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"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value"

3 - What confuses me is why your friend agreed to have YOU post HIS essay. Why could he not do...

Writing Feedbackmathsam - Aug 10, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 10, 2009
Literature Review in Software Engineering

2 - In general, one does not have to cite references for common knowledge. In a literature review, the focus should...

Essayshtetnaing - Aug 10, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
"A level-headed individual" - UF Admission Essay.

4 - Thank you. =] And no, my mother didn't. By that time, tony was 18 and he moved out. he...

UndergraduateAlishalagana - Aug 10, 2009Alishalagana - Aug 10, 2009
"the fast food industry" - english assignment

4 - What exactly do you need help with? As Simone pointed out, you have a clear next step laid out...

Letterssiofio - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 30, 2009
"how the brain and mind function" - Evaluate a significant experience, & impact.

8 - I agree this essays really good, especially since it flows nicely into your interest in psychology. It adds a...

Undergraduatesweetchic6893 - Aug 9, 2009iHasWritersBloc - Aug 11, 2009
Charity bike ride - A setback I have faced

9 - Suggested opening: My heart fell on the floor when I heard the news. Just home from a long...

Undergraduatesarahstu - Aug 9, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 11, 2009
working with children - UF ESSAY; situation which ignited something inside of me

4 - i think its a very well written and good essay. a few points: i feel you should, in...

Undergraduatevirginia - Aug 9, 2009tal105 - Aug 9, 2009
Stanford "Intellectually engaging idea" Essay

6 - i agree...

Undergraduatebatxc - Aug 9, 2009wells - Aug 10, 2009
Personal Essay - Travels; I have inherited my mother's wanderlust

4 - I love experiencing the magic and draw of various cultures, each with their own flavor and distinctions which seizes...

Writing Feedbacksarahstu - Aug 9, 2009Liebe - Aug 10, 2009
Scholarship essay question help, your sense of humor, your personality

5 - Yes, that's a start. From this, we can learn that you are observant, empathic, and culturally sensitive. We also...

Scholarshipwoodhorse22 - Aug 9, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
"My dream America" - common app essay draft..

5 - thanks all for the advices. its true that the beginning part is very confusing. and the replies were helpful...

Undergraduatejso1226 - Aug 9, 2009jso1226 - Aug 9, 2009
My Struggle - My pursuit for happiness (University of Florida)

9 - it's alright, i asked some of my friends to read it, and they say it's kind of vague, that...

Undergraduateyibo829 - Aug 9, 2009yibo829 - Aug 10, 2009
GRE Essay on "skepticism in student's learning"

6 - Your essay mainly seems to be arguing in favor of the idea, rather than against it as your introduction...

Writing Feedbacknatz - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 17, 2009
Paired Text essay on Nineteen Eighty-Four and Brave New World... where to start?

3 - Well, you seem to know that the "big difference" lies in the fact that BNW portrays a world that...

Book ReportsMrBlack - Aug 9, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
"hard work leads you to success in your life" - need help in correcting my essay

5 - Your logic here isn't very tight. Overwhelming evidence suggests that hard work is in fact the key to...

Writing Feedbackpelaru - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
I want to write an essay for the art institute in Chicago and I really need help

4 - Yep. You should always supply the exact prompt when asking for help on these sorts of essays. As to...

Undergraduatetiod - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
"From China to America" - UCF admission essay

9 - Hmm... I'm not sure about bullet points within an admission essay, but I agree that the process of outlining...

Undergraduateminixiaojun - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
"Core values" - FSU essay. good? bad?

4 - I am applying to FSU and also have to write the same essay! I think you're on the...

Undergraduatekellyb - Aug 8, 2009sarahstu - Aug 9, 2009
Traveling, my Grandparent's accomplishments - FSU Undergraduate Essay

4 - "Pretty" is a vague modifier. You need a lot more detail. Saying that you love baseball and...

Undergraduatewells - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 8, 2009
Grad School Statement of Purpose Critique (passion for academics and researc)

11 - You're very welcome! To show your gratitude, pitch in and help somebody else with their essay. There are quite...

Graduatemallik777 - Aug 8, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
AUT Physiotherapy essay - need review

11 - 4wheelz Granted I do well this semester, studying Physiotherapy could be a possibility and if so, this will give...

Undergraduate4wheelz - Aug 8, 20094wheelz - Aug 8, 2009
Common application - Question regarding essay content

8 - Agreed. But it's really difficult for me to express how I really feel about this without having you...

Essayshope123 - Aug 8, 2009hope123 - Aug 8, 2009
The Saluda hospital - Advice for my GRE argument

6 - "The author" works. Or "the newspaper," or "the article." These all would be more standard, and accurate, than "the...

Writing Feedbackmathsam - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 23, 2009
The difference between: can/could, may/might, will/would, that/which

5 - Sounds like something you could probably just ask the overmind. Wikipedia has a pretty good discussion of auxiliary verbs...

Grammar, Usageescritor - Aug 8, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
We are blessed with modern tools; Modern technology

8 - I have checked : be aware of is correct :)...

Writing Feedbackrosamond00 - Aug 7, 2009arsdtbk - Aug 16, 2009
'Corruption in schools curriculum' - Issue of importance - my history teacher

35 - Liebe, I love you (not that in that way)....

Undergraduatenancyroll1 - Aug 7, 2009Notoman - Sep 3, 2009
'blind to many of the things' - someone who has made an impact on my life

18 - Sean and I both advised you to avoid this topic. Sean explained why very clearly: Reading this essay is...

UndergraduateNorisGR - Aug 7, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 11, 2009
Help with a hook / Rules of Society in the book Pearl by John Steinback

9 - As Rashad has said the best path is surf through the net. Best Wish...

Book ReportsRedSoxGirl33 - Aug 7, 2009monamona - Oct 29, 2011
Getting up early and starting day's work in the morning should always be preferred by people

4 - You need to attend to basics. For example, you must place a space after punctuation marks, as I have...

Writing Feedbackmansten - Aug 7, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 7, 2009
Lung cancer - UCF -some obstacle or bump in the road

3 - Please omit the entirety of your first paragraph. The extended metaphor is so trite that it detracts from, rather...

Undergraduatejaketheraider92 - Aug 6, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 7, 2009
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