Writing Feedback / The punishment depends from different circumstances and motivations of the crime [2]

Some people believe that there should fixed there should fixed punishment for each type of crime, others however that the cirumtances of an should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that punishment of crime type should be cleared while others argued that the circumstance of person to instance to crime because motivation factor and might be taken into account before deciding punishment. In this essay I will discuss of both of views. However, I agree that law should be cleared in each crime type.

Common believe that people should be obey of law. It is meant that people who commit to crime should be looked by circumstance and motivation. For example, and economic reason. Some people evolve in crime because they are unemployment. In urban area, number of crime people are average young people. They have not education, low economic background. As a result they cannot another choice and then become a young gangster. Government should be more attention of their reason and then give punishment.

On the other hand, law maker should be fixed the variety of crime. Nowadays, many variation of crime cannot be cleared because government was still confused to finish it. For example corruption, It is extraordinary crime. Many people are jailed most of public representative, government officer. They have been punished fewer 20 year while China have policy to death penalthy of this case. In the other hand, other crime such as drugs crime have death penalty. Those problem have to be more elaborate and fixed before punishment.

In conclusion, those statements that I mentioned before. I stand the punishment need cleared and I recommend that stakeholders need be discuss intensionally about it.

Writing Feedback / Let is simplify legal jargon By Alan Siegel [2]

Alan Siegel in his speech on TED talked that today government was complexity responsible which run a 16 pages constitutions where took at 2,074 pages and more than 400,000 words to present into senate. He explained the simple things achieving this about transparency and empathy in building of humanity and communication. Siegel as keynote speaker on this session as capacity in businessmen. Had been developed design business and focus a new people and interactive with others such as the government, people and business for long years ago. He explained to be more simple it how to organize the legal document to check and re-check. He said that Obama always have time to correct and all important document. Moreover Siegel explained about changing the content that he proud about date, calendar for large company as IBM. IBM have responsibility in business. Along his speech He cited many data from statistic, for example 1 in 10 taxpayers received a notice or letter from IRS, a business organization in America. In the last, he had quotation from former president, Thomas Jefferson which said when the subject is strong, simplicity is the only way to treat it. It was meant agency or organization to make clarity, transparency, simplicity and national priority.

Source: TED

Writing Feedback / Let's All Obsess Over This Intricate Map of Alt Music History [3]

The history of band music performance started to a legendary band in England, The Sex Pistols begin its performance in 4 June 1976, Manchester Hall. Now, this performance has been peak up to rank one all the time. However it not the band but the spectators made the exhibition famous. A counter culture rock music spilled out from these. The band had influenced many kinds music today such as punk, ska, hardcore, grunge, etc. To connect those complex relations all band, a researcher looked by the poster on a circuit board from a transistor radio namely music-mapping print. As a result, firstly, researcher used symbolic code commercially available transistor radio it came out in 1954 then manifested into poster form and frozen in time. Secondly, the music mapping used musical connections to identify listening recommendations. Those between band types and layers between legends like The Clash and Television-are delightfully easy to find this music map.

Writing Feedback / Tax dodgers in India and Indonesia have been given a chance to come clean [2]

Two developing countries in Asia, India and Indonesia have same problems about tax revenue. India where have more over 1 billion people only have a few tax revenue approximately 1 million rupees while Indonesia's 255 citizens number, there 27 million people are registered. Both countries have GDP ratio number at 11 percent. Regarding this issues, India's government has expected to collect in 4.4 billion dollar from the 64,275 taxpayers which targeted people who live and worked in overseas. In addition, India just paid 373 million dollar from 633 people who owned up. Whereas Indonesia which is trying an amnesty tax. A number 328,000 people have taken advantage when tax amnesty launched in July which ended in September. The taxpayer are politicians and businessmen. They are suspect hidden their wealth and save money in overseas bank.

Writing Feedback / Programming bacteria to detect cancer (and maybe treat it) [2]

Nowadays, technology made big change entire human life. It used rapidly and computer involved by scientist to create more innovation. For example computer program able to assist Bacteria to detect cancer inside human body. An explanation from researcher, Tal Danino said that bacteria can help human to detect cancer even another disease. He developed a software where it can write algorithm DNA inside the Bacteria. This program can communicate with Bacteria molecule. The method was bacteria synchronize together and then grew up as a colony. Then, the program assisted the colony to spread out to detect disease that phenomena he called a supernova. Interestingly his program Bacteria grew naturally in human body and sent signal to the machine and the detect cancer or treat. It will be benefit to detect cancer and other disease in the future. His vision has technology can support in human life.

