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Applying to Rutgers Fall 09; 'vibrant and vivacious community'

11 - It's not snobby to sing your own praises in an admission essay!...

UndergraduateSnowblind - Jun 3, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
Narrative Essay - having lunch with any famous person

7 - In my experience, writing an essay n the form of a dialogue is so rarely done that the author...

EssaysPsypomp - Jun 12, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
Yet another CBEST Essay - an unforgettable person you have encountered in life

4 - This is not the essay that I wrote for the CBEST test. I have been working to improve since...

Writing Feedbackrolandj727 - Jun 12, 2009rolandj727 - Jun 12, 2009
Letter to Superintendent re: extending high school to 5 years

4 - thankssssssssss...

Lettersjud - Jun 11, 2009silentheart - Jun 12, 2009
Master' s Degree in Social Work - admission essay

3 - You say that "During my work period I got an opportunity to closely observe every political, criminal and social...

UndergraduateJoe_7 - Jun 12, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
'my passion for teaching and working with children' - Graduate Essay (Dept:special education)

6 - Once you have given help or feedback to another user, you will be able to start a thread of...

Graduatejopez - Jun 10, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
Research paper on HR related topics

6 - I don't understand. How is that an HR related topic?...

Research Paperszujaja - Jun 9, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
My first essay exercise - "we learn our most important lessons in school?"

3 - I'd get rid of phrases such as "give the devil his due" too. I'm more concerned by grammar...

Writing FeedbackHellANgel - Jun 10, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 12, 2009
CBEST personal essay - an unforgettable person you have encountered in your life

13 - Notice: Several people have now repeatedly told you to omit that first paragraph, which says nothing. That's good advice....

Writing Feedbackbubuvio - Jun 9, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 11, 2009
War -- victor or no victor?   2

45 - Yeah, I'm going to keep a low profile in classes where there aren't multiple choice tests, from now on....

Writing FeedbackMustafa1991 - May 18, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 11, 2009
TOEFL - should history be a mandatory course to university students?

5 - But how would this be of any use to international students? Bear in mind that universities often have a...

Writing Feedbackrealele - Jun 9, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 10, 2009
"Going the extra distance" - research paper -- and customer service

11 - I agree with you -- I just dislike the prejudice against wikipedia, that's all, and wouldn't avoid citing it...

Research Paperspurfec8gel - Jun 8, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 10, 2009
King Lear naivety and inability to control his emotions (ENG4U class)

17 - And, Romeo -- Don't forget to pay the favor forward by helping others with their essays!...

Book Reportsfallin_romeo - May 26, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 10, 2009
Essay "The Library is a Shed of Knowledge"

4 - I would like to read how someone can find a book at the library or how the library is...

Essayssepti - May 24, 2009bubuvio - Jun 10, 2009
Need pointers for a persuasive speech in getting a patron for life

6 - Prior experience in a field is always a good thing to mention when trying to get a job, so...

SpeechesSChrissie - Jun 6, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 10, 2009
I have trouble developing a thesis statement for Oedipus the King

10 - Again, though, you might want to post your outline so that we can let you know if you are...

Book Reportsck65438 - Jun 8, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 10, 2009
ielts essay: Should students be taught to compete or to cooperate?

5 - Don't call your mistakes "stupid." Making mistakes is how we learn. I'm glad you are feeling more confident....

Writing Feedbackwudan - Jun 9, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 10, 2009
UC Personal Statements: Suggestions for revising?

6 - You know, in Sociology there's a "Front and backstage." People would rather not hear things which make them...

UndergraduateTachy - May 27, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 10, 2009
Essay response to Thoreau - "Does adulthood takes away the true spirit of life?"

5 - Threre are plenty grammar errors. For example: - convey a sense of nostalgia *for* - childhood is...

Writing Feedbackcarladguez - Jun 9, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 10, 2009
Essay about: what would you change of your former high school?

12 - Yeah, I concur with the previous comments. You can't get flashy with words until you've mastered basic sentence...

Writing Feedbackivan9210 - Jun 6, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 9, 2009
Traveling in a group led by a tour guide give us a safe, useful and exciting excursion & save time

7 - Or Tour guides possess professional knowledge of an city that allows them to avoid dangerous areas....

Writing Feedbackthinhthanh92 - Jun 4, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 9, 2009
comparing the tragic flaws in Hamlet and Gatsby

15 - It helps too if you can find some connection between the similarities and differences. So, "Despite having the same...

Essaysangel_diamonds - Jun 8, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 9, 2009
UCF Essay:Why did you choose to apply to UCF? ("Christmas 1997")

3 - Right, you say that ECF has "much to offer." If you really did look at a lot of different...

UndergraduateDeMoney30 - Jun 8, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 8, 2009
IELTS essay : Nowadays majority of people are trying to live in the cities

6 - You have a decent essay structure, and while you do have some grammatical errors, they tend not to interfere...

Writing Feedbackferocious12 - Jun 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
short answer on extracurricular activities (need to reduce the word count)

3 - To make this a real learning experience, compare Gautama and Notoman's versions -- which stay close to your own...

Undergraduateadanne1990 - Jun 8, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 8, 2009
Personal Essay/Personal Statement, "connection between me and science"

10 - Okay, but you see how the original phrasing was confusing. Simone and I each interpreted it differently, and we're...

Undergraduateadanne1990 - May 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
Simple ways of improving my writing and structure.

8 - For metaphors, the key is to draw on words that already have strong symbolic associations. So, if you just...

Grammar, UsageIanUk - May 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
Making life better

5 - Yes, yes it is. :-) Feel free to post a revised draft here for more feedback....

Writing Feedbackbon - Jun 6, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
Hamlet Theme Paper - appearance vs reality

6 - Start by looking for any quotations from the play that seem to deal with appearance versus reality. Then, ask...

Book Reportsarashk208 - Apr 27, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
Relationship between commerce and culture in Early Modern Europe

5 - Do some research and try to come up with a first draft, even if you just write out whatever...

Essaysmrelbows - Jun 7, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 8, 2009
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