|Paper feedback on Nationalized Healthcare
Writing FeedbackcgryniewiczEF_Sean - Dec 30, 2008
|Personal essay for Common App ("how I felt when I first came to Canada")
3 - I have no friends because other students think I am strange, I have no one to turn to because...
UndergraduateIvy1991EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Swarthmore Essay... good or bad Idea? too cliche?
2 - The fact that you've ellipsed out so much makes it difficult to critique the essay, but overall you seem...
UndergraduateCloudydreamEF_Sean - Dec 30, 2008
|We live in a world of obstacles. ;Personal Statement, Innovation
4 - During my sophomore year, I was posed with a problem. From the beginning, my work has captivated me....
UndergraduatedsacksEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|'Biotechnology and engineering homework' - what makes stanford a good place
6 - Stanford University and I are so compatible that if the admission process was a dating show, we would end...
UndergraduatembhaireEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|How is my intro (aspects about GW)?
UndergraduateVeggyVeggy - Dec 30, 2008
|U of I (Academic goals relate to professional goals)
4 - You're quite welcome. Sometimes we have to be cruel to be kind. Keep working on your essay, and I'm...
Undergraduate09johnsontEF_Sean - Dec 30, 2008
|'Stubborn Taurus' - intellectually engaging: my organization revise
3 - I'd been in a few classes with him during freshman year , but when sophomore year rolled around he...
UndergraduatembhaireEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|NYU supplement Why this college?!
5 - I think it might sound better to change that last sentence to The unique opportunity to gain first...
UndergraduateLimon1909JSnyder726 - Dec 30, 2008
|issue of importance (Multiple sclerosis)-needs editting and some points
2 - You talk a lot about the various misconceptions your cousin's wife's relatives had about the disease, without telling the...
UndergraduatexyzEF_Sean - Dec 30, 2008
|New York State Bar Associations' Mock Trial ; NYU Short Answers
UndergraduateJohnDavidLinnus - Dec 30, 2008
|Elaborate on one of your activities (my new school Southwestern Academy)
UndergraduatedrenushamEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|NYU additional one: how I spent my recent summer (in South Korea)
5 - He passed away suddenly, from a car accident, a month after we came back to Georgia. The summer...
UndergraduateskimEF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Essay word limit tip for students
10 - oh gosh its 1000 characters?? mine's 1005! argh. >< gotta get cutting then i guess... thanks for the heads...
Undergraduatezowzowpriscileung - Dec 30, 2008
|Supplement for Common App (Boston University is the door)
3 - Ever since I first discovered the existence of Boston University, I knew it was the school for me. ...
Undergraduatenunya415EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|Pitzer Supplement-I want to change the world!
12 - thank you!...
Undergraduateyeeyee - Dec 30, 2008
|Rice Architecture Supplement - enjoy most outside of academics
Undergraduatepriscileungpriscileung - Dec 30, 2008
|EMORY why essay, thanks a lot for your comments!
6 - Yeah. cm22, I checked through and there's nothing about word limit. I was worried cause mine is not that...
Undergraduatecm22skim - Dec 30, 2008
|Contribute to life at Rice
4 - We had the honor of getting the opportunity to give a presentation on electromagnetic induction to our A Level...
UndergraduateKobe24EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2008
|What is Brown University, I feel my essay is the worst..
Undergraduatepandorapandora - Dec 29, 2008
|Syracuse Supplement (aspirations + work experience)
Undergraduatefelixs07EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|My Seventh Continent. Commonapp essay showing that I am suicidal?
Undergraduatejezikerjeziker - Dec 29, 2008
|'expressions and gestures' - Common Short Answer (extracurricular act.)
4 - I watched her facial expressions and gestures as she lifted her arms and communicated with me through her hands....
Undergraduateichid99EF_Kevin - Dec 29, 2008
|"Dream specialist" - Scholarship essay, experience at OIT
Scholarshipamarantaamaranta - Dec 29, 2008
|'I re-focused' - Stanford Short Essay #1 ( a sense of intellectual vitality)
UndergraduateIvy_91Red3 - Dec 29, 2008
|'Efficient solar cell' - Common App (Work Experience, the Carnegie Project)
10 - Thanks everyone!...
Undergraduatedsacksdsacks - Dec 29, 2008
|College of Agriculture and Life Sciences -Cornell CALS (I have been rather fortunate)
Undergraduateshadialishadiali - Dec 29, 2008
|Essay on an influential person - how to make this essay better?
NEW - Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence. I can still...
|Brown short answers (Asian culture)
Undergraduatekim1234kim1234 - Dec 29, 2008
|There are many reasons for me to choose Rice University... How is my "why Rice" essay?
UndergraduateKobe24joke0611 - Dec 29, 2008