I am transferring because I have discovered my academic and professional goals are not aligned with the institution where I currently study.

- The start is slightly blunt. I'm assuming that's what you're going for, and it could be a positive thing simply because it draws attention, but adding a catchy introductory sentence might make it a bit smoother.

While University of Kansas has a lot going for it-a big sports following, an EECS Department supported by Google, and a very warm student community-several components that I feel are key to my success in computer science are not an integral part of the school, and I seek an institution that better serves my academic and personal needs.

how are about my body part and the conclusion.
and can you give me an example such like this essay on definition of the question and expressing importance of the question

To begin with, thanks to the arrival of telephone, contacting people throughout the world has become feasible and convenient. Furthermore according to an authoritative report, mostly people would get attack by anxiety devoid of telephones. So the influence brought by telephones is notable and cannot be exaggerated more.

Do you agree that telephones are playing a more effective role than television in people's life?

I was fifteen year old

It was a defining moment for me,forbecause in my community, travelling abroad without family is a sure sign of reaching adulthood.

Reflecting on the time when my name was announced for this trip, I would be perfectly honest that my heart skipped a beat.

Water, as plain and dull as it may seem,it has got worlds submerged deeply into the darkness. /quote]
[quote=jorgearmando18]The thoughts don't leave; my memories haven't been able to fade even after 20 years, each day they were submerging deeply in my mind, and my soul

However, that dream came to a halt with his parents' decision toimmigratemigrate to the United States, and the Korean government could not trust him with a plane to fly with no family on ground.

I am aspired to do something with my life. No, it is my duty to do something exceptional with my life. I don't know whether that duty comes from a respect for my life and my parents who gave it to me or due to some sort of fear.

Power and I have a growing relationship of sorts. We have had some minor affairs like me leading group projects or taking care of my little brother. We have not however, gotten to the next level of saving starving children or doing something as large as making multi-million dollar company. Power is my temptress. It is a vital part of my life that I need if I want to fill that sense of duty I have. That's why it's my favorite word. It is one of my corner puzzle pieces that I know is essential for me to fill this puzzle that is life.

My uniquetrait is a one of a kind combination of skills and experience.

who is able to achieve their goals.

I started to sew clothes when I was 10 and never gave up making clothes since then. It's my vocation and I am really good at it. I have a deep knowledge of fabrics and sewing technologies as well as excellent drawing skills.

Who I Am?

I am a daughter, a sister, a mother, a student and a dreamer. I am the daughter of a single mother who came to the United Stated leaving everything behind to give her children a better life. I am the oldest of four siblings. I am a single mother of a playful, energetic, and loving two year old girl. I am a student currently working on an Associate's degree and planning to transfer to a four year college. I am a dreamer who hopes that one day she could make a difference.

I was twelve years old when my parents divorced and came to the United States with my mother and my three siblings.

During my first year living in Miami, school was something I wasn't very comfortable with, this was mainly because the educational system in my old school was completely different to the one in my new school. For me, to be placed as a freshman in a different and unexplored setting, made my process of getting accustomed to school very difficult and unpleasant.

But after knowing the various possibilities high school students have to start getting involved in college, I really wanted to improve my basic English, because language was not going to stop from what I wanted, which was to challenge myself.

Nowadays, several languages die out every year. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

I agree with mixed of these opinions.

Cheating helps people strengthen their minds with just a word , nothing else and everybody in this country has cheated at least once in his or her life even I did because no one in this world is so powerful to say that i have not cheated even once

Because when someone trie to tell and prove at that time , he remembers all those times he did .

cheating is just a way to help one in a case of such helplessness.

but it can be achieved by practice, your habit and hard work.

today she is one of the most well knownor renownd female singers.

From being a confident girl living in her hometown to become a foreigner was an idea that completely terrified me.

At the first years of puberty, most girls are busy thinking about school and talking with their girlfriends, while instead, I was preparing to say goodbye to my best friends and start wondering how my future would be like in the U.S, because I knew it wasn't going to be easy.

I come from a large family and I have many cousins who I am very close with.

