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Essay about me and my friend who slipped into the waterfall - how to write it?

7 - And think about what point you want to make. A short story can be written merely to entertain, but...

EssaysTan Huey Yean - Jul 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
Undergraduate Review, "Newton" (Rutgers University)

7 - It's okay to say that you are an avid reader -- I just wouldn't mention that you read...

UndergraduateSeebConnect - Jul 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 6, 2009
IELTS; SHARE WEALTH AMONG POORER NATIONS

12 - Some comments on first part There always exist both rich and poor people in one community. Some poor people...

Writing FeedbackEve - Jul 2, 2009tiantian12 - Jul 12, 2009
Career objectives for Electonics and instrumentation engineer

6 - And in addition to the "what," you might want to touch on the "why". Why are you drawn to...

Graduateindrprt480 - Jul 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 5, 2009
Exam passing tips - its my final year   2

71 - I always review all the materials related and then summarize important topics and theories with classmates....

Student Talkkayondo - Jul 2, 2009welnorze - Jul 18, 2012
There are many places that wait their visitors; Turkish Tourism Culture

4 - At the moment, you have so few details that you could turn this into a single paragraph, and, once...

Writing Feedbackosman - Jul 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
Changed in Everyday Life Caused by New Technology

4 - Okay, I know you writing this essay to practice grammar, but still, why are you writing this essay? All...

Writing Feedbackmajed - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
Prescribed drugs and its various effects on the body and mind

8 - I am not sure that the "On the one hand . . . on the other hand" structure is...

Writing Feedbackfernaj13 - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 7, 2009
Should university studies be subsidized?

9 - Specific details are usually a good idea. In this particular essay, though, the statistics for Sri Lanka really need...

Writing FeedbackIELTS_Student - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 10, 2009
i need a little guidance on my admission essay..am i on the right track ?

5 - Strong opening, as others have noted. The central character in this essay, though, is your Dad, and after reading...

UndergraduateKTZ - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
Single career or several careers? Both have negatives and positives

4 - You seem to be arguing that having a single career is easier than having multiple ones. However, Simone is...

Writing FeedbackEve - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
"Recognizing my mistake and a way to fix it" - help me with the repetition :)

5 - The experience itself is sort of interesting -- a coincidence of symptoms that awakens with in you an awareness...

Undergraduatepaircorner - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 4, 2009
An appeal letter for Business Management Admission !

6 - Try rewriting your appeal letter using only 60% of the words you currently do, and eliminating every instance of...

UndergraduateDannyBoy - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 2, 2009
Success could be measured by outcome, effects, or the influences one makes

3 - Yep, verbiage aplenty here. (Isn't "extra verbiage" redundant?) In any event, try to say what you want to say...

UndergraduateMayada - Jul 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 2, 2009
Comparing Brutus's and Mark Antony's rhetoric in Julius Caesar

3 - I also notice that you seem to be arguing that Mark Antony has the better rhetoric because the crowd...

Writing Feedbackkleinhenz - Jun 30, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 1, 2009
"My Mom" - help with most influential person essay.

5 - The essay isn't even particularly good in this regard, either. Your mom taught you dedication and perseverance! Wow!!...

Undergraduatebrandon - Jun 30, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
IELTS; GENDER EQUALITY @ UNI ADMISSION

4 - Feel free to post your revised version for even more feedback....

Writing Feedbackltandi - Jun 30, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 14, 2009
Paper about an important movie

9 - Thanks for your encouragament !...

Writing Feedbackkim1 - Jun 30, 2009kim1 - Jul 1, 2009
'trauma patient emergency care' - Supplement essay medical school

17 - "It was a rewarding feeling to be able to help the patient recuperate from such a horrific trauma" =...

Undergraduatevietfun2k - Jun 29, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 2, 2009
True Friendship Essay (living without friends)

12 - I think your revised essay is quite good. However, I am really confused with this. You said,"As we grow...

Writing FeedbackAlexbig - Jun 29, 2009Janie Tine - Jul 29, 2009
Essay on different programmes (English, Finance, Global Studies)

4 - thanks a lot for advices!!!I make over my essay!...

Graduatemellory - Jun 29, 2009mellory - Jun 30, 2009
"Cellular Phones" - need someone proof read my paper

9 - Simone's already told you what your thesis is -- you just need to paraphrase it so that its...

Writing FeedbackSoCkMoNkeYJaNe - Jun 29, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
Essay about why the 4th of july is celebrated?

7 - Hmmmm . . . the essay seems to have been removed. Did you copy it from another website, or...

Essaysatikin - Jun 29, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
GRE analytical writing ..TOPIC (the need for global universities.)

4 - You might also want to explain in a bit more detail what a "global university" would look like. If...

Writing FeedbackNEHALB - Jun 29, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
No Driving Licenses for People Under 18 - Argumentation/ Persuasion Essay

4 - Haha, I would argue that kids should be allowed the right to drive as early as 15 if they...

Writing Feedbacknewuser1 - Jun 29, 2009Mustafa1991 - Jun 30, 2009
Imagine a life entirely different from the one you now lead, what would it be?

6 - You just need to speak from the heart while also answering the prompt. You might talk about how you...

Undergraduateprasun8463 - Jun 29, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 29, 2009
The place we come from determines the person - UC admission essay

9 - And the first sentence in most of these paragraphs does sort of act as a topic sentence anyway. ...

Undergraduaterediat - Jun 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jul 18, 2009
Having trouble with understanding an essay ("Is This the Promised End?")

10 - That's your choice, of course. For what it's worth, I've found that student fears that other people will steal...

EssaysDontfakeit - Jun 28, 2009EF_Simone - Jul 1, 2009
My UCF undergraduate admissions essay...I am dying to go here critiques?

6 - You could just delete the first sentence, and that would help a fair bit. You still wouldn't have the...

UndergraduateJennameister - Jun 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 29, 2009
Eye surgery messed up my grades and I couldn't attend the dates of the exams (second chance appeal)

14 - Sorry I came to this thread a bit late. As you write up your appeal, try to maintain a...

Student TalkMoeMoe1 - Jun 28, 2009EF_Sean - Jun 30, 2009
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