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~Why I chose to attend UCF~ A Knight in Shining Armor

10 - Lol... I'm not frustrated by what you said. I appreciate your feedback. I'm getting frustrated because I don't know...

UndergraduateMieMie09 - Aug 29, 2009MieMie09 - Aug 30, 2009
UCF Admissions Essay: I Am a Bird

11 - I thought that might be the case. You'll just have to make do with the description of it, then....

UndergraduateMieMie09 - Aug 29, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
"the fast food industry" - english assignment

4 - What exactly do you need help with? As Simone pointed out, you have a clear next step laid out...

Letterssiofio - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
Topic to write on (RIC undergrad admission)

5 - You must have some sort of intellectual activity you enjoy, or specific subject matter you enjoy -- perhaps you...

Undergraduatelouiedasilva - Aug 28, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
The cruel and the heartless/ Significant risk or Ethical dilemma

8 - thanks for the criticism. I realize this wasn't as great of an essay as i thought it was, but...

Undergraduateomgitsshirleyy - Aug 28, 2009omgitsshirleyy - Aug 29, 2009
"Perseverance is failing 19 times and succeeding the 20th." Rhodes Scholarship Essay

7 - Hello Simone, Once again i am extremely thankful and truly appreciate your efforts in this regard.Thank you ever...

Scholarshipmuhammadhayat86 - Aug 24, 2009muhammadhayat86 - Aug 29, 2009
"My life full of wonderful events" - UF Admissions Essay

9 - To cut down on the word count, ask yourself what you want the essay to say about you, then...

Undergraduateionutalbu25 - Jul 28, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 29, 2009
Life's test and lesson - UF ESSAY ANALYZE!

7 - I feel you lack the explanation to how that experience will REALLY be a significant event that will contribute...

Undergraduatebmw - Aug 23, 2009ionutalbu25 - Aug 29, 2009
Shakespeare's Sonnets, Analysis

6 - The use of the first person is generally frowned upon in formal literary criticism for the reason it is...

Book ReportsNotoman - Aug 26, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 29, 2009
Major in economics - NYU supplement essay

6 - The point would be to pick somebody very famous -- past or present, real or fictional -- from...

Undergraduatesteve53 - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 29, 2009
"the count of monte cristo" - i need help on a thesis paper

4 - For what level of schooling are you writing this paper? Your thesis is fine but simplistic. In the U.S....

Book ReportsBeachBound4ever - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 29, 2009
'My management team and my prospects' - Baker College Admission Essay for Doctorate

3 - Skip the first line. Go through what you have now, editing ruthlessly to take out anything you don't need....

Graduatetinamiller1 - Aug 28, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
What grade will i get in my exams?

6 - ok, i do my best to post some essay here...

Student Talkaysha - Dec 20, 2006jeffrey L - Aug 28, 2009
Personal statement fot Residency (Medicine)

6 - I have seen they like specifics as well as introducing yourself. Like you are going to an interview and...

Graduatesabinanb - Aug 25, 2009tinamiller1 - Aug 28, 2009
Spanish Language proficiency

15 - Once you have left helpful comments for two other forum members, then you can start your own thread...

Writing Feedbacksad_an6el - Aug 17, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
The relationship between an organization and environment - essay

9 - The first sentence is awkward, due to the lack of an article in front of "business environment" and the...

Writing FeedbackTarunPathak - Jun 21, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 28, 2009
Andover High School; My summer - Umichigan Application

10 - Thank You!!...

Undergraduatebrendali92 - Aug 22, 2009brendali92 - Aug 28, 2009
"About being American" - UC Essay Prompt #1.

9 - yeah i think the ending ideas are a good start (you basically got the idea down).. but the problem...

Undergraduatehakyo - Aug 13, 2009ninnin - Aug 28, 2009
'money and riches' - What Is the Purpose of Higher Education?

5 - If you seperate your paragaphs by an empty line then it's clearer & easier for everybody to read. In...

Writing Feedbacktho91 - Aug 25, 2009tuanlnc - Aug 28, 2009
Very short response to Brown supplement

8 - I am openly gay and I see where your going with this and I back you up. It's just...

Undergraduatehewittdy - Aug 22, 2009louiedasilva - Aug 28, 2009
What History Means to Me

6 - That's okay. The questions weren't rhetorical. Although, I have to question if laws against genocide are really meaningful. Most...

Essayslilmississues - Aug 27, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 28, 2009
"How you?"; my first two words to my first teacher in the US -- Common app essay

8 - The essay is well-written, and proof enough that you have mastered English. And that seems to me to be...

UndergraduateanaMorphine - Aug 25, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 27, 2009
Education career. Everyday you deal with kids and their challenging behaviors. Why put up with that?

4 - Meh. This is fairly dull. Why not recount a narrative about a student you taught, so that we can...

Writing Feedbackrvw1919 - Aug 27, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 27, 2009
"been there for my friends" - Transfer essay

5 - You might want to explain who Jane is a bit more clearly at the outset of the essay. The...

UndergraduateCalLover - Aug 27, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 27, 2009
Who has made you who you are today (my uncle)

6 - Hmm thats a good one. I really didn't want to choose my parents because it seems everyone chooses them....

Undergraduatefrancesca1465 - Aug 26, 2009francesca1465 - Aug 27, 2009
"decision to change schools" - common app additional info response

3 - I agree. If the focus of this optional essay is your decision to change schools and what you got...

Undergraduateeyitskat - Aug 27, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 27, 2009
Signif. Experiences: Bitter and Sweet--UF application-suggestions?

11 - Thank you for your suggestion, Llamapoop. I will try to rework the introduction, although, some have hinted that mentioning...

Undergraduatejankrav - Aug 17, 2009jankrav - Aug 27, 2009
Common Application Essay - What lead me to my goal?

24 - yeh dont mention things to make it sound like people will pity you. i like the references to the...

UndergraduateLoliT - Aug 19, 2009eyitskat - Aug 27, 2009
Green Bay, Help with UC-Berkeley Admission Essay

15 - Here's my problem with this sentence: The story of Adam and Eve is not universal and absolutely does...

Undergraduatewienaar - Aug 21, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 27, 2009
Research Exerience and Plans

4 - I would replace this -- which doesn't really say anything -- with a sentence that summarizes the research...

GraduateM Ehsan ul Haq - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 27, 2009
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