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Fall 2009: UCF ADMISSIONS ESSAY. 2 questions only.

4 - However, growing up as a teenager in Huntsville, Alabama and Seminole, Florida made it hard to... The Caribbean...

Undergraduatesweet_aisho - Apr 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2009
Galaxies and Stars - BC essay. your career and academic goals.

4 - Hey, I think this sentence does not need the "unfortunately": Well, unfortunately it took me 16 years to understand...

Undergraduatenewsha31 - Apr 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 29, 2009
Personal Statement for studying PhD in Chemical Engineering

4 - Having the opportunity to study at the top Engineering Faculty in the XXX, close collaboration with global energy companies...

Graduateashshah - Apr 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 28, 2009
talk about someone in your family who you admire

8 - The part of your essay I've excerpted above is really strong -- it deals in specific details that...

Speechesdvizeu - Apr 26, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 28, 2009
The Effects of Violent Movies

9 - i have to do a similar essay...i think you should write out an outline intro-thesis main body- write...

Writing Feedbacksilentheart - Apr 17, 2009ttc1234 - Apr 28, 2009
Scholarship Essay - My Perseverance Goal

8 - Your answer is excellent. Good job. It can't have been easy cutting down that much when you had so...

Scholarshipbabydoll - Apr 26, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
Observing or studying animals could teach us a lot about human nature: research

5 - It might help to define what you mean by "human nature." If you mean "that which makes us human,...

Research Papersflorazhou - Apr 27, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
Visiting Hoa Sen Charity Shelter

2 - Seeing their tears drop while they told tragic stories about their lives before being adopted into the shelter, I...

Undergraduatechinhnguyen7 - Apr 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2009
Spend more time working hard on jobs or stay with families?

10 - When family is in conflict with working， which one will you will pay more attention to and spend more...

Writing Feedbackflorazhou - Apr 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2009
Here's the Problem - an essay

3 - It is my children and their friends who have made me realize how different the coming world is going...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 26, 2007Rajiv - Apr 27, 2009
Financial anaysis essay (cash flows)

5 - I have no background in this area of expertise, but I can show where some words are missing: ...

Writing FeedbackAbby002 - Apr 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 27, 2009
The Scholarship Jacket

3 - "Throughout the course of life, individuals work towards a goal to reap its benefits. This reward is self explanatory...

Scholarshippatellio94 - Apr 26, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
People face a dilemma where do they get the best suggestion from?

10 - Okay, you say, "By taking suggestion from older friends, one has an excellent opportunity to learn about solving problems...

Undergraduateflorazhou - Apr 24, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
TOEFL essay - PR: from-books knowledge and experiential knowledge

6 - This is quite correct, as far as it goes. "In conclusion" is a lazy way of introducing the...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 20, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
"the right stuff" book report.

5 - bodydoll this is a book report, all quotes are from one author....

Book Reportsnewsha31 - Apr 26, 2009newsha31 - Apr 26, 2009
NASA Spinoff Technology

5 - Thanks Kevin. I added the sentences, corrected a few word errors (powered/powdered, premiere/premier, subcommitteE), and I am calling it...

Writing FeedbackNotoman - Apr 24, 2009Notoman - Apr 26, 2009
Goal setting is a powerful process; U Tirana/ AUBG (Broaden my global perspective)

4 - Another goal of mine is to get the training and education I need to perform any daily task. ...

Undergraduaterinori89 - Apr 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 26, 2009
Masters Program for Global Health

5 - The world is closer to a viral pandemic now than at any other ... non-communicable ...type two...

Graduateuakoma1 - Apr 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 26, 2009
We can know something about a person by the way he dresses.

18 - Thanks all for your great advice....

Writing Feedbackbinu - Apr 20, 2009binu - Apr 26, 2009
TOEFL Essay -Why go to university (career preparation, self-actualization)

7 - Well, i think in TOEFL essay, it is important to use conjunctions. May be instead of saying 'in conlcusion',...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 13, 2009Abby002 - Apr 26, 2009
Oedipus The King - a directors statement about the play

5 - thanks:) I will try that....

Book ReportsToastii - Apr 25, 2009Toastii - Apr 26, 2009
University students should be required to take history classes - essay

6 - Some points to consider: When summarizing the case against learning history in your first body paragraph, you might...

Writing Feedbackflorazhou - Apr 23, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 25, 2009
otto von bismarck and adolf hitler - essay on nationalism

3 - When you are researching for this, make sure to use a wide variety of sources, and quotes by the...

Essaysgacesaa - Apr 22, 2009macawtopia - Apr 25, 2009
Critique my current event paper (English Critical Thinking class)

5 - I am going to tackle your first paragraph. I think that it could read a little better with some...

Writing Feedbackbluek7 - Apr 24, 2009Notoman - Apr 25, 2009
English Comp. CLEP- literary decline

3 - Your grammar and style are solid as usual. The content is okay. I suspect for this sort of essay,...

Writing FeedbackSairaTasartir - Apr 22, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 25, 2009
Securing eCommerce transactions in Southern Africa

3 - I wouldn't know how to start this either! Research, like Sean said. You have to read about the efforts...

Dissertationssamgono - Apr 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2009
Locke and Rousseau

3 - He was a philosopher who had a lot of influence on ... He asserted that common sense should...

Writing Feedbackgacesaa - Apr 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2009
Austen's satire of society; Pride and Prejudice essay - Check

3 - Citizens--Criticizes... That's the kind of weird mistake that comes from over-zealous word processing program auto-correct functions. I hate those...

Writing Feedbackxeidus - Apr 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 24, 2009
Can I get away with recycling an old paper for a new assignment?

9 - I think you should try some other subject matter besides your old research paper. At least you know...

Grammar, Usagedhogan1971 - Apr 13, 2009babydoll - Apr 24, 2009
Mechanical Engineering "Plug and Play" essay

4 - Thanks for the input guys. I read the responses and I am thinking about it more deeply now. ...

Graduategoat - Apr 22, 2009goat - Apr 24, 2009
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