justivy03
Jan 4, 2016
Research Papers / "Occassional depression versus major depression within adolescents" research paper [4]
Alyssa, as this is a rough draft, I would like you to make sure that your paragraph presentation
is clean and does not look crowded.
I suggest that you merge a few small paragraphs and make them whole bold ones.
Try to maximize your paragraphs and keep them properly and uniformly formatted so
that the paragraphs will look seamlessly readable and formal.
The research paper is definitely very raw, you need a lot more facts and data gathering to keep your paper
truthful and more of a research paper than an essay.
Also, keep an eye on the words you use and how you structure them in your sentence, as this will also
help in creating a successful paper.
Do post your final paper here so we can give you further assessment.
I hope my insights help!
Alyssa, as this is a rough draft, I would like you to make sure that your paragraph presentation
is clean and does not look crowded.
I suggest that you merge a few small paragraphs and make them whole bold ones.
Try to maximize your paragraphs and keep them properly and uniformly formatted so
that the paragraphs will look seamlessly readable and formal.
The research paper is definitely very raw, you need a lot more facts and data gathering to keep your paper
truthful and more of a research paper than an essay.
Also, keep an eye on the words you use and how you structure them in your sentence, as this will also
help in creating a successful paper.
Do post your final paper here so we can give you further assessment.
I hope my insights help!