Iedha01
Sep 27, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary of TED How does cancer spread through the body ? (Ivan Seah Yu Jun ) [4]
Hi Ifan21,
You've done a good job, however, there are some mistakes I noticed, let me show you
-The predominant QIESTION comes cancer distribution ...
In my opinion, you should simplify your sentence in order the reader will catch your notion clearly, while you don't miss your powerful words. Your sentence should be
-Metasis is a predominant questions coming from cancer distribution through our body.
-Ivan S.Y.J stated that the three major mechanism-spreading cancers proliferate and infect normal tissues such as, Transcoelomic,lymphatic and hematogenous.
I do hope it helps
Hi Ifan21,
You've done a good job, however, there are some mistakes I noticed, let me show you
-The predominant QIESTION comes cancer distribution ...
In my opinion, you should simplify your sentence in order the reader will catch your notion clearly, while you don't miss your powerful words. Your sentence should be
-Metasis is a predominant questions coming from cancer distribution through our body.
-Ivan S.Y.J stated that the three major mechanism-spreading cancers proliferate and infect normal tissues such as, Transcoelomic,lymphatic and hematogenous.
I do hope it helps