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|Writing a small research about the challenges of Derivative market in Vietnam
2 - Do not start your essaay without a proper introduction to the topic. Your current concluding paragraph will work well...
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|A statement of purpose for masters in computer science for UIUC.
2 - You must know the difference between a statement of purpose and an extended discussion of your academic background. You...
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|The usage of "this" and "it" in a given example
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|The bar chart below shows the data about British emigration to 5 destinations between 2004 and 2007.
2 - This essay would cause you to automatically fail both task 1 and task 2 essays. That is because you...
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|Letter of Motivation Master Control, Microsystems, Microelectronics
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|Access to experts - Scholarship Prompt for X University
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|Advantage and disadvantage of watching tv of children
2 - Okay. This is an advantage v. disadvantage essay. It is not a personal opinion essay. Therefore, you are not...
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|Task 2 essay on legislations against tobacco.
2 - The essay is missing an expanded discussion of your personal opinion. While you did discuss the 2 opinions as...
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|Chevening Essay - Leadership and Influence - Lead a collaborative effort and develop the team
2 - This is a networking reference. it does not work well in the context and requirement of this essay....
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|[Writing task 1] The main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
2 - When you summarize your presentation, make sure to indicate that the pie charts are individually assigned to each year...
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|The restriction of using vehicles on certain days as a way to reduce air pollution
2 - Your prompt restatement + writer's opinion is too long. It should not be more than 3 sentences in length....
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|Mental health disorders - Commonwealth Master's scholarships, development impact essay part 1
2 - I am not sure if this is a topic slant that can get you a Commonwealth scholarship. While mental...
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|Essay about separate education for students with different academic levels
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|Common App Essay - Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging
2 - Try to avoid using movie references as inspirations for a future career. Specially when you clearly claim that you...
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|The bar chart shows the literacy rate (% of people who can read and write) in 2011 by regions
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|"My reflection through the car window" - common app essay
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|Children watching TV - Writing Task 2
3 - First paragraph: not good job of paraphrasing. It is clear but you will need more advanced words, for eg:...
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|Motivation letter/ Statement of Purpose for MSc of Environmental Economics
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: three main difficulties each age has to face when they live abroad
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|Driving force to be a leader - leadership and influence chevening essay
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Juvenile delinquency. Cause/Solution?
NEW - IN SOME COUNTRIES, A HIGH PROPORTION OF CRIMINAL ACTS ARE COMMITTED BY TEENAGERS. WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED? WHAT CAN...
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|Was the American Revolution a Civil War?
2 - The formatting of this paper is just all wrong. Paragraphs should be used to separate the idea discussions. There...
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|A letter of motivation for DAAD master program scholarship in Neuroscience
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|Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay - Digital Illustration
2 - Your leadership and influencing references are not strong enough to compete with the more skilled professionals who will be...
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|Educated - tara westover; UGA supplemental essay
2 - Would you be comfortable sharing the aspects of your identity that you were having trouble with at the time...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Begin learning a foreign language
NEW - SOME EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT IT IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN TO BEGIN LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL RATHER...
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|Getting information from newspapers and other media
2 - You made your position clear in the writer's opinion section. Yet you contradicted yourself in the discussion paragraphs. You...
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|Statement of Interest for admission to the Japanese university as a student from Ukraine
NEW - Hello, I wrote something like this at the first time and I really need help. What should I remove...
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