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Multiple national and international awarded mathematical -Admission Resume

4 - it is too long and try to connect it with your career/profession...

LettersSimonaB - Dec 29, 2009chitown31 - Jan 9, 2010
What don't you know - a speech to God

25 - excellent essay, just write out there're and other thing like that...

Speechesowls - Dec 28, 2009chitown31 - Jan 9, 2010
Common App significant experience essay: My first horse show

3 - I learned that a success, no matter how small, can be used as motivation to keep up the hard...

UndergraduateEK44 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
NYU: movie 2050, anticipated academic program, short poem, New Yorker, summer

9 - Hey thank you smallick13! But it's too late, I already turned my essays in... gladly I changed Calvin Klein...

Undergraduatesakeloga - Dec 29, 2009sakeloga - Jan 9, 2010
CMC leadership essay. -- leader Andrew Carnegie

3 - You need to trim this first part: Having a An ability to manage myself and the volition to...

Undergraduatecourtain - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
Gates-unfair situation- I had a voice and I wanted it to be heard.

3 - Thank you for the suggestion. I can see where the teen rebellion comes into play, but the rest of...

ScholarshipNT159 - Jan 8, 2010NT159 - Jan 9, 2010
The Freeway Blues... Common App Essay... Critiques?

2 - ...and each one of us retreated within ourselves. That 3 word first sentence seems cool, but actually it...

Undergraduatebobbysoxrr - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
University of Michigan Long Essay - Brothers Karamazov

5 - ok..Here's my current draft ..just pretend the book titles are italicized: In the beginning, there were six of...

Undergraduatektcat4002 - Jan 8, 2010ktcat4002 - Jan 9, 2010
Summer of books and literature - Texas A&M essay topic A

5 - Decent essay, but you really didn't write about what they want. I mean what is the impact? you used...

Undergraduatesamisglam - Jan 2, 2010KingFire - Jan 9, 2010
Leadership.Football, School, Family

3 - thanx i really appreciate this you dnt kno how much this means to me...

Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010chuncky13 - Jan 9, 2010
'Spanish and Japanese language' - Contributing to a Cultural Community

3 - I would be able to make the community of the University of Washington different by bringing my experience of...

UndergraduateKirbyFreak - Jan 8, 2010jinglebells - Jan 9, 2010
Why Columbia and My Upbringing - The Columbia Short Answer and Essay

20 - read the guidelines. if you want to give a compliment, at least say why. Things like: this essay...

Undergraduateaa6877 - Dec 5, 2009yang - Jan 9, 2010
'Exploring writers' - Stanford-A Good place-Why?

4 - I think you have a great opening, and your passion is very sincere throughout the essay. Although describing the...

Undergraduatekldini - Dec 31, 2009ktcat4002 - Jan 9, 2010
MIT - Department of intrest

5 - I have always liked math. ----- weak sentence! Say something unforgettable in the first line. :-) It necessitates...

Undergraduatebirthdayattackr - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
UPENN - Jerome Fisher M&T: Business + Engineering (is it smooth & cohesive?)

3 - ...and interpret product profitability and product pricing. As a student of engineering, I also see the opportunity to augment...

Undergraduateekfoong - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
"Tell us about players and games" - Uchicago supplement

3 - ...and the joy of finally being able to afford a hotel on Park Place, something about this game had...

Undergraduateeskape - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
Die, orphan!

7 - Great use of language and very passionate!...

Undergraduatejampamz - Jan 1, 2010ktcat4002 - Jan 9, 2010
Biola Essay about spiritual growth- feedback

2 - We are in the circle of His world protected (from?) the evil things. I reminisce about the... ...

Undergraduateducksung - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
Auto-biography and serious advice

2 - lol, why so serious? haha how can you expect to remain anonymous when you've posted your...

Undergraduatei_m_mimi - Jan 9, 2010yang - Jan 9, 2010
U Michigan-Academic interest. Why Psychology?

4 - people's the grammar looks good, syntax seems without huge flaw. Now, I think that you should...

Undergraduateyoungkim9193 - Jan 7, 2010yang - Jan 9, 2010
"Trying not to be object of friends' joke"- Macalester' supplement

3 - Moving to a new land with the cultural differences is not easy for people at all. (no stating the...

Undergraduatemebrown - Jan 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
"life can change in an instant" - Trying to shorten my Penn State essay

3 - i cant believe i didnt see that mistake in the end, thanks dude you saved me! all those corrections...

Undergraduatepancho_zc - Jan 8, 2010pancho_zc - Jan 9, 2010
"enthusiasm toward Computers" - My Statement of purpose

2 - I think you might do better sometimes if you cut out the weak modifyers (adjectives and adverbs): Since my...

Graduatesm_mousavi - Jan 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
"I am a first generation college student" ; TRANSFER Objectives

2 - Admittedly, my starting point was later than most of my peers, and therefore I rushed into applications and decisions....

Undergraduatejessmanalang - Jan 8, 2010EF_Kevin - Jan 9, 2010
faced dyslexia, human psyche - University application essay

3 - 1) The word devastated must be changed. 2) "Every kid" sounds very typical. Make it a bit rhetorical and...

UndergraduateArjun - Jan 9, 2010marpals - Jan 9, 2010
My Father's story "essay on someone who made impact on me"

6 - thanks for the suggestion guys i really appreciate it...

Undergraduatesyookhong - Jan 5, 2010syookhong - Jan 9, 2010
An essay about Building up our Immune System.

8 - Thank you everybody for all your help! I really appreciate your prompt reply to my questions. Regards...

Writing Feedbackabd85 - Jan 6, 2010abd85 - Jan 9, 2010
'intellectual freedom' - ''interdepartmental concentration' Brown + academic interest

4 - physics is a big place, maybe you should mention some of the branches that fascinate you most. It sounds...

UndergraduateAMehj - Jan 3, 2010maXimumeXposure - Jan 8, 2010
My family, The world I come from. MIT essay.

17 - glad I could help, and I hope that you get accepted by MIT and your other schools!...

Undergraduatehern255 - Dec 12, 2009yang - Jan 8, 2010
Math and science - discuss the subjects in which you excel or have excelled

3 - I think you should write your accomplishments from excelling through this subject....

Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 6, 2010shaistak143 - Jan 8, 2010
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