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What specific goals do you hope to achieve? - Scholarship Essay

NEW - The question is, What specific goals do you hope to achieve at Western Oregon University to help you succeed...

Scholarshipedtrussell -
A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...

Writing FeedbackkendraEF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
The Last Minute: How to Write Good Essays When Time is Short?

NEW - Almost everyone who has attended high school or university has found themselves staring down a deadline that approached them...

EssaysEF_Team -
What is needed in an analytical essay?

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! Here are some elements normally contained in the analytical essay: 1. Summarize...

EssaysjesusalreadywonEF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
8-paragraph compare & contrast essay

5 - Thanks so much for all the help. KingTiger...

Writing FeedbackKingTigerKingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
[working in series, painting] - SAIC statement of purpose

2 - Greetings! I think you've written an excellent essay here! I think you do a fabulous job of describing...

UndergraduatevegetablenaziEF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay

NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...

Writing Feedbackjhogan -
College Journal - English Class / Society Living

NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...

Writing Feedbackryan -
The big difference - book report

2 - Greetings! First of all, take a de-e-e-e-p breath!! You're going to be just fine! :-)) The difference...

Book ReportsMarieBeeEF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2007
Looking for Feedback

6 - Thanks Sarah, that's very helpful and I'll keep that in mind for my future edits!...

Writing FeedbackSquishSquish - Feb 5, 2007
China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"

NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...

Writing Feedbackasianbm -
Comparison of past thirty years of special education

5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
Paper on Immortality

3 - HI I really need help, I am just no good at essay writing, and its due Monday, our assignment...

Essayshelpme101pamurphy - Feb 3, 2007
Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from

5 - Actually, it would be better if you create a new topic - either way, we'll be able to assist...

Writing Feedbackrang555EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay

2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...

Writing FeedbackKingTigerKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
Application to The University Of Mary Washington 250-500 words

3 - thanks a ton for the quick feedback Sarah, I really appreciate it, and the changes you suggested are being...

UndergraduateAzapAzap - Jan 30, 2007
struggling with admission essay question.

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! I think a paragraph on your strengths, with examples to back them up,...

UndergraduatejimmyD88EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Genocide Essay

2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...

Writing Feedbackanf3rneeEF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Essay on out-of-town shopping centres

3 - thank you, I will change that....

Writing FeedbackTheGeekTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
History Paper on Revolutions

3 - Thank you, Sarah! The points were very helpful!...

Writing Feedbackrollagasperrollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
[about American people] - stuck with a sentence

3 - I guess an ice storm is a valid excuse, ha ha. Not the most pleasant thing to be stuck...

Essaystrine_321trine_321 - Jan 28, 2007
Correct word use? "Without a leader to guide our people..."

4 - also is this sentence redundant? "Liberal arts is just as important in our society as science and technology....

Grammar, Usagemycmyc - Jan 27, 2007
"ART IS A FORM OF PROBLEM SOLVING"- Undergrad SOP/ Graphic Design

2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay -- congratulations! I have just a few suggestions to make it...

UndergraduatemmmmEF_Team2 - Jan 27, 2007
Speaking in Front of the Class - Advice for Novice Students

NEW - Someone told me once that more people are afraid of public speaking than are afraid of dying. Makes sense....

SpeechesEF_Team -
'Eleven' - A personal response essay about a short story

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback! I think I see what your professor is saying...

Book Reportsnbc4911EF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
"My weekend" - essay writing ideas

2 - Greetings! The hardest part about writing is getting started! First of all, give yourself permission to just get...

EssaysayshaEF_Team2 - Jan 25, 2007
Once I was....., now I am..... - Essay

3 - Wow! Great ideas!!! Thank you very much!!!...

Essaysoxylapkaoxylapka - Jan 25, 2007
'Influencing the future' - COMMON APP - Person with siginificant influence

3 - Thank you for your help...I really appreciate it. Especially the editing notes i'm terrible with those sort of things....

UndergraduateKdmaxwellKdmaxwell - Jan 25, 2007
Custom essay about my wallet

NEW - A wallet, or purse for some, is a precious item in which most people carry things more essential than...

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"The stangest thing i ever stole" - English Essay

3 - Greetings! Let me give you even more ideas:). What an interesting prompt! However, I can see how you...

EssaysgazzaEF_Team - Jan 23, 2007