|English Learning during Covid-19 and ESP for Young Adults - TESOL Master Degree Essay (AAS)
2 - The paragraph about the pandemic should be worked into the motivation for your desire to complete the masters program....
ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|Traffic jams and traffic accidents are big problems in Vietnam
2 - This is a 4 paragraph essay that utilizes only 2 reasoning paragraphs. One for the causes and one for...
Writing FeedbackBlackrain - Mar 15, 2021Holt - Mar 16, 2021
|IELTS writing 2 - Topic: pros and cons of public transport
2 - You are not being asked to discuss why public transportation is so popular and some negatives of using it....
Writing Feedbackbaochau123 - Mar 14, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|Some people believe that owning a home is more important than renting one.
3 - Hi friend, firstly, I believe to get a higher band, your introduction should be paraphrased, not copied from the...
Writing Feedbackcecilisabella - Mar 14, 2021juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
|Cross major - Personal Statement - GKS Graduate University Track
Graduatehrdynt23 - Mar 14, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|IELTS TASK 1; The rate of employed British people based on genders in various working fields in 2005
Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 14, 2021juliachung - Mar 15, 2021
|IELTS Writing 2 - Rich Countries aid to Poorer Countries
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I just wondering if my conclusion is clear enough? In your opinion, will I...
Writing FeedbackFarfarisca - Mar 14, 2021Farfarisca - Mar 14, 2021
|GKS Scholarship- Statement of purpose (Language Study Plan) - English and Korean
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|Fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
4 - Hi @grassil, I think you have misunderstood the main point of the question. It is to prove which side...
Writing Feedbackgrassil - Mar 13, 2021juliachung - Mar 14, 2021
|Child care from centers or blood relatives
2 - You have presented an opinion in the first sentence that is not part of the original prompt presentation. You...
Writing Feedbackmeomeomeodhsa - Mar 13, 2021Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|IELTS Task 2 - A majority of mature people are preferring to live with their families
2 - Wow! 496 words, way over the number of words that you can actually write within the 40 minute time...
Writing FeedbackSophienguyen - Mar 13, 2021Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|The boss very important do work
2 - A formally written essay / sentence never begins with the conjunction "because". That is due to the word more...
Writing Feedbackchauthang5995 - Mar 13, 2021Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|I'm able to understand how far I can go and the effort that it requires; UGRAD Program participation
2 - This is the most community relevant aspect of your discussion. Yet, it fails to portray you in a...
UndergraduateDavidaguilark - Mar 13, 2021Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|The Global UGRAD Program is.... Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - Your reference to PASTO App is not really along the lines of community leadership. It will not help you...
Scholarshipomarkamal - Mar 12, 2021Holt - Mar 13, 2021
|Due to the development of the internet our life has improved, but users may face some problems
3 - @Lilychau382 hi there, i think you should use :" children use internet excessively" and "people should use it in...
Writing FeedbackLilychau382 - Mar 12, 2021baochau123 - Mar 14, 2021
|IELTS essay about advantages and disadvantages of changing career.
Writing Feedbackbaochau123 - Mar 12, 2021Farfarisca - Mar 14, 2021
|AAS - Atmospheric Sciences - your proposed course and institution
3 - too much information for the introduction. try to focus on what course will help you and relevant to the...
ScholarshipSilvana - Mar 12, 2021DA786 - Mar 17, 2021
|2021 GKS Graduate Personal Statement: International Business Major
2 - - Talk more about your family background. Introduce your parents to the reviewer. Let him / her get...
ScholarshipJun0101 - Mar 12, 2021Holt - Mar 15, 2021
|[WRITING 2 IELTS] In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. Ageing societies.
2 - In the restatement sentence, do not mention "fact" since there is no reference to such in the original prompt....
Writing Feedbackainekuraine1134 - Mar 12, 2021Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|Academic Goal and Study Plan - AMA+ Undergraduate Scholarship 2022
Undergraduatemiriyome - Mar 11, 2021miriyome - Mar 12, 2021
|The high volume of traffic - the numbers of cars, motorbikes are increasing significantly
2 - In your desire to immediately respond to the question, you changed the discussion topic from: OT: In cities...
Writing Feedbackzanzan295 - Mar 11, 2021Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|Problem and Solution essay - diet / lifestyle
2 - Presenting 324 words may prove to be a problem for you during the actual test that only allows for...
Writing FeedbackTino2307 - Mar 11, 2021Holt - Mar 12, 2021
|Columbia SHP - interests and background in science and mathematics. Biology & Math is everywhere
2 - The explanation is direct to the point and simplistic in its approach. That, is where I see a problem...
Undergraduatevivi0627 - Mar 11, 2021Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
2 - Remember that you are reporting based on an image that the reader will not be able to see. Therefore,...
Writing FeedbackThao Vy - Mar 10, 2021Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|Motivation Letter for a PhD scholarship in Chemical Engineering in catalysis.
3 - Thank you for the feedback @Holt Paragraph 4 and 5 should be put in the letter because I need...
LettersChemPt - Mar 10, 2021ChemPt - Mar 11, 2021
|MASTER OF GLOBAL BUSINESS - AAS 2021 - Why this course and institution?
2 - ONE ESSAY PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE REST OF THIS POST. KINDLY POST THOSE AS INDIVIDUAL THREADS INSTEAD....
Graduatetpekar15 - Mar 10, 2021Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Research Paper Draft--Martial Arts and Its Positive Impact on Mental and Physical Health in Adults
2 - You can make the writing stronger by offering a more intricate look into the history of martial arts and...
Research Papersa7mg11 - Mar 10, 2021Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Should governments impose more tax on fast food to avoid health problems on people - IELTS Writing 2
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|Are consultants required in companies or should they simply listen to their employees?
2 - Scoring = Premium Service. Please contact us privately. Student Scoring = Ban! The discussion itself lends highly credible...
Writing Feedbacka1shverma - Mar 10, 2021Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Describe a memorable celebration that I never forget
2 - The use of simple English in this presentation is good. The simplicity of your language presentation makes the topic...
Writing Feedbackzenybt - Mar 10, 2021Holt - Mar 10, 2021