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"the cops around my block" - uc prompt 1

3 - hey, i dunno if this could play a crucial role or not but the prompt is actually: Describe the...

Undergraduatevanvan513 - Nov 22, 2008nunya415 - Nov 23, 2008
ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?

NEW - Some people, say that living in the countryside is the best choice, because is better for your heath. But...

Writing Feedbackjavier5555 - Nov 22, 2008 -
SAIC design statement of purpose; 'As long as there is life, there will be art'

7 - Good afternoon :) You're on the right track; much improved from the last couple of times. Continue to...

Undergraduateadelewu - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
USC Short question - swimming activity

NEW - Tell us about an activity that is important to you, and why. To begin with, all students face...

UndergraduateFYI - Nov 22, 2008 -
"Born and raised in Abu Dhabi" - UC prompt 1 - Off topic?? Advice needed.

18 - The 18th century French philosopher Denis Diderot said, "Only passions, great passions can elevate the soul to great things."...

UndergraduateFYI - Nov 22, 2008FYI - Dec 12, 2008
help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen

4 - Since you asked for corrections, that was all I provided in the first posting :) I think it...

Writing Feedbackdatanator - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Why Energy Engineering? - Will you review my admission essay

2 - Good morning :) As you didn't include the prompt/assignment for this piece, I have edited the first section...

Undergraduateawaazdev - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"Helping Sebastian" - UC Prompt #1

2 - Good morning :) As you didn't include the prompt or what type of assistance you are seeking, I...

UndergraduateKaytee17 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
'art in my life' - Florida State .."Vires Artes Mores"

2 - Good morning :) Your opening is very strong; it works well. The quote highlights your meaning well; I...

Undergraduateavalleau1 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
writing question - is this sentence correct?

6 - These are both unconventional ways of writing. By "unconventional," I mean that they do not strictly follow the rules....

Grammar, Usagemichel92 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Kevin - Mar 27, 2011
Cross Country; most exhilarating experience; Extracurricular Activity

2 - Good afternoon :) "For me, Cross CountryThese are not proper nouns and shouldn't be capitalized. has been one...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
The Super Student, a person who had an influence on me - admission essay

4 - Michael Driscoll is my name. I thought I would put a little twist on the essay by writing it...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008eagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008
'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life

2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...

Writing FeedbackTMcGee - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Research paper on drug testing for athletes

6 - involve individual interests too....

Research Papershartsey17 - Nov 21, 2008mavictoria - Jan 12, 2009
Graduate Essay-Why do we need a Semiotic Methodology of Theatre? UNFINISHED

2 - Good afternoon :) As this is not within my area of expertise, I have made comments in regards...

Graduatecarlajayne - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
UC prompt 1---multiculture in school and my contribution

2 - Good afternoon :) As you didn't include the prompt for this essay or what kind of assistance you...

Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Columbia / prudent adventurer ~~~I need suggestion~

2 - Good afternoon :) Since you didn't describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I have some very...

Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"striving to major in a certain area" - UC prompt 1 - i need help

2 - Good afternoon :) First, a mechanical suggestion: avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "wouldn't" should be...

Undergraduatekewlliljethro - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"MC in Valentines Day event" - UC transfer applicants prompt #1

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then provided some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduategalz - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
The Indian society, help with prompt #1....

4 - That sounds like it will be an effective addition; make sure that you include enough detail to tell the...

Undergraduatedatanator - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
My Team, This is who I am. Prompt two.

2 - I have edited the first section and then given you some general comments in regards to the rest of...

UndergraduateAndrewessay - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
I had my first experience in sales and merchandising ; FIT App

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section of your piece and then given some more general...

Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
'recognized by many coaches' - the world you come from. UC prompt #1

NEW - hello, I was wondering if you could help me with fixing up my introduction paragraph, as well as editing...

Undergraduatejedijessy91 - Nov 20, 2008 -
' friends with African American students' - Rutgers Essay--Diversity

6 - Here's my advice: 1) Sell yourself. Sell yourself. 2) Talk about what you will bring to the program. 3)...

UndergraduateRutgersGirl91 - Nov 20, 2008fjfjfjf - Oct 15, 2010
"Ping pong is serious business" - common app essays

9 - You're very welcome. I think your tone comes across just fine; I wouldn't worry too much about misunderstandings. Best...

UndergraduateNikhil - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
essay about experience

6 - I think it's great in regards to content and readability; your organization and structure look good as well. The...

Undergraduatem5456 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
My involvement in theater - Acting was officially my new hobby. UC transfer essay

11 - The 1000 word limit only applies to the 1st and 2nd prompt. The 3rd prompt is an open...

UndergraduateWildtalon - Nov 20, 2008aljashamy - Nov 30, 2008
SENIOR RESEARCH PROJECT about Michael Jackson --HELP

12 - What is the report on? I am currently considering doing something on Michael Jackson for an upcoming essay....

Research Papersathomas1891 - Nov 20, 2008Gooner - May 1, 2010
Grandparents had spent great portion of their hard earned saving to buy house and car for their son

3 - Thank you so much for your advice. I will definitely work harder for more improvement....

Undergraduatelayaili - Nov 20, 2008layaili - Nov 22, 2008
"6th grade incident" - UC transfer. Prompt #2

2 - I don't think it's a bad example to use; on the contrary, it obviously made an impact, causing you...

Undergraduatemusiklover - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
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