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Oct 20, 2013
Writing Feedback / Argumentative Essay : Living on campus [8]
Had you opened the essay with a hook, this would have been a perfect introduction :)
... a very good point
First, living on campus is more cost effective. This helps students save money on room charges, utility bill payments such as electricity, Internet etc.
There are widely differing views on the issue of whether students should live on campus or not. Some people would suggest that it is more healthier to live off campus. However, i personally believe that living on campus have more benefit for students during college in terms of saving economically and good studying environment.
Had you opened the essay with a hook, this would have been a perfect introduction :)
Firstly, it can be argued that students can save more money when living on campus .
... a very good point
First, living on campus is more cost effective. This helps students save money on room charges, utility bill payments such as electricity, Internet etc.