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Name: Holiliy
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Last Post: Sep 19, 2015
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Liliy   
Sep 19, 2015
Research Papers / Help me choose a research question for a thesis from specified topics [8]

Let me help you make some possible question, if i might become examiner for 1/ Technology and the human mind topic. these are just my imagination so as to help you. Therefore, you have to find from book or journal to get the corelation between the question and the fact or theory in some books.

1. If you have an opportunity to stay away with poverty people what will you do with technology to develop their live ? which a part of technology will you use?

2. is it possible that technology will be a part of life in human while there are a lot of disadvantages on it especially for children's habit?

3. How will be possible technology becomes an anourmos part to tackle flood in inland area especially flood disaster?

I hope that these will help you to build your ideas for your thesis.
Liliy   
Apr 29, 2015
Writing Feedback / Foreign language might be an imitation of culture and fashion of another country [3]

Hi Amir .. let me give you some suggestion here. i hope that will be help you to master your writing.

Learning new language is one of most important subject that are considering both educational authority and parentsLearning a new language is the most important value for young children.ButHowever, every new language has several impact on people's life specially young people who are still immature who need to help to choose the right way and make a good decision.

Globalization is common phenomenon in this modern era Which caused disappearing boundaries between countries and people. So, for this reason, for young people thatwho are making shape your personality in this period of life community isare one of the most aspects ofobtaining this goal that drives to learn new language that might be an imitation of culture and fashion of another country that causes identity divergence.you can try to straight to the point and try to make your sentence shorter and clear . Furthermore, getting involve with new language takes a lots of time and energy of younger that can be useful for them in another skills such as cooking, computer skills, sporting and so on.

For acquisition new knowledge and being up to date with new information in study and research in university it is necessary for younger to learn new language.Increasing new language and keeping up to date with the latest information in study or research in university are enormous values for youngster to learn new language. These days, educational research and attend in congress is rely on translation, studying new papers and articles and so in order to reach this ability they have to learn new language. AdditionallyIn additiontry trying to learn new language help young people to develop their learning skill ability includes reading, writing and speaking that help them to use beneficially such sources like internetsome sources information such as the Internet , andmakemaking friendship with foreigners that leads to spread their viewdevelop their mind about life and get good experiences. and also with participateparticipating in language institute they can interactive with different people and teachers who are very helpful for being socialized skillful and help them to be a successful person in society).

In conclusion in my point of view learning new language can be extremely useful for younger that educational Authority must pat more attention for that and also parents must get considered to encourage their children for learning new language not only in young age but also when they are child.As a final point, although learning new language can be extremely useful for youngster, educational authority such as school should pay more attention for this case. Furthermore, parents not only encourage their children to learn a new language since they are young, but also when they were child.

I suggest you to give 2 space for each paragraph to make easily reader understand your writing.
Cheers!
Liliy   
Apr 25, 2015
Writing Feedback / Writing task 2 : Traffic congestion and pollution on atmosphere [2]

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

what other measures do you think might be effective?


Increasing traffic on the road and pollution on the atmosphere become enormous problems. For this reason, a straight solution should be taken to deal with those problems such controlling the amount of petrol. While as far as I am concerned, it will be viable solution, I firmly believe that other solutions may become priory solution for those cases.

As a matter of fact, controlling the amount of gasoline in societies consumption exerts an influence decreasing both of the problems.
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Liliy   
Apr 19, 2015
Writing Feedback / Natural talents 'available' for every person? IELTS [2]

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person of musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Every person has a unique ability since they were born to the earth. For this reason, some people believe that a great number of people are born with natural talents such as master in sport or music. While that will be acceptable by some people to claim it as sport players or musician can be mastered by teaching them, there is no doubt in my mind that all of people have given a special talent in themselves. Thus, this essay will examine both points of view.

To begin with, individuals with unspecific talent can master one skill if they do not underestimate themselves. Physiology for talent in Harvard University shows that 85 % of societies in the world only uses 30 % of the total their abilities. As a result, to appear people with unspecific talent they should encourage themselves without give themselves up with limitation.

