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Different cultures and ethnic groups live together in one country; GOOD or BAD? [3]
are getting filled of a mixture of cultures, all brought by immigrants.
filled up with a...,.
Secondly, the benefits of
a multicultural society, people with various cultures contribute in multiple ways to development because they bring with them different sets of skills , characteristic as well as knowledge .
Las
t but not the least, people broaden each others' horizon by exposing a larger audience to the traditions of their own country. People
have (
get a ) precious chance to learn particular features of each other,
In a word (
you need to change it... it can be reported as a mistake. ..) , multiculturalism is not restricted within national boundary, it happens in any nations . The opposite of a mixture of multiple cultures is
unavoidable (
inevitable ) , On the other hand ,
it contribute
s a peace and equal
ity in society and allow themselves to interact and affiliate closely with public community .
=>you are good at writing at expressing overall but hace a lot more capacity to improve
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