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NEW - In comparison to the motto of Florida State, "Vires, Artes, Mores", I believe I have a close relation to...
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|Describing an object through a capitalist lens!
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EssaysdimitromEF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
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2 - You've got a unique premis here, but it could use some more personal details from you to really make...
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2 - I think you have a great essay here. You explain how this characteristic affects your life and give great...
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|'multifaceted culture' - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission; a vibrant community
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Undergraduatekotak07EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
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2 - Good evening. Grammatically and mechanically the essay is clean. If the word count allows, I suggest adding a...
Undergraduateekinkler90EF_Team5 - Sep 26, 2008
|'pelagic domain' / 'white uniform' / 'Russian math' - 3 UC Essays - Comment
2 - Good evening. In regards to the first essay, I believe your text answers the prompt effectively. You use...
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Undergraduateccw_20ccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008
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|Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice
2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....
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|Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay
3 - Good afternoon. Without having access to the lecture and notes, I have to say I think you've fulfilled...
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2 - My parents' influences in my academics is personified through me everyday; however, my loving sisters are responsible for my...
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Undergraduatejaw7000EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
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NEW - UCF We ask that you respond to two of the topics below. Your personal statement should be no longer...
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