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Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think this is happening?

2 - The essay does not meet the minimum 250 word count requirement. At 207 words, the deductions that will be...

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In today's competitive world, many families need both parents to go out to work

2 - You have written an essay with over 500 words. This cannot be completed during an actual task 2 test....

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Bachelor in Psychology - MOTIVATION LETTER ERASMUS MUNDUS (applying again)

2 - The essay covers only the reasons you are interested in the program and the foundation of that interest (unnecessary...

Lettersmaydreams - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 12, 2024
The map below show a conference centre as it now, and plans for its development.

2 - The essay should meet the 150 minimum word count to avoid any word shortage penalties that could lead to...

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Chat with friends - lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success

2 - The story is good, nut not appropriate for the prompt. It is not supposed to tell the story of...

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[WRITING TASK 1] the number of enquiries in one city over a six months

5 - I suggest a new overall to make your essay more interesting, you could write: Overall, the number of inquiries...

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In some countries, it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old

2 - Let me call your attention to your page formatting first. You need to make sure that your presentation is...

Writing Feedbackhgiang_khh - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
Psychology journey - statement of purpose for UGRAD

2 - The approach to the statement of purpose is too simple. There needs to be more depth to the personal,...

UndergraduateArmeen - Sep 9, 2024Holt - Sep 11, 2024
A whirlwind of hobbies - Personal statement

3 - @Holt Hi, Thank you for responding so quickly. I am choosing to complete the "essay of choice" option...

Undergraduatewhoopdeedoo - Sep 9, 2024whoopdeedoo - Sep 10, 2024
The world of law - Personal statement for the GKS scholarship

8 - @Holt Why do you guys like merging the essay. The same / revised essay may be commented more than...

ScholarshipVera24 - Jul 26, 2024Vera24 - Sep 8, 2024
Dear Future Roommate and Human Alarm Clock - Stanford Roommate Essay

2 - Well, this is definitely a fun way of introducing yourself and your culture to your potential roommate. However, there...

Undergraduateaadij - Sep 8, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
(-1) + (+1) isn't equal 0. Personal statement

2 - I am not sure what this personal statement is all about. What prompt are you responding to? I have...

UndergraduateYoyo_mahgop - Sep 7, 2024Holt - Sep 8, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2 - Prison sentences

2 - During a 40 minute writing task, the maximum number of words that should be written is 300 words. It...

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Men and women should not share the same responsibilities

4 - @nghiadeptrai123 Well, from my own experience, I think that you should have to fix some grammatical errors: - "taking...

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Ielts 2. Discussing both of these view about Space Travel.

3 - Well, after reading your essay, I have some comment above: Firstly, regarding the word count, the format of the...

Writing Feedbackngocmyy - Sep 3, 2024yamitohikari2217 - Sep 7, 2024
SOP/Motivation Letter for Design Academy Eindhoven

4 - Merged: Rewriting Motivation Letter for Design Academy Eindhoven This is the statement of purpose for my application...

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The graph shows how elderly people in the United States spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.

3 - There are some grammar mistakes as far as I can judge. Overall, it looks good for the first paragraph....

Writing Feedbacklinh123457 - Sep 6, 2024LamiaNoshin - Sep 7, 2024
The Good Physician - PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS

3 - Thank you so much for the corrections and compliment i will make sure to work on those you point...

ScholarshipLilly FLOWER - Sep 5, 2024Lilly FLOWER - Sep 7, 2024
The diagram illustrates various stages about making material called concrete canvas into a storage.

2 - You incorrectly described the process and in effect, failed the test from the onset. Material was created (concrete...

Writing Feedbackieltsplss - Sep 6, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Ielts task 2: topic: the reasons for crime

2 - A more effective representation of this would have been to agree with the former opinion that was presented....

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Molecular Biology, Biomedicine, and Clinical Research (BMBIC) -Motivation letter for PhD application

2 - I believe that the case study you have chosen to present as having inspired you is too old to...

Lettersmidori13 - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Some people think that schools should teach young students about the role of money.

2 - The essay is too short. It does not meet the 250 minimum word count. There is a big possibility...

Writing Feedbackhongha166 - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
IELTS Task 2: An increasing number or professional leaving their own poorer countries

2 - Kindly remember that there is a minimum 250 word count for the task 2 essay. Failure to meet that...

Writing Feedbackmmatmmee - Sep 5, 2024Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Personal Statement for GKS-U 2025 - Business Administration Major

3 - Thank you for your response! The concrete business plans are included in the study plan so I decided it's...

Scholarshippgesbn - Sep 5, 2024pgesbn - Sep 6, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2- TOPIC: Advertisment

3 - I think there's some word choice to concern, "less suggestive" to "less influenced". A concluding paragraph is also too...

Writing Feedbackngahn - Sep 3, 2024mmatmmee - Sep 5, 2024
Agree - Disagree Topic Government

2 - While you did respond to the question being asked, you did so using the incorrect format. This will...

Writing FeedbackPhuongle123 - Sep 4, 2024Holt - Sep 4, 2024
professional athletes - role models

2 - Do not discuss the essay in a selective manner. You must use a comparison discussion for both points of...

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My College Essay - Based It on Friends Being My Identity + Never Have I Ever

2 - I learned more about Devi than I did about you in this essay. It is never helpful to your...

Writing Feedbackdshah7 - Sep 2, 2024Holt - Sep 4, 2024
BEYOND BORDERS:How the gks-U scholarship will help unlock my full potential in civil engineering

4 - Merged: Laying the foundation for success:My journey to becoming a civil engineer despite the odds Pursuing a...

ScholarshipMaria22 - Aug 26, 2024Maria22 - Sep 3, 2024
[B2 FCE WRITING PART 1] An essay: Progress in technology

4 - @THKT666 Your essay doesn't clearly state how the two subjects and how technology has an impact in it according...

Writing FeedbackTHKT666 - Aug 27, 2024Maria22 - Sep 3, 2024
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