Furthermore, a specific talent can be taught by people. An international talented research, conducted by Colorado physiologist Institute in America shows that almost specific talents can be learned by using technology such as 3D biomorphic which is educated football players uses 3Dvisual on a screen. As it can be seen from the instance, using sophisticated technology people can develop themselves to be better.

On the other hand, having natural talent makes people more easily to undergo professional talents such golfers or football players. First of all, their abilities are better than common people. It can make them to have more opportunities becoming master at some talents such as Leonel Messi with natural born skill in football. Secondly, mastering specific talent makes people have more responsible to teach other people. Natural skill will lead people with natural skill to give a spirit to their environment particularly people with unspecific talent.

In conclusion, although some people might not have well ability like people with natural talents, people should pay attention to others without specific skill with educating them that they also have better abilities.
Liliy   
Apr 19, 2015
Writing Feedback / The best way for children to learn a new language is when they start in an earliest grade [3]

Hi thuty .. i have several suggestion here.. i hope this can help you to improve your writing.

All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earliest grades.Could you give a clear task here, agree or disagree / discuss/ others

Language is one of the communication tools in all country in the world. Several people believe that student must study different languages in primary school because this the best time for put knowledge for them. However, others think that children in primary school need to explore their wish like because this age golden for them. Therefore, I personally argue that the best way to children for learning second language when they in earliest grades.Language is a widely value of communication. For this reason, some people assume that students must study numerous languages in primary school due to golden age of children. While, others believe that youngster should obtain the best treatment as their ways to get better life, I personally argue that the best way to children getting enormous language education is in the earliest grades.

I suggest you to make simple and clear your introduction, and then your body paragraph will be better.

Cheers!
Liliy   
Apr 18, 2015
Writing Feedback / Local customs and behavior are indispensable to be regarded by people who come to other countries [2]

Hi adhisti .. let me give you some suggestion here

Many people consider that local customs and behavior are indispensable to be regarded by people who come to other countries. However, other people assume that it is not neededOthers think that it is not appropriate due native people have to give more respect with cultural differencesbecause cultural differences have to be accepted by the host country . While these views developyou mean is appear ? in society, in my opinionthere is no doubt in my mind that people must have both characters where they give tolerance to each other about different cultures and follow local traditions.

There are some reasons whygive sentence opening here from sentence connector people have to follow other cultures in different countries. Firstly, culture is the heritagea cultural heritage from early inhabitants that are always done in society. They believe that it is one of the way to preserve their cultures. For instance, Jogjakarta city in Indonesia, the Jogjakarta societies really keep the way of behave between elder and younger people. The visitors from other countries must respect toward this condition, so they can learn this as their new knowledge. In addition, customs and behavior reflect the unique culture of the country in which other people should give an honor to the experience they can take. it is better explanation if you give more sentences

I hope that can help you..
Liliy   
Apr 16, 2015
Writing Feedback / Outers influence native culture - foreigners may face difficulties to pick local customs up. [2]

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


These days, learning other cultures is important for people. For this reason, a great number of people assume that people from other countries have responsible to follow local culture particularly customs and behavior when it comes to visiting other places. While other people cannot accept this statement and think that native people should appreciate with the differences, this essay will examine about the perspective.

To begin with, learning and following the differences of culture can cope misunderstanding between out-land and native people. Cultural study of Indonesian University shows that 80 % of people who master foreign culture can easily meet the demand with cultural shock from local customs and native behavior. As mastering cultures is becoming more and more important for people, they should respect to the differences of culture.

Furthermore, some customs and behavior are mirror of the societies. Result shows that almost societies in developing countries have local culture with a wide range structures each other. As visitors should know all of the culture in this country to reduce misunderstanding, local people also have considered to respect with out-land people.

On the other hand, common people should aware that we live in multiculturalism. The first, host of country cannot despite cultural differences with not welcome to visitors. Open minded as local people can educate themselves about new culture of other people. Second of all, cultural differences will make a fast assimilation. It can affect changing environment from close minded to open minded. In addition, making possibilities to increase local economy which will lead to better life.

