Writing Feedback / 'sleep well at night and do yoga at midnight': it's hard to keep a healthy lifestyle in modern world [3]

Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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It is true that citizens have unfit the way of life in modern era which increases the number of people who died because of eating unhealthy meals. Some people believe that advanced technology give easy way to obtain fast food everywhere. Otherwise, others think a lot of method for staying fit today and it depends on the people commitment to make an effort for a healthy lifestyle.

To begin with, an unhealthy lifestyle becomes a particular of serious issue nowadays. And some people think that it is quite hard to eat fresh food or do physical movement in new world. Moreover, a period of life in advanced technology gives plenty of facilities such as, delivery food by fast food restaurant and eCommerce meals online. And these are easy way to have health problems and make human lazy to go outside. Furthermore, another facility from new innovation also make people spending much time in front of TV, Smartphone and computer, so they are less by working out in a gym and outdoor activities.

Nowadays, a healthy lifestyle has become an essential thing for people who expect to live longer and healthy. And others people argue that there are several ways to stay fit such as, cut down on unhealthy foods, make an effort to do exercise every twice a week frequently and increase fruits and vegetable intake regularly. However, people who prefer to keep fit in lifestyle have to commits with themselves to avoid unhealthy lifestyle.

To sum up, it is easy to have a healthy lifestyle in modern era by eating balance nutrition, eliminate junk food and doing exercise as long as the people can commits with these activities but in my experience there are many ways to have a fit body and healthy mind such as less stress, sleep well at night and do yoga at midnight. It might be very useful to solve health problems.

Writing Feedback / Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, making bad decisions [2]

SUMMARY TED : Programming your mind for being success

Carrie Green began her speech with giving one question to the audiences, can i have a volunteer to stand with me on this stage?. After a couple of minutes someone joined her and she just wanted to test and give money to audiences but this was not about the money, it was about experiment demonstrates the power of your mind. The fact that what is going on up in your head has such a huge impact on the actions that you take, on the decisions you make, and the things that you experience.

According to Carrie Green, The reasons why people think twice to stand on this stage are because of fear, obstacles and less motivation. First reason, Fear of standing up stage in front of nearly 1000 people is really damn scary, perhaps it was fear of the unknown, because they had no idea what should do with the speaker. Furthermore, the second reason, it was because of OBSTACLES. There were quite a lot of obstacles in this room, probably they are so far at the back, and they just thought there are lots of tables in their way up it's too difficult to reach stage. Third reason, it's just the lack of MOTIVATION. Perhaps they just could not be bothered to move and come up to the stage But no matter what they reason were, their decision started up here on the stage, In their mind.

Most People are missing out on incredible opportunities all of the time, because of what's going on in the head, making bad decisions. However, people who believe with Those kind of self-limiting thoughts And so these wonderful ideas, incredible potentials, stay locked up inside will create a wonderful life And that is exactly what was happening to Carrie a few years ago.

source: youtube.com/watch?v=MmfikLimeQ8

Writing Feedback / The percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live abroad, based on their education [2]

The bar chart shows the percentage of Bulgarians who were expecting to live in foreign countries, based on three level of education, higher education, secondary and primary or lower education, over a three-year period.

Turning on the details, senior high school is one of group of the highest education step in Bulgaria each year but it fell slowly in the end of the period from 65 percent in 2002 to 59 percent in 2008. On the other side, the second higher level of Bulgarians is junior high school or elementary school which increased slightly from 18 percent in 2002 to 32 percent in 2008. However, the percentage between 2006 and 2002 which showed a significant rise was only from 18 percent to 19 percent.

Furthermore, the categories of Bulgarians who had tertiary education fell down at 9 percent in 2008 from 20 percent in the previous period. It is shown that well educated Bulgarians people were lower interest to live and move to another country than primary school people.

To sum up, over the last six years, education was not the first aim of Bulgarian to move to another country which has illustrate the worst request based on the type of Bulgarian education. There might be other reasons for living in different countries.

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Writing Feedback / All of life activities have been covered in internet, which should be used wisely to avoid addiction [3]

Question?

The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it our lives would be completely different
To what do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

In last 3 decades, many advanced technologies have been found. Camera mirrorless or Camera phone was invention to help people capture the beautiful view and landscape. And also, Credit card invention gives people easy way to pay shopping. On the other side, the internet is being essential for people nowadays. It is true those inventions have changed human life quickly. However, it shows that internet is being an important thing which changes the way of people life.

Recently, students are completely different than in the past, almost 50 percent their activities by using internet. Internet helps them to communicate with the teachers either to attend online course or sending an assignment via email and they do not need to attend live lecture or printing papers for assignment. Also, they can download online books to save their money for buying book in bookstore.

Citizens lifestyle are definitely different with old citizens in the past. There are many applications online to help people easily to pass life faster for example, online shopping. So they can order all of items shopping on website, it helps them safe the time to go to store. And also, transportation pick-up online, they can reach the destination on time, they do not need to cause traffic jam longer.

