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Northwestern attracts me with its robust economics programme, renowned professors in the faculty

5 - the reasons you like one college are not necessarily all related to academics. You can look beyond facts (well-known...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 20, 2008batdoi - Dec 21, 2008
New York Short Answers (family characteristic, new event, talent show song)

3 - thank you once again!...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 20, 2008chickpig - Dec 21, 2008
Unique jointly awarded Economics Degree ;Why Carnegie Mellon?

4 - Thanks for the comments (:...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 20, 2008chickpig - Dec 21, 2008
'No peaceful moments in my house' - Common app - my experience, risk, or achievement

4 - Thanks for the comments....

UndergraduateSapphire - Dec 20, 2008Sapphire - Dec 21, 2008
Additional Information for Common Application (Malaysia and USA education)

6 - Thanks very much....

UndergraduateSapphire - Dec 20, 2008Sapphire - Dec 21, 2008
about me - There are certain things that I care a lot about.

3 - 1. Most importantly, they have never coerced me into doing anything I don't want I think 'Most importantly,...

Undergraduateprl - Dec 20, 2008aimar - Dec 20, 2008
'Hong-Kong and Toronto' - Common App short answer - activities

11 - I also want to mention that in my previous response I had made a mistake. I see that the...

Undergraduatepriscileung - Dec 12, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Common Application Essay- Free Response

5 - Oh, I understand! Okay, just checking about that... :)...

Undergraduategmailblows31 - Dec 17, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Need explanation on a scholarship question?

3 - Thank you I'll consider to answer those questions in my response :)...

Scholarship4ever2bleed - Dec 19, 20084ever2bleed - Dec 20, 2008
"walking around with a meaningless life" - Common App - Brown

4 - Great advice from joshua, thanks!! I thought they were all just splattered ink on a parched white paper,...

Undergraduatexsilverlovex - Dec 20, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
UPenn and MIT Short

NEW - Hi all. Two of the schools I am applying to are UPenn and MIT. I have a short answer...

UndergraduatePyramus - Dec 20, 2008 -
advice for Stanford essays (a sense of intellectual vitality)

2 - I watched Dracula when I was little, and it guided me into the world of imagination. When I...

UndergraduateAngela629 - Dec 20, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
"debating in university life" - elaborate on one of your activities

4 - Firstly, I have learnt to deliver my ideas clearly and support my position with facts and statistics . Secondly,...

Undergraduateanaraserik - Dec 18, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
"family of three people" is the world I came from - Computer Science - UVA

4 - I'll add one more suggestion: This sounds almost like it is not YOUR interest to pursue computer science,...

UndergraduateKobe24 - Dec 20, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Cornell University - intellectual interests and their evolution

3 - Yes, you write without errors. None that I saw, anyway. I think you could improve this by mentioning one...

Undergraduatemihirmj - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
500 characters NYU Supplement responses - grammar and content review

3 - Here is one more: It is in Mandarin, so for once she did not need anyone to translate...

UndergraduateJoycey - Dec 18, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
I finally became the "American" - Michigan-Describe a setback Essay

3 - Thanks joshua for helping jusanglee!! I could not understand a thing, and I had been expecting that, but...

Undergraduatejusanglee - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
"George Richman" - need revision help on writing a narrative

3 - During one summer day, Rich City was blooming with beauty. The trees are fully grown, everything is green, the...

Writing Feedbackyahman - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Essay on the Greate Gatsby novel

4 - ...and he also provides a contradictory view: "The whole town is desolate. You can take out the word...

Writing Feedbackyahman - May 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Common app elaborate one of your activities- my volleyball life

2 - Hi- I just noticed a few errors: "I have played been a part of several clubs, met different...

Undergraduateprl - Dec 20, 2008tiffanyh5849 - Dec 20, 2008
Georgetown "Why Georgetown" Essay needs help

4 - Well, let's thread it together with the physician theme: As a High school senior with aspirations to one...

Undergraduatesababy993 - Dec 18, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
BU essays (School of Management)

7 - This image of the boy scratching out letters is powerful. Perhaps it deserves a little more description: He...

Undergraduatesilversweet - Dec 16, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
NUS application's essay (Mid-Autumn Festival, a Vietnamese festival)

4 - Well, it is no surprise that you can write in a meaningful way, because even though your English is...

Undergraduateduy - Dec 18, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Common App essay---achievement on multiculture club

3 - Commas: Serious topics, like atomic physics or medieval art styles, were usually... Also: They laughed at our...

Undergraduatevanessa13 - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
"the tendency to assume leadership" - NYU supplement

3 - For the first one, check out this for inspiration: webtools.delmarlearning.com/sample_chapters/076682536 1_ch01.pdf For this part, I took out the...

Undergraduatenemrac - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
Getting brain dead on the Champaign essays

3 - Try starting like this: I have always been a passionate drawer and painter. or: I have...

Undergraduateadelewu - Dec 17, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
an intellectually stimulating environment - Chicago Essays

4 - Yes, they do indeed hold my interest! That is hard to do with this sort of writing. This...

Undergraduatechickpig - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
UIUC essay - "the best clarinetist"

3 - How about using two different paragraphs? That would make it like two little essays. The second paragraph can start...

Undergraduateballenas - Dec 19, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 20, 2008
UIUC essay#1 (Information Technology)

3 - Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I really appreciate it!...

UndergraduateKobe24 - Dec 20, 2008Kobe24 - Dec 20, 2008
Illinois Urbana Champaign Essay ("Blessed are the Peace makers")

3 - 'and ' should not be used at the start of a sentence.(second sentence). Between 'peace maker' and 'being kind....',...

Undergraduatemustaa - Dec 20, 2008Kikozang - Dec 20, 2008
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