|In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the govern
2 - The prompt restatement is totally inaccurate. It fails to refer to the original statement as it adds a discussion...
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|Many people argue that rather than reducing climate change, we should find a way to adapt to it
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|IELTS Task 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of consuming organic food
2 - There is a time reference confusion in the first paragraph. refers to most recent events over the...
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|Vietnamese blockbusters and Hollywood blockbusters
2 - The original topic basis is not clearly interpreted in the first paragraph.The writer opens with an opinion about cinematography,...
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|TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS BECOMING INCREASINGLY PROBLEMATIC IN MAJOR CITIES. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES?
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|Task 2 question: Some people believe it would be better to build houses in existing towns....
2 - These should be restated in the paragraph.That is why it is identified as the topic restatement paragraph. The...
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|Common App 5th prompt- College deciding period has been a soul-searching for me
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|ESSAY - Failure and desire. It is believed that failure is the consequence of ambitions shortage
2 - Is someone else other than you writing this essay? No? Then why are you referring to yourself in...
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|WRITING TASK 2 - should phones be forbidden for youngsters during the school time?
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|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for Vehicle Engineering
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|Describing a competition - women's table tennis tournament
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|The given bar chart illustrates the number of people visiting four certain museums in London
2 - The 4 museums have reference names in the chart. For summary compliance , you have to mention the...
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|Writing task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
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|The diagram illustrates a wind turbine specification in general and the best location to install it
2 - Incorrect reference in relation to S v. P. 2 illustrations are presented. Your reference is for one image...
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|Spanish language assistan scholarship
2 - A motivation letter focuses on the reasons why you desire to work as a teaching assistant. It is not...
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|lELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Televised trials shared in public
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Negative effects of fast food
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|IELTS TASK 2: Youngsters have problems but the government ignores this. Give solve problems?
4 - 'Adult in the house impose children their ...' This sentence is quite confusing, maybe due to the grammatical...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2: The tendency of human beings copy another.
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|Motivation Letter to Apply for a Master's Degree at the University of Padua, Italy
2 - The motivation letter does not make any reference to a standout accomplishment of any sort that makes you an...
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|Reason for choosing your program and Waterloo- AIF form Math (Financial Analysis/Risk Management)
3 - In my opinion you should start the essay by briefly mentioning the reasons why you are interested on FARM...
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|Ielts task 1: Australian use of energy and how it impact numbers of the greenhouse gas emissions
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|Ielts 1: The line chart presents the figures for UK commuters who owned one or more cars (1975-2005)
2 - Seeing as how this is the summary overviews you cannot use other year measurement references yet. If you...
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|International sport event. Discuss both views
3 - @besthope In the introduction you write 'While some agreed that... '. It is unnecessary to use Past simple here....
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|Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, but others disagree
3 - @Huynhgiao Body Paragraph 1: 'student's time would be more efficient' I think this is not a proper main...
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|Write about surveillance in modern life.
2 - As a tank 2 essay, this writing fails to meet 2 scoring considerations: - Failure to meet the Minimum...
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|IELTS 1 - The expenditure on consumed goods. The data was collected in France and the UK in 2010
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|"I see life flowing through wires"- My common app personal statement
NEW - the prompt: Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one...
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|Ielts Writing task 1: the number of visitors going a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017
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|Write on the topic "Evaluate a public place". Ho Thi Ky night market could be more impressive, how?
NEW - Evaluate a public place. Suggest how it could be made more appealing. Ho Thi Ky night market, located...
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