KathyLala
Mar 2, 2011
Writing Feedback / "School Bells " - kindergarten essay [7]
Hi Kevin! Thanks for encouraged saying that I don't have much errors
This is not my writing,=>"Being inclined to bark, whine, have embarrassing accidents, and noisily lick themselves, students should not bring their dogs to class." Someone gave and challenged me what wrong with it a month ago. I was stuck, I really didn't know what wrong with it. Nevertheless, now I laugh out loud when I read it because, absolutely, students cannot bark and lick themselves. I failed CBEST writing, which is a required test for candidate teachers. There were three portions, but I passed two, which were math and reading 6 years ago. I will retake the exam next month, there are always two essay topics, one is an argument, the other is naration. Sometimes I passed one essay, but the exam requires passing two essays at the same time. However, lately I feel very low confident. My heart was pounding and beating hard; my hands sweated when I was given the exam. My head mentally popped up the word "FAIL", and my mind went blank. I am afraid of my next exam if I have the same eposide
Hi Kevin! Thanks for encouraged saying that I don't have much errors
This is not my writing,=>"Being inclined to bark, whine, have embarrassing accidents, and noisily lick themselves, students should not bring their dogs to class." Someone gave and challenged me what wrong with it a month ago. I was stuck, I really didn't know what wrong with it. Nevertheless, now I laugh out loud when I read it because, absolutely, students cannot bark and lick themselves. I failed CBEST writing, which is a required test for candidate teachers. There were three portions, but I passed two, which were math and reading 6 years ago. I will retake the exam next month, there are always two essay topics, one is an argument, the other is naration. Sometimes I passed one essay, but the exam requires passing two essays at the same time. However, lately I feel very low confident. My heart was pounding and beating hard; my hands sweated when I was given the exam. My head mentally popped up the word "FAIL", and my mind went blank. I am afraid of my next exam if I have the same eposide