As a final point, it seems to me that although visitors have more responsible to study other cultures on how other people's customs and behavior, native people should respect that sometimes out-land people may face difficulties to pick culture up.
Liliy   
Apr 16, 2015
Writing Feedback / Should students as young as fourteen be allowed to hold jobs? [2]

Hi phana .. I am tremendously enthusiastic about your writing, but let me give you some suggestion here

Children are the future of a nation, ethnic groupChildren are the asset of futureyou are better to choose one " future of a nation or ethnic group . Therefore, you can change with " As such or for this reason" they need well education and well prepared from a young agedo you mean "childhood"byfor or with good study and good moral development. However, there are so many children have to work at a young age, an age that supposed to be learning and playing. I strongly believe that students as young as fourteen should not be allowed to hold job.While, some children may work in young age that supposed as learning and playing, i firmly believe that "Students or young people as the subject?" should not be allowed to hold a job.

There are now many different mixed opinions on this issueIn conclusion, although a great number of variant perspective happen to this issues, students also can work as an education way. . Some people said that students should have work to do . However, I firmly believe that students should not be permitted to work because it is not their duties at the age of teens, it is too not safe for them to workif you want to make conclusion, it will better giving suggestion of fear to stakeholder or societies .

give 2 spacing for each paragraph, it can help riders easy to read your writing.

I hope that these will help you ..
Liliy   
Apr 16, 2015
Writing Feedback / The budget of staying averages in two different towns as compared to the national cost-of-living [3]

Hi Tia, Is your writing about writing task 1? could you give the picture here .. it is quite difficult to give suggestion.

In general, there are six categories : groceries, housing, utilities, transportation, health care and clothing, and Riverdale has more the percentage of cost-living than Cape Alicia. i suggest you to give 2 sentences here as your overview
In addition, there are two categories have the percentage just under 1 percent, they are housing and transportation. you need more word here, .. separate your paragraph into 2 paragraph is better to make sure your writing clear

Liliy   
Apr 15, 2015
Writing Feedback / Writing task 2 : Encouraging young people to work or travel [3]

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.


Nowadays, a great number of pupils have decided to find a job or go to travel as long as a year after graduated from junior high school before going to university. Therefore, this essay will examine the drawbacks and benefits from this argument.

As a matter of fact, young people may feel more tired so as to continue their education through university due to traveling. A survey conducted at Traveler magazine in 2012 revealed that 85 % of people who travel to other places face a hard day to undergo their schedule after traveling. As pupils are facing difficult situation, studying at university should be considered by young people to get better life.

Furthermore, pupils' ability have decreased gradually as they do not have properly preparation to continue their study. National research, conducted by Ministry of education in Indonesia shows that 70 % of pupils' ability experienced a slow decrease when they spend more time to travel without reviewing their subjects. As young students spend a lot of their time to go sightseeing, young people's ability may be faced with learning process in university.

However, some disadvantages will be faced pupils, a great number of benefits in traveling encourage to develop their mind. Firstly, they learn about new environment. It can affect them to have new knowledge and can educate them indirectly. Take traveling to wildlife in Africa as an example, when they visit it pupils will learn about endangered species such as lion and rhinoceros. Second of all, it is possible way for them to become volunteers in volunteers organizations. They have more experiences and new skills before studying at university. In addition, working in holiday time becomes the best way to earn much money.

In conclusion, it seems to me that although in a year pupils may spend their time in a work or go to travel with some drawbacks that influence themselves, working or traveling on postponing time will be more and more important for pupils to obtain much information before they continue their studies. Where possible, they will use this time to find more experiences as much as they can.
Liliy   
Apr 14, 2015
Writing Feedback / Writing task 2 : Advertising leads people to purchase unnecessary products [2]

In the modern era, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


These days, advertising Is key part of modern business with the largest influence to popular consumer goods, and it usually leads people to purchase unnecessary products. While, it plays an enormous role in people's life, I would argue that the power of advertising reflect the largest proportion of popular people's needs.

The first, some people's goods use media such as television and website on the Internet encouraging citizen to purchase things. Media Indonesia research shows that 85 per cent of people in the modern era buys their needs using media online. As they use the media to answer their demand in goods, it cannot be true advertising too popular.

