justivy03
May 24, 2015
Writing Feedback / People Who Refuse to Pay Tax to The State [2]
- In general, people tend to be extremely critical when it comes to theirfinancialfinances .
- I narrow bunch of reasonsto down to two to explain why I come to disagree with this opinion.
- My first reason is the development of facility and infrastructure in the country.
- Rephrasing;
The following reason to support in paying tax to the country is public service sector, especially health. It turns out that the tax also pays for under prosperity citizens' medication.
The public service sector especially the health department should be taken huge amount of tax as they will end up taking it out from the citizens who seek their services.
- People can brag about lovingto thetheir country, but action speaks louder than words.
Trias, this essay is more of a reminder that we still need to work on linking the ideas and thoughts and turn them into a very good read for the readers.
Make sure that you proof read and mind the flow of your ideas, this will keep your readers to read through and will get your message across.
Keep writing
Cheers!!!
- In general, people tend to be extremely critical when it comes to their
- I narrow bunch of reasons
- My first reason is the development of facility and infrastructure in the country.
- Rephrasing;
The following reason to support in paying tax to the country is public service sector, especially health. It turns out that the tax also pays for under prosperity citizens' medication.
The public service sector especially the health department should be taken huge amount of tax as they will end up taking it out from the citizens who seek their services.
- People can brag about loving
Trias, this essay is more of a reminder that we still need to work on linking the ideas and thoughts and turn them into a very good read for the readers.
Make sure that you proof read and mind the flow of your ideas, this will keep your readers to read through and will get your message across.
Keep writing
Cheers!!!