People have different method of spending leisure time, adults and teenagers love enjoying social media, such as Facebook, Instagram and Snapchat. Most people use internet to sign up on these sites. Nowadays, girls like to download Korean movies while boys are spending most of their time to play online game by using internet.

To conclude, I agree that the greatest advanced invention can be influence all of human life probably internet. Lately, all of life activities have provided in internet but it should use wisely to avoid being addicted with internet.

Writing Feedback / Summary article: The questions remain after a bomb explosion in new york [3]

Since New York City commemorated the 15th anniversary of September 11th attacks a week ago, a bomb went off again around 8.30pm on September 17th, 2016, in Chelsea and Manhattan. The explosion shook buildings and blasted out windows. In this accident Twenty-nine people were injured, one seriously. Bill de Blasio, New York City's mayor said that the incident was intentional and criminal but he hesitated to call its terrorism while the investigation is processing. On the other side, On Saturday morning a timed pipe-bomb went off at a 5km fun run in New Jersey for a military charity, No one and group were injured. Whereas Islamic State has claimed credit for another attack at a shopping center in St Cloud, Minnesota

According to the article, New York is one of the world's best-prepared cities for a terrorist attack. Since 2001 the police department has ramped up its counter-terrorism activities. Mr de Blasio has promised that police presence will now "be bigger than ever". Cops will be on patrol at the UN, Times Square and other New York landmarks, as well as posted at subway stations. And also Andrew Cuomo, the governor of New York has deployed 1,000 state troopers and National Guardsmen to help patrol transport hubs. He promised that the subway, the city's lifeline, would be running in time for the Monday morning commute. He told, "we're getting ready to go to work tomorrow like any Monday morning".

Writing Feedback / Most people in the past chose to stay in one place along their life [2]

Writing task 2:The advantages and disadvantages of moving around in different places

Most people in the past chose to stay in one place along their life because they felt enough to pass all of life in the same house, road and society. Nowadays, most people move around and stay in several places during their lifetimes because they are typical of human-being who like to jump from one place to another. It is a chance to have new experiences, job opportunities, and neighbors.

There are a lot of benefits for moving around different society such as, having new house, having new neighbor, starting new job, building new business and having new experience. Unfortunately, jumpers who love to move around in different places need to survive and adapt with new cultures surrounding their lifetimes for each place their moving. Also before they are moving, need to clean old house, pack all items inside house, find transportation and carry on all stuffs to new place.

On the other hand, people who like to stay in only one place in all of their lifetime periods are kind of human-being who do not want to try neither new challenges nor new experience. It is a way they have chosen to keep safety such as, having all family members surrounding them and meeting sociable people as much as possible everyday along their life. In my experiences, It is totally nice to always stay and move in different places. When I only stay in the same place, I was easy to feel bored but once I move around of strange situation I felt better even it is shocked but it is a new challenges to keep surviving.

To conclude, some people only stay in the same place along their life periods which make them away from new pressure, they think do not need new expectation in new situation, while, others say it is better to expert out life to try every place to feel the new atmosphere of each place.

Writing Feedback / Summary article :Human sperm grown in a lab in the first time [2]

According the French scientists, it informs the first time they make human spermatozoa from testicular cells called spermatogonia for giving either treatment for childhood cancer or decide to have children in future life. The company has to pursue their project because Kallistem obtain a patent for the method, unfortunately it failed to convince skeptics at that time. Actually, Chinese and Japanese researchers have done with using mouse sperm before.

Durand, one of researcher who recognizes this project, told that the necessary thing is a bioreactor in which bundles of somniferous tubules of testes that contain of spermatogonia. it has packaged inside tiny cylinder called "Chitosan". The substances include a precise blend of nutrients, vitamins, hormones and growth factors that diffuse through to the cells and coax them to mature, the process takes 72 days and the tests to do are currently under way. Lastly, Durand said if all the process supported by company it takes 4 years to see the result.

Writing Feedback / It is witnessed that the largest proportion of New Zealand's visitors come from Australia [2]

International visitors to New Zealand: country of origin

The pie chart compares about international tourists who visit New Zealand based on their nationality. The largest proportion is witnessed by Australia. A lower of number is showed for Americans and British while The East Asian People are the minority of proportion. But some of them come from unknown countries

According to the figure chart it can be seen that the first majority group is Australians people. The percentage is viewed virtually more than thirtieth

A closer look at the figure it has showed that United State of America and United Kingdom are taken the second largest proportion. On the other hand, the East Asian Countries show the third smallest proportion. However, there are small majority from others countries. But More than a significant majority commonly travelers come from English-speaking Countries which English is their first language.

To summary, most of them come from native-speaker countries. But a few of them come from Non-English Speaking countries

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