Another factor that can be seen is that free market economies can leave without advertising. An global marketer research, conducted by Indonesian local market organization, shows a great number of local market can advertise their products without advertising on the media. As media are becoming a popular value, it is evidence advertising unessential in people's lifestyle.

On the other hand, the advertising inform people the choices we have. Firstly, some product are important for many people. With the advertising they can choose variant option from several media as comparison before making decision. Second of all, the advertising educates people to be more careful to select needs. Product consumers become smart users to separate the products whether they are good or bad. In addition, people are more easily to become victims of advertising.

The aforementioned evidence reveals that although some advertising may become useful value for people, people should be selective finding basic or not basic needs for them. Furthermore, it will be better if we can look deeply the products before buying needs.
Liliy   
Apr 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / Two charts, one result in the survey of adult education; Writing task 1 [2]

The two of the charts below present publishing a survey youngster education with the first chart examine the percentage of the reason why they are more likely to continue study, and the pie illustrates people opinion about how costs sharing on education should be one priority. Overall, it can be seen that interest in subject and gain qualifications had the highest percentage, and that individual opinion showed the most percentage should be shared.

The first, the proportion of interest in subject was much greater than the other reasons. 40 percent of students interest in subject compared to 38 percent of gain qualifications, both of these reasons had the largest number than others. However, to improve prospects of promotion remained stable the same level as enjoy learning/studying for adult's reason to study about 20 percent, helpful for current job's reason witnessed a steady growth only 0.2 percent over both two reasons. In contrast, youngster that chose to able to change jobs had a smaller 12 percent than to meet people only 9 percent.

On the other hand, 40 percent of individual are believed that the costs of each course should be shared while taxpayer experienced the smallest percentage from the three parts of people about 25 percent. Moreover, the percentage of employer had the second larger proportion just about 35 percent.



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Liliy   
Apr 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 2 : Paying attention to children's future should be one priority! [2]

Some people suggest school should pay more attention to academic subjects because they are useful for children's future career and the subjects such as music and sports are not useful.

Do you agree or disagree?


Knowledge in every subject matter is arguably one of the earliest things that we have as a gift of nature. Due to such a fact, a great number of people assume that paying much attention to subject matters should be done by school as the greatest values for pupils' in their development time than other specific subjects such music and sports. I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a balance subject can be more useful for pupils.

As a matter of fact, specific major can help pupils having more possible with good career in the future. The general view has been what that if pupils learn a great number of specific subject so as to their enormous skill, 70 percent of pupils ability can be used as useful devices to rich success out for themselves such business or professional worker in particular work. As it can be seen from the data, specific subject can develop themselves how they analyze one problem and get the solution to rich be successful.

Another factor that can be seen is that one major will bring a lot of opportunities for children's future to get internationally recognize. An international research, conducted by United Nations for youth generation, shows many children from developing countries have ability in language skill over average acceleration learning. As a great number of pupils are becoming good learner in specific subject, that will be better if school can provide a well teaching system to support every children's ability to rich success.

On the other hand, multi-subject matters will be useful values such combination between science and music or sports to help children having a wide opportunist in the future. This because pupils brain are still in development process. Result shows that 80 percent of figure in science or success people has a strong memories so as to pass their hectic schedule with calm and quiet mind due to habitual subject combination. Consequently, omitting one major can affect children having less possibility better job in the future.
Liliy   
Apr 12, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: General Approaching versus Vocational Systems in Secondary Education [2]

Hi windachan ..

As the world is changing, countries increasingly encourage young people to remain in compulsory education year such as primary and secondary school as a possible way to face a global competition. In some places, secondary school aims and purposes are providing a general education hanging around in wide range. One argument is that secondary school should make children just focusing on a narrow range of subjects in accordance to specific careers.Could you produce it to simple sentence ? Therefore, I personally believe that vocational education and training system should be paid more attention as the strongest ones for economic and capacity building rather than general education approaching.

actually point to point and flow sentence of your introduction here is too wordiness, there will be better if you try to straight to the point.
Liliy   
Apr 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Writing task 2: Accepting an equal proportion of degree students is looked at by the gender [2]

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

To what extent do you agree and disagree ?


