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"The people we admire most shape who we become" - analogy essay

2 - Greetings! I think you're selling yourself short--it's very good so far! The painting metaphor is a good one,...

Writing Feedbackkarmabelle - Oct 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 20, 2007
Help on Humanities paper (Gregorian chant)

NEW - I need help on Humanities paper. I am not sure I didn't make any mistake. thank you The original...

Essaysmandymoore - Oct 19, 2007 -
My Summer 2007 internship with Senator Schumer - admission essay

4 - Greetings! I don't think your quotation is awkward; I would have said "attention-grabbing"! As far as the last...

UndergraduateKostasg - Oct 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 22, 2007
New Imperialism in Asia and Africa

2 - Greetings! As usual, another well-written and thought-provoking essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: Although we...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2007
Thesis Statement Re: Early Mortality of Rock Stars

10 - You're very welcome! I think the final result of your essay is excellent! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Grammar, Usagesilverystars - Oct 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Nov 9, 2007
Essay Analysis of a Photograph

3 - I'm simply revisiting this thread to say a belated thanks for the help that I received. :)...

Writing Feedbacksilverystars - Oct 17, 2007silverystars - Jan 26, 2009
ESSAY ON CHARLES A. BEARD. FOR AMERICAN GOV. CLASS

2 - Greetings! A thesis statement is essentially designed to tell the reader what the entire essay is about. It...

EssaysWPU89 - Oct 16, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2007
Math Essay for college- feedback/comments?

3 - Greetings! Thanks for giving me some suggestions! I feel those spots were confusing too. Your correction works! ...

Undergraduatelopsicicle - Oct 14, 2007lopsicicle - Oct 27, 2007
How the internet has improved your academic experience.

5 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...

Writing Feedbackjnix612 - Oct 14, 2007EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
Scientific Revolution & Christianity Essay

NEW - Hello, Could you please read my essay and give me some feedback? The prompt is: In...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 12, 2007 -
'transportation, hard work, and discipline' the world you come from - UC College

5 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job of improving your essay! I have just a few suggestions:...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Oct 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Nov 21, 2007
Economic activity of developing country, Pakistan - personal essay

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is well-written, cohesive and informative! I would give it a 9 out of...

Undergraduateammarrauf - Oct 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 11, 2007
Samuel P. Huntington - The Clash of Civilizations

NEW - Hello, Could you please read my essay and give me some feedback? The prompt is: Samuel...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 9, 2007 -
Billy Budd Essay Final (AP English)

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a marvelous job with the essay, and have followed the prompt very well!...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
Career research paper on Social worker

5 - It sounds like this is about recognizing your biases. If you personally believe that homosexuality is unethical (i.e....

Research Papersgerry1 - Oct 8, 2007EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2010
How to use QTFairUse - process essay

2 - Greetings! I think your essay is easy to read and the directions sound simple to follow. I'd have...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
'Clubs and school activities' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to help with some editing advice! The main problem I see with it is...

Undergraduateucf4me - Oct 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
Argumentative Essay - Welfare Programs

6 - You're quite welcome, and, once again, good job! Sarah, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackss03 - Oct 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
New freedom and Nationalism - expositive essay

NEW - Prompt was to explain New Freedom and Nationalism, explain the differences between them, and how these two movements were...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 7, 2007 -
"Children of the trash" - Concise narrative - UF campus community

3 - Thanks again!...

Undergraduatenicamsgb - Oct 6, 2007nicamsgb - Oct 8, 2007
How to write a differential diagnosis essay?

5 - It is my understanding that the "differential diagnosis" is the one diagnosis which has been assigned by carefully assessing...

Essaysfinalyr - Oct 5, 2007EmpoweringEdu - Oct 9, 2014
BEAUTIFUL MIND schizophrenia - essay!

2 - Greetings! While you have some good information about schizophrenia in your outline, it reads like you are writing...

Essaysdido - Oct 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
'without hurting anyone' - Presentation about a person I admire

4 - Greetings! We are happy to help with editing your essay, or to give you ideas, but it sounds...

Speechessilsha - Oct 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 13, 2008
Tokugawa & sakoku - essay

2 - Greetings! A well-written and interesting essay! I have just a few editing tips: The raison d'ętre of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 4, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2007
Oral Report Based on Wilco Book Review

2 - Greetings! I think that's a very creative way to lead into the presentation of your book review! By...

Book Reportssilverystars - Oct 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 4, 2007
Need help with a reasearch paper about food safety

10 - Nutrition Factor Heath Food related disease...

Research Paperscat - Oct 3, 2007projectguru2012 - Feb 22, 2012
Essay describing my personality and decisions - Grad School Essay.

5 - Would you write me a short essay on this topic: being your own boss because I don't understand english....

Writing Feedbackbdoan - Oct 3, 2007eclipse_1201 - Jan 12, 2012
use of Extrensic rewards for classroom management

3 - thanks sarah for your comments. Anyone else who could add their opinions/thoughts. Your help will be greatly appriciated....

Essaysputrey - Oct 2, 2007putrey - Oct 6, 2007
COMPUTERS, the most intriguing and complicated things in the world

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job with your essay! I have just a few editing suggestions:...

Undergraduatehabtdemis - Oct 1, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams

NEW - Sports Memorabilia: Ebay VS. Field Of Dreams Sports: Fun to watch, exciting, and most of all competitive. These...

Writing FeedbackCNKPRODUCTIONS - Sep 30, 2007 -
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