Her older brother, my cousin, had committed suicide sometime during the night

I can remember feeling numb and I was in shock, none of it felt real. I didn't want to believe her and I almost didn't believe her, but I knew it was true.

We always think that for a happy marriage, two people must share many similarities. My parents have been married for twenty years and they have a happy marriage.

Their differences in appearance, personality, andway of living somehow worked well together.

As I got older, I realized that my father had a gambling problem and it resulted in my family losing a large amount of our family's income.

We lived minutes from the local casino and my father spent every night there blowing our money away on some flashing lights and false "ka-ching" noises.

Eventually, my mother couldn't handle his late nightsat the casino and my father moved out and into a motel.

Firstly, fresh water has to be used with care owing to itsless availability.

For example, in countries like India where there is shortage of water, people from the upper strata misuse the fresh water for sake of pools and other water related sports.

Do not over look me as a candidate for graduate school admissions due to my low GPA.

Communication between people by using telephones and email made my life easier.

My first experience with a physician assistant occurred during the summer before my second year of college...

Even when times were tough, my childhood spirit never diesdied .

Even when times were tough, my childhood spirit never dies. With all the problems going on in my life, I tend to ignore it by dancing. It was sort of my "getaway" from all the troubles I had. To me, dancing was something I can express myself in.

I am a wholecompletely different person once the music starts to play.

Stay awake! Keep mind clear! Aren'tDon't you want to be a mathematician? Learn it now! Now!"

Pursuing a degree in physical therapy always seemed to be an unreachable goal I set as junior in high school, but as I write this statement, I realize that the pursuit is only the beginning.

Michael Jordan once said, "I hope the millions of people I've touched have the optimism and desire to reach their goals through hard work and persevere with a positive attitude".

Slowly opening my eyes, I mentally cheer myself upon seeing the beautiful hand- made quilt I had been working on for months.

After my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer, I started _______, a non-profit, volunteer-run organization which makes and donates quilts to cancer patients.

I tie my last knot, hoping that this time, each stitch and block will be perfect. Slowly opening my eyes, I mentally cheer myself upon seeing the beautiful hand- made quilt I had been working on for months. After my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer, I started _______, a non-profit, volunteer-run organization which makes and donates quilts to cancer patients. Since day one, quilting has challenged my perseverance:

I still remember saying goodbye to my mom at the airport all of those years ago. As a 9-year old I barely understood what was going on, my mom was leaving to another country and I was staying behind. My grandma tried to explain that my mother was leaving so that we could have a better future, 9-year old me pretended to understand.

School is a field of acquiring knowledge by applying some crucial methods such as testing and examining system.

There are many reasons of which i am going to mention in the statement.

The pie chart illustrates the opinions of various people about how tuition fees show be divided among society's member.

As a denizen of eastern Massachusetts, I personally love the metro life that Boston can offer me:

Boston University itself also seems like a perfect fit for my self.

People hardly ever interested in changing their lives.

It is their naturalnature to avoid any potential unexpected problems that could be happenedhappen if they changedchange their life style.

But in my opinion, I strongly believe changes are virtually inevitable and resistingit would solelyonly make the problems even worse.There are two main reasons to support my idea .

In my elementary years, I recall being the primaryfirst student to always complete the multiplication, addition, subtraction, and division quiz sheets and perform very well on all of them.

My inspiration has come from my mother, who has persevered through struggle to become the accomplished woman she is today

My inspiration has come from my mother, who has persevered through struggle to become the accomplished woman she is today. Like her, I want to "give back" to the community in indirect, but important ways.

i studied the rule of forum that we should not put any repetitive topic
earlier than me,someone else had put essay with the name "telling the truth" , i read that thread but it was closed because i wanted to
put my essay to be reviewd there, anyway, hopefully moderators consider some solutions for these situations that what should we react.

Hi Pahan
Sorry for that..yep....this is the full title:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.

holding that it can reduce the barriers between people from different cultures and people .

Admittedly, the reduction in the number of languages may bring the world closer, which will result in the assimilation of different cultures. Still, based on the fact alone, the statement remains challenged when more aspects are taken into consideration.