Source: TED, Tal Danino

Writing Feedback / Hundreds of crisscrossing tracks offer a glimpse of life in Africa around 19,000 years ago [2]

A hundred mile from the volcano the Maasai, Africa, the scientist have cataloged preserved human footprint in the mud from 5,000 to 19,000 years ago. More over 350 footsteps sketch in about square 50 meters, it larger than badminton court. Some the path seen to show around a dozen people mostly female and kids who travelled across mud together forward southwest. In overt time researchers have been published their study that they say that it will resemble their result which was identify at least 24 tracks, some possible joggers, more than a dozen people traveling together. For tracking of ancient people footsteps, the researcher created 3-D scans entire of Engare Sero, dance hall and all.

Source: news.nationalgeographic

Writing Feedback / Why the letter X represents undefined or an unknown? [2]

Letter 'X' is represented undefined or unknown. It something no definition such as the x-files, the x-price, the x-project and so on. The question is why this letter which is representative of unknown? Terry Moore have been explained it by learn some letters or language some countries. Starting Arabic language, he found in letter Syin. Moore elaborated that Arabic language symbols were containing mathematic wisdom and then it translated. Next it known as AL Jabra. However, one of problem was the Arabic symbol unpopular in European countries. To solve this, Moore said that Letter 'shin' translated become 'say on' which meant something that it some undefined and unknown thing. The problem from medieval Spanish scientist are translating these materials. The word 'Shin' become 'say on' cannot be render into Spanish language because Spanish difficult to say this sound. These problems be resolved by using Greek symbol X (read: kai) and then, this letter translated into English become X.

Source: TED, Terry Moore

Writing Feedback / Keep your goals to yourself by Derek Sivers [2]

Many people have personal goals that it imagined to step next closer but honestly, if you tell your dream to other people that it would not good feeling. In fact, psychology expert said that saying someone your objective make them unhappy. According to Derek Sivers, many people try to pursue the goals such as less weight with jogging then you tell to someone which good reaction is good for your motivation. However if they have opposite reaction you will be less motivation to hard work. Hundred people involved in separated test. As a result, those have announced most close at the achieving the goal. Next, what can people do? Siver said, they should resist temptation to announce the goal and deliver social acknowledgment. In Addition, if people attempted to someone goal, just say exactly well done.

Writing Feedback / The death of the Thai king throws the country into turmoil [2]

After king of Thai's, Bhumibol Adulyadej is passed. Many people doubted succession not to be soft in this monarchy country. Commonly, milestone in Thailand's politic involved by army power. This situation able to under control in Bhumibol regime which was Thai's army loyal to the king but after his gone the day uncertainty in Thailand. This country had riot in 2014 where the action class violent middle class people against the rural people then this brought the army taken advantage from it. Nowadays, many public goods are closed and some multinational and international organizations have been announcing to their labor to spend their time to work at home for couple weeks. Thai's official confirmed that prince, Maha Vajiralongkorn will be continuing his father throne. For this situation, some analysts argued it may be caused friction because the prince unpopular among Thai's.

source: economist

Writing Feedback / As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq [2]

The Kurdish army stayed alongside Tigris River Valley. They had been surveyed and mapped each inch everything which was Islamic Stated people belong. They had been beating of ISIS to from Fallujah in the mountain and now they forward to Mosul. While U.S. Soldiers were stick together and addition militias from Iraqi, Turkey, Iran and others. Now, situation in Mosul was not conducive. The United Nations was expected more over a million people will be moved to safe place. ISIS rebellions were using a trap in buildings. Some people were facing ISIS terror if they captivated they would be prisoned, beaten until beheaded. On the other hand, ISIS still controlled of Fazilia and sat up heavy gunfire and also sniper and suicide bomber.

Source: news.nationalgeographic..../2016/10/islamic-state-isis-iraq-mosul-syria-offensive/