These days, some people believe that universities have accepted the proportion of student looking at their gender particularly between male and female with an equal percentage. Whereas, that will be acceptable in some situation, I firmly believe that in this case universities are better to place it in the different number.

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Liliy   
Apr 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / Effects of balanced numbers of male and female students in universities [3]

Hi, windachan .. let me give you some suggestion here

In recent yearsmore appropriate to use recently here , having higher education is becoming a mainly purpose ofit will be appropriate the collocation of purpose is "for or on" some people.

Secondly, the number of woman in the world five times more than male rateI think you forgot to put subject verb agreement here .
Liliy   
Apr 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Writing task - work for unemployed individuals outbalances the lack of jobs [3]

Hi Mrs. Jasmine thank you so much for all of your suggestion .. those can too help me to improve my writing.

please clarify this sentence) are cheaper worker to work , there is no doubt ...

are cheaper worker to work ~> in this sentence it means that i try to emphasize employing unemployed people is cheaper in a payment.

Thank you
Liliy   
Apr 9, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Writing task - work for unemployed individuals outbalances the lack of jobs [3]

Some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labour.
Discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any job.

Do you believe that making unemployed people work is a good idea.


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Liliy   
Apr 9, 2015
Writing Feedback / Lower crime rate and bigger nation's income are the main benefits of employment non working people. [2]

Hi, Imho .. i am tremendously enthusiastic about your essay here, nevertheless let me give you a few correction here.

Could you show task from this essay properly if this is from a task writing task ?

Nowadays, there is an increase in jobless rate in some countries. While some people believe that it can reduce a crime and improve nation's income, others argue that companies cannot pay the employer's payment due to a rise of staff member.I personally believe that it is not good idea.may you can put some statement about positive and negative of jobless people in your opinion due i cannot find your statement about them here

The first positive of making unemployed take a job is how it can reduce a crime rate. Result shows that almost all criminals are unemployed people in several countries.One of the alternatives that government can take to diminish a crime is by giving them a job.could you explain why government have consideration to tackle this problem ?

in my point of you, in the negative side you need to put two negative sides here to present a balance view.

i hope my corection can help you to improve your writing.

Stay healthy and stay study!
Liliy   
Apr 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / Choosing profession for a young people - IELTS-Writing task 2 [NEW]

In your opinion, should young people choose their professions, or should their parents choose choose for them.

Some people assume that it is acceptable for young people to choose their profession in the future. Whereas others believe that parents have strongest right to choose a right option for their children, there is no doubt in my mind that young people have opportunity to lead the best way for their life even though parents also have considered to give consideration.

To begin with, talking about profession, happiness in profession should be a part of young people decision. Result shows that 80 percent of success people starts to choose their profession with what make them happier when they were young people. As young people have opportunity to reach success in the future, they are more likely to find a way for themselves.

Another reason of this is that to success in profession begin with what young people choose. Steve jobs and Bill gates, for example, who are people to start their decision creating Apple and Microsoft companies when they were young. As they choose to begin a profession that make them were creative they get a success in their life.

On the other hand, parents also have considered to decide the best way for their children. This because every parent need their children getting success and happy with children's profession. As straight forward example, when young people will joint to university parents can give some appropriate suggestion before studying at university. Consequently, This can affect young people to think it back before they find the best way for young people.

As a final point, it seems to me that choosing profession for young people is appropriate values parents even though parents also have considered to give decision right and not right decision for themselves.
Liliy   
Feb 9, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Writing Task2: Renewable Energy and Public Transportation as one of responsible to environment [3]

The proliferation of private cars on the roads in many parts of the world has led to serious problems of pollution and may contribute to global warming. Some people think that governments should spend money for the developments of public transportation systems in order to help alleviate this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution.

In the age of modern era, the proliferation of private transportation particularly cars on the roads in a lot of parts of countries in the world has led to extremely problems of pollution and possible to be main source of global warming. Many people think that public transportation systems should be concerned by governments with using their budget to tackle this problem. In contrast, others believe that electrical development and many kinds of cars must be one priority from governments to solve pollution and global warming problems. As a result, it is reasonable that public transportation and developing new types of cars with zero emission have two perspectives.

