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Oct 1, 2015
Writing Feedback / research of ITT qualifications in 2-year period [4]
Irham, you definitely need sentence structure, tense usage, and plural form help in this essay. Let me help you by revising the problem paragraphs below:
The chart illustrates the number of students living in Great Britain in order to obtain their teacher training qualifications during the years 2006 and 2006. The chart also showed the number of qualified male students. The information contained showed a change within the frames. The number of total qualified teachers dominated the figures, the gradual increase was revealed by Bed and other degrees.
In contrast, the number of males decreased steadilybetween FROM 8,065 DOWN TO 7,610.
- This paragraph is too short. You always need a minimum of at least 3 sentences to complete a full paragraph. You need to extend the information in this part.
Finally, 71.4% women qualifiers in 2005/6 for PGCE rose slowly to 72.9% in THE next year.
even though THE total and WOMEN NUMBERS jumped sharply with A gap OF about 500 females
percentages remained stable AT 1,000 males
fourteen percent, REPRESENTING the lowest portion
Irham, you definitely need sentence structure, tense usage, and plural form help in this essay. Let me help you by revising the problem paragraphs below:
The chart illustrates the number of students living in Great Britain in order to obtain their teacher training qualifications during the years 2006 and 2006. The chart also showed the number of qualified male students. The information contained showed a change within the frames. The number of total qualified teachers dominated the figures, the gradual increase was revealed by Bed and other degrees.
In contrast, the number of males decreased steadily
- This paragraph is too short. You always need a minimum of at least 3 sentences to complete a full paragraph. You need to extend the information in this part.
Finally, 71.4% women qualifiers in 2005/6 for PGCE rose slowly to 72.9% in THE next year.
even though THE total and WOMEN NUMBERS jumped sharply with A gap OF about 500 females
percentages remained stable AT 1,000 males
fourteen percent, REPRESENTING the lowest portion