dumi
Jul 24, 2013
Writing Feedback / People have so many possibilities. We can learn new things by only writing the term in Google Search [7]
As others have xpressed it's important to include your prompt so that others know how to align their feed back with what your prompt requests. Also, the essay structure for this task is diferent from what you've used here. You need to introduce your topic briefly in the introduction and express your opinion there. Then move into body paragraphs where you give one reason(each para) to justify your opinion. Then support those reasons with examples. Then write a conclusin to reinforce your position sumingup yuoressay to conclude Iit.
As others have xpressed it's important to include your prompt so that others know how to align their feed back with what your prompt requests. Also, the essay structure for this task is diferent from what you've used here. You need to introduce your topic briefly in the introduction and express your opinion there. Then move into body paragraphs where you give one reason(each para) to justify your opinion. Then support those reasons with examples. Then write a conclusin to reinforce your position sumingup yuoressay to conclude Iit.
