|Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
2 - Let.s start with the errors that could affect your writing in the actual setting. You wrote too many words...
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|IELTS Task 2 Summary the information
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|Last weekend you attended the Canada Day community picnic. The event was a potluck, so everyone brou
2 - Kindly remember to include the writing instructions next time. I am not really sure how to review your letter...
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|WRITING TASK 1/ THE AMOUNT OF ELECTRICITY PRODUCED BY DIFFERENT ENERGY SOURCES TO SUPPLY NY CITY
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|Write a reflection report on the group work you've done
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|"Relevant Knowledge/Training Skills" MSc in HR Management admissions essay
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! This is an essay on the job training which university require in addition...
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|Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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|Why do more and more young people want to be celebrities? Write a paragraph of about 140 words
5 - I assume you tried to sugarcoat the words to achieve the minimum word count, yet your essay did not...
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|Investing in preventative measures instead of letting disease happen and then trying to cure
2 - I hope that you were not writing a task 2 essay with this presentation. That is because you only...
Writing Feedbacktranthilan - Sep 5, 2020Holt - Sep 5, 2020
|The table compares the leading mobile phone producers in terms of their international market share
2 - Your summary overview still feels too similar to the original presentation. Next time, try flipping the information around to...
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|What food do you eat at family celebration? Do you know how to prepare them? Do you need any special
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Banning phone calls in public places
2 - This is a public opinion discussion first, a personal opinion presentation last. That means, you have taken the wrong...
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|"Language is a way to be connected with the world" Study Plan to Improve Foreign Languages - GKS
2 - Do not exaggerate. As a second grader, you still not have a deep understanding of the importance of knowledge...
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|The chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities, by youngest
2 - Your incorrect format is what affected this presentation negatively. You should have used a proper 3 paragraph format covering:...
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|How to write a discuss two view essay about environmental protection ?
2 - You will immediately get a low GRA score before the examiner even finishes reading the first paragraph because of...
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|IELTS Writing task 2: Avoiding evaluation.
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: Combined charts of household income and spending by an average UK family
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|IELTS task 2: The idea that everyone should contribute a stable part of their revenue to charity
2 - Dear @NguyenPhuoc, I think your 3rd paragraph should be combined with your conclusion instead of making a separate one....
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|It is necessary for children to distinguish the right and wrong in their early age
3 - This is an extent essay so your response should indicate a measured response. An example of a measured response...
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|Civil Engineer - networking and Influence skills - Chevening
3 - @Holt Dear Mary Rose, Thank your for your precious feedback. Even though, I think it very difficulty for me...
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|IELTS Line Graph - the percentage of the population aged 65 or more in Japan, Sweden, and USA
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|Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. Do you agree?
3 - I realize that you were aiming for a higher C&C score by over explaining your paragraph presentations. However, the...
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|Write an opinion essay about keeping job and changing job?
2 - Okay, you already said you completely agree with the belief presented. After that, your last 2 sentences should have...
Writing Feedbackkhankluan24 - Sep 3, 2020Holt - Sep 3, 2020
|Some people claim that the power of verbal communication exceeds the written messages
2 - Unfortunately, this essay does not meet the minimum word count of 250 words. It is severely lacking at 204...
Writing FeedbackBinhTang - Sep 3, 2020Holt - Sep 3, 2020
|WWAC radio station... - GRE Argument
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|IELTS ACADEMIC WRITING TEST TASK 1 - The average sales of a restaurant in 2016
2 - You should have discussed this in a group of 3. The grouping would have been as follows: Group...
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|People using mobile phones between 2006 and 2010
3 - You should not indicate "over the following four years" because there is a clear divider between the years. There...
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|Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. - IELTS
2 - Generally, I can say that your essay is quite superficial, especially the second body paragraph. You are supposed to...
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|Mother's departure - personal statement for college application
3 - @Holt thank you so much for your message. Let me try and make things a bit Clearer. I'm answering...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Table - Food consumption per person weekly in a European country
3 - In the summary overview, you created a run-on presentation that affected the clarity of the information you were presenting....
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