GWU essay about what influenced me to apply

4 - Out Of the many reasons that inspired me to apply ... The George Washington University allows all...

Undergraduateaznq01 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
' I began my undergraduate career at ...' - SOP for PhD in biological and biomedical sciences.....

3 - Thank you so much for your suggestions!!...

Graduatesvd - Nov 15, 2009svd - Nov 16, 2009
Essay about my experience - not possible to be specific!?

15 - your right kev!...

UndergraduateMoeMoe1 - Nov 15, 2009MoeMoe1 - Dec 1, 2009
Toefl;Government should definitely spend money in improving transportation services

2 - From the great, great work that margarita and rmli did, I can see that you have to work on...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
USC prompt : "Perception of Mortality" does it agree with the prompt?

4 - It was me against a one-ton, metal, forty mile-per-hour moving machine. I almost lost, indefinitely. I crossed off...

Undergraduateguffaa88 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
A Future Doctor: 7 year BS-MD Program Essay

5 - Thank you everyone for editing this! I really appreciate the feedback. glorfs: Thanks for the in depth analysis!...

Undergraduatelahariv - Nov 15, 2009lahariv - Nov 17, 2009
UT austin "Issue essay"

3 - Also, don't capitalize nation in that first sentence. I almost want to suggest cutting it down to size as...

Undergraduatenuncio900 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
UC promt 1: Environmental Studies

2 - This might not seem like a very strong subject to you, but you can make it interesting by the...

Undergraduatesbenn334 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 16, 2009
UC Prompt #2: Dr King

4 - Yes! Elaborate on biomed engineering, because you can show that you already read articles about breakthroughs and research projects,...

Undergraduatesaladbar_12 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 16, 2009
ESSAY ON "THE WAR ROOM" MOVIE ABOUT CLINTON'S '92 PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION CAMPAIGN

2 - Wow, you're a very good writer! Your essay is powerful and interesting all the way through. The election...

Writing Feedbackkyleroland - Nov 15, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 16, 2009
UC essay prompt #1 Success is not easy

4 - Find ways to use fewer words to say what you need to say: ...that makes me love playing it:...

Undergraduateagilbert1992 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 16, 2009
UC Essay Prompt 2- Grandpa's Sin, My Revelation

4 - Thank you Susan and Kevin. I'll edit it while keeping your comments in mind. I appreciate it!...

Undergraduatetweezerman - Nov 15, 2009tweezerman - Nov 17, 2009
incorporated in my enthusiasm to contribute to this school,Does this make sense?

6 - No! :-) You could, maybe, incorporate enthusiasm into a mixture of emotions you are feeling right now....

Undergraduatekihyun91 - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 16, 2009
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