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EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jul 8, 2015
Faq, Help / Does my new essay have to be merged with my old one? [4]

1. The meaningless post/s were removed; we don't want to host useless messages in other students' threads. Once they were removed, your account was suspended. Read the TOS (link in the footer) for more details.

2. It may be a different college but you used a lot of the SAME sentences in both essays. For example, the paragraph that starts with:

"{COLLEGE} strong emphasis on core courses will develop my foundation on different functions, including finance and strategy..."

IF the essays were completely different, they could belong in separate threads; but since you've copied the same parts in both essays, they have been merged.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jul 8, 2015
Faq, Help / Does my new essay have to be merged with my old one? [4]

1. You created two usernames to avoid helping other students; if you continue your IP will be suspended.

2. Essays on the same topic must be posted in one thread, regardless of their length.

EssayForum
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jan 25, 2015
Grammar, Usage / A proper use of the word "tribute"!? [4]

It might be better to use only one exclamation point (unless you are really excited about the message ;).
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jan 15, 2015
Faq, Help / Is it safe to post my essay here? Or should I be worried about Plagiarism? [175]

Hello, we couldn't find your essay posted on other websites. You may post a link and we'll check this out. Thank you.

You cannot plagiarize yourself, so if you are the original author of the essay you posted (and if the name associated with your account is correct), it's not considered plagiarism.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Dec 9, 2014
Grammar, Usage / "put" grammar usage [4]

Your suggestion sounds fine; you could also use:

"Could you assign me to another position?"
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Oct 17, 2014
Undergraduate / FELLING OF COCOON TO ADULTHOOD [8]

English is my second language, hope I get help on this forum.

You haven't helped any other student yet, so please don't expect a priority treatment (priority is given to students who make an effort and help other students).
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Aug 3, 2014
Faq, Help / How do you get a credit on EF? [8]

I believe it also means that I need to pay still.

You are correct. An Urgent thread (it would always appear above all other threads and a qualified person is guaranteed to answer it) requires a paid credit. On the other hand, a Featured thread doesn't require a credit but requires at least 2 Likes.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jan 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / Government support for the elderly. Agree or disagree ? [8]

Mandatory deduction of some money can be set up by the government from the monthly earnings of an individual and settle them while the person retires from employment.

You may need to expand on that (because federal taxes and Social Security taxes can already be considered as 'mandatory deduction of some money').
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Nov 30, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'Making money first' - IELTS- task 2 cause and effect writing [4]

government can legislate some laws and methods to deal with the lowest birth rate

What about the fact that the same governments claim the world is overpopulated? You might want to add a paragraph on that to make the essay more balanced.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Sep 29, 2013
Faq, Help / Is it safe to post my essay here? Or should I be worried about Plagiarism? [175]

In response to this question:

"I have written two essays and would like a review. My question is how can I keep others from taking my entire essay and using it as their own if anyone on the internet can see it? I don't mind others seeing my essay after I start college (ensuring someone doesn't take my essay and submit it before I do)."

In simple terms:

1. You post your essay under YOUR OWN name (the one found in your profile).

2. The essay is indexed in search engines within several minutes to make sure it shows your name and the publication date.

3. Now - EVEN IF - someone copies your essay, they cannot claim they were the authors because the essay had already been published under your name and in the past date. Of course, it only applies to content that has never been published before (ie. you are not allowed to copy an existing essay/content from another site and post it here).

It works the same in other online publications; you may copy-paste an article from the New York Times but if you tried to claim authorship, you would not be able to prove it (and you would be put in jail for theft ; ).

EF
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jun 24, 2013
Faq, Help / How do you get a credit on EF? [8]

Karan Goel, there is no need to reply to your own threads. You are a troll indeed and both of your accounts have been suspended.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Apr 26, 2013
Faq, Help / How do you get a credit on EF? [8]

You may visit this page: essayforum/index.php?action=transactions and purchase a credit.

EF
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Dec 23, 2012
Faq, Help / Why are some people getting suspended? [45]

Moderators suspend such users every day, so there's no need to report them individually. He was just suspended, too, and his comment was removed from your essay.

EF
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Dec 13, 2012
Faq, Help / How do I delete a thread? [40]

Please check again the Terms of Use you agreed to before you signed up and posted the essay (point #6): https://essayforum.com/disclaimer-privacy-tos/
We improved the system so now you don't have to pay - all you have to do is to get a few Likes and delete a thread without a fee.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Oct 27, 2012
Undergraduate / 'I took and passed the gifted test' - UF admissions [5]

i didn't realize that first mistake, it made me laugh (: thanks again!

If you like Annah's post - why don't you Like her (click on the Like button ;).
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Oct 27, 2012
Undergraduate / 'loving the lower class' - UMich Essay- Community you belong [4]

'I am a part of it.'

I love the lower class and I can tell you why .

The essay may seem a little confusing. One one hand you love the lower class, on the other you dream of something else. You'd have to make it more clear, eg. what if you become successful? What are the ultimate rewards?
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Aug 27, 2012
Faq, Help / EF Contributing is AWESOME...so how do i become one??!! [10]

Hello,

We're sorry for the delay. We thought we had sent you a request to provide a short bio + a picture of yourself (optional). Once we receive the information, we'll be happy to set you up!

Thank you,

EssayForum.com
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jul 18, 2012
Faq, Help / How do I contact with any member in this forum? [7]

plz guide me, how can i contact with a member in this forum? I need to contact with some of the users in this forum. Thanks in advance.

Due to spam we do not allow members to be contacted. But Contributors may contact each other at any time ;).
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Jun 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'change the world?' - What would you tell your founding fathers prompt? [104]

Do you think the essay is better though?

The problem is - you will NEVER be satisfied. The more you revise the already well-written essay, the worse it gets. There is nothing like a 'PERFECT essay' - you can try and ask two or more different professors to grade your essay, and the grade will be different.
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
May 23, 2012
Faq, Help / Access denied and password change question [16]

how can i change my password?

Click on the "Profile" link (in the upper-right corner of the screen) and change password yourself at any time :)
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Apr 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / IELTS topic. Smoking tobacco, like other dangerous drugs, should be made illegal. [4]

To sum up, even if tobacco stimulates the mind, body and spirit for a short period of time, in the long run, smoking is the most addicting and killing habit.

How about video games, the Internet, coffee, or sweets? All of these can be 'addicting and killing habit' - maybe they should be made illegal too..?
EF_Team  [Moderator]  
Feb 4, 2012
Faq, Help / How do you edit your post? [13]

You can edit a post within 10-15 minutes, not a few days..

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