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3 - The statement is weak in overall content. The why is not strongly represented in terms of how the completion...
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|The proportion of visitors to England who paid a visit to four diverse attractions in Brighton
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|Statement of Purpose for Data Science & Analytics (MSc) from Cork Institute of Technology
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|ietlswritask2 It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with parent
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|"I'll use every split second to improve myself" - Erasmus Mundus Joint Master's Program application
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|Computer Science - Undergraduate application Jacobs University
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|IELTS Task 1 - the regularity of eating at fast food places among people in the USA (2003-2013)
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|The table gives information about the employment sectors in which people from 3 age groups worked
5 - Try to observe the data vertically (by age groups) first, then horizontally. You can start by creating general statements...
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|[IELTS Writing Task 2] Which is the main environmental problem?
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|Institute of Chartered Accountants - Reference letter - Chevening
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|Personal Statement Masters in Data Science / Finance Major
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|English Essay on Human Experiences (Merchant of Venice)
2 - The first sentence of the opening paragraph needs to be revised. The sentence structure is incorrect. By rewriting that...
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|Adult education - bar chart and pie chart for ielts writing
3 - I suggest you should use some words like: mention, quote or cite for better expression. For example, instead of...
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|Ielts essay on land availability in countryside
5 - What makes me feel positive about your essay is that you have a wide range of vocabularies, proper ways...
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|How will you use your new skills and knowledge to contribute to the development of your home country
4 - @ReginaOtu Your essay is okay. But I will advice you look into how you will build partnership with ministry...
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|Solitary Confinement Essay
2 - This presentation is trying to cover too much information regarding solitary confinement. There is no clearly presented motivation for...
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|The amount of China and India's population from 2000 until now and the predicted number up to 2050
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|What does diversity mean to you and why do you think society needs diversity? No more than 250 words
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