On the one hand, developing of new type cars with zero waste can help human and environment having better life. Based on recent update for new technology in cars, many countries in Europe such as Germany, Finland, England and French have developed new technology with sorghum plant native from Africa for bio ethanol. It has ability with zero waste for cars in the future. Therefore, governments should gave more attention to participate tackling with using governments budget to developing idea.

On the other hand, public transportation as one of straight solutions to help alleviate those problems. It is because public transportation has more capacities to mobilize with largest capacities such as train, bus, MRT and air plane. Taking MRT (Mass Rapid Transport) as an example. MRT unit is one of mass modern transport in development countries such as Germany, Japan, Russia and French. MRT can carry on many passengers approximately 700 people one times out. If one city has five MRT units, it can be mass transportation which is carry on passengers about 3200 passengers/hours. As a consequent, vehicle on the road will be decreased significantly if this idea can appear in real action.

As a final result, although development electric cars in the future will be one of alternative solutions, public transportation has more opportunity to tackle those problems to lead better life for human an environment. Furthermore, governments as main stakeholders should spend their budget for the development of public transportation on and renewable energy as one of responsible to environment.
Liliy   
Feb 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / A toddler have the cognitive capacity to learn approximately 20 new words each month. [4]

Hai tphy, you cannot use preposition "In " in front of your sentence of your paragraph.

In today's global society , people believe that children should learn new language from the very beginning year of school. I would argue that this has both positive and negative implications.

You can change your fronting sentence with " In the age of modern era or These days, Global societies race against time supporting their children learning foreign languages.

Hopefully it helps. Keep spirit to study.
Liliy   
Feb 8, 2015
Writing Feedback / Learning foreign language from the earliest grades - Javanese example [3]

Hai su_ja, I think when you use adverb clause showing your reason, you better put "because" in the middle of your sentence, it is because avoiding misunderstanding about your sentence and also flow your sentence.

Because , it is the easiest time to get a lot of knowledge particularly learn a new language, then there are many parents entering their children to course institute of foreign language.

It is the easiest time to get a lot of knowledge particularly learn a new language because there are many parents entering their children to language courses.

it can spend more time to learn and practice it because it is better for them to spend a lot of time for studying their mother language.

You can change because if you want to put "Because" in front of your sentence -- > .For the reason,

Hopefully it helps.
Liliy   
Jan 31, 2015
Writing Feedback / Foreign language should be mastered by children since the earliest level of their education. [2]

All children should study a foreign language, starting in the earliest grade. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Foreign language is becoming more essential in this age of globalization. Due to such a fact, over recent years all parents believe that a foreign language should be mastered by children since in the earliest level of their education. However, every children has different abilities to learn foreign language. Whereas it is reasonable, I have taken up against the perception as studying a foreign language has more benefits for children later development.

Multilingual skill has been believed by some people have positive effect for children. Result shows that semilingualism is one of biggest problem for young people because they learn one language which is not fully mastered. Taking students who are learned Mandarin, English, Hindi language as example, those are awesome language with largest population in the world with active user approximately 100 million to 1.04 billion. A lot of school in Indonesia use those language as ones language subject in school with multilingual purpose. As a consequence for this case children can face difficulties in social relationship with other people for the reason children learn foreign language to neglect their mother language indirectly.

The aforementioned evidence raises multifaceted perspective. The earlier children learn about foreign language, the easier for them to master it. Linguistic program study released data that children since 6 years until 12 years old are bests ages "golden age" for children learning about foreign language since they still have brain bending and plastic. As straight example gayatri one of children from Indonesia since seven years old had an ability to master fourteen languages, it could help gayatri to be child Asian ambassador since 2012 until 2013. Therefore, thinking global, sharpening cognitive abilities, having largest possibilities working in foreign country are positive result with children getting bright future.

As a final point, although study a foreign language can educate and give more benefit for children's life, giving opportunities for children playing with each other friends should be notice by parent that children also must have a time to themselves. Furthermore, looking children's ability should be one considered parent without compelling children to be master a lot of foreign language.
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