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Civil consultant - personal statement GKS-U

2 - The information about your name, what it means, how to pronounce it, who named you, their rank in the...

Scholarshiphaidin - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Technology has made our lives too complicated, the solution is to live a simple life without it

2 - Uh, the essay is lacking 40 words to meet the minimum TOEFL word count. There is a writing minimum...

Writing Feedbackangela odile - Sep 22, 2024Holt - Sep 23, 2024
Learning My Limits (College Essay)

4 - If there was one piece of advice I could share with the world, it would be to embrace mistakes...

Undergraduatezbilly06 - Sep 20, 2024zbilly06 - Sep 22, 2024
Motion graphics and animation - sop for ugrad

3 - @Holt yes but its an culture exchange program ....

Undergraduatemaheen07 - Sep 21, 2024maheen07 - Sep 22, 2024
IELTS|The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

2 - You have written a presentation of 321 words. This is not an information presentation that properly represents the task...

Writing Feedbackvantev - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 22, 2024
My GKS-U Personal Statement (Computer Science and Engineering)

2 - I must say that you have a truly unique and interesting background for a GKS applicant. However, this "special"...

Scholarshipkhhnao - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 22, 2024
My Biggest Victory - Event in my life that illustrates my personality traits - GKS-U essay to PNU

2 - You are not supposed to present your personal statement in chapters. You are to write a full, compiled, and...

Undergraduateelectrise - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Mechanical engineering student - Personal statement for the GKS

2 - Since you are applying as an undergraduate for the Mechanical Engineering course, there is no sense in discussing your...

UndergraduateAimanomania - Sep 21, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmental

2 - There is no issue of controversy being presented in the original prompt. The examiner will deduct points for...

Writing Feedbackchonhocielts - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
Nowadays some consumers are much less influenced by advertising than in the past. What do you think

2 - One of the main requirements of the task 2 first paragraph is that the writer is expected to present...

Writing Feedbacktrucphuong - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 21, 2024
To become an engineering student - GKStaking the track of University track

2 - You are applying under the university track of the GKS scholarship, making your application process more cut throat than...

UndergraduateHowarderlguitang - Sep 20, 2024Holt - Sep 20, 2024
There is a problem on the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councillor.

2 - You need to write a longer letter for this task 1 essay. You only have 149 words. Try to...

Writing Feedbacklamphung - Sep 18, 2024Holt - Sep 18, 2024
Government's interference with human rights

2 - Kindly remember to clearly format your essay presentation based upon the regular expectation of the examiner. Each task 2...

Writing Feedbackdieulinh731008 - Sep 16, 2024Holt - Sep 17, 2024
Feminism and Empowerment - scholarship requirement, your own leadership examples

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review i appreciate it. Howbeit, i have revised it based on your...

ScholarshipRanme231 - Sep 10, 2024Ranme231 - Sep 16, 2024
Second Language a Commitment - Essay Assignment

3 - Acquiring a second language involves more than just picking up a new ability; it's a commitment that calls for...

UndergraduateSampson L - Sep 13, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
Personal statement for non degree study at Hunter College School of Education

3 - I have no doubt that the non-degree programs at Hunter College will enable me to accomplish my career goals...

Graduatesheriecherie - Sep 15, 2024KelvinG - Sep 16, 2024
Requesting Advice on the Flow and Structure of My Essay

2 - It is always a struggle to write essays. Each topic and writing style has a different focus which makes...

EssaysKelvinG - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
God's plan for me - Gks undergraduate personal statement for medicine

2 - Remove the reference to medical television shows as inspiration for your desire to become a doctor. Reviewers prefer that...

ScholarshipOctavia_20 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today children spend much time playing computer games and less time on sports.

2 - The last 2 sentences in the first paragraph do not meet the task accuracy requirements of the essay. Since...

Writing FeedbackVu Ha Chi - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
Quality Communication Can Improve Patient-Centered Health Outcomes Among Older Adults

2 - It is not customary for a research paper to begin by immediately presenting researched information in the introductory paragraph....

Research Paperscboykin - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 16, 2024
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax

2 - This does not add clarity to your writer's opinion. Since you already gave the correct measured response in...

Writing FeedbackSUNSHINE2k7 - Sep 15, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, Portugal

2 - Avoid the use of run-on sentences in all the paragraphs you will be writing. Your summary overview should be...

Writing Feedbackttrangthao - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Writing Task 1: The percentage of Australian men and women did regular physical activity

2 - You have over written this task. The task 1 essay should not be more than 150-200 words. That is...

Writing Feedbacktanminh123 - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
college app essay about my mom's battle with cancer

2 - What you went through does not qualify as an obstacle, challenge, setback, or failure. This is a personal tragedy...

Undergraduatesashay - Sep 13, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
A gap year that created Lexibridge

2 - Unfortunately, you cannot end this essay because you have not even completed a draft version. Your ideas are good,...

UndergraduateBbaaye - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
The benefits of working and learning from home

2 - While your essay falls within the word requirement for a 40 minute task, your response is totally incorrect for...

Writing Feedbackduchuy - Sep 12, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
COMPUTERS ARE OFTEN ARGUED TO BE THE MOST IMPORTANT INVENTION OF THE LAST HUNDRED YEARS

2 - The essay fails to respond to the given discussion prompt. The writer's opinion is incorrectly formatted. The response should...

Writing Feedbackmaiquynh - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Letter of Motivation for M.Sc Data Science Germany.

2 - This does not come across as a motivational letter. It will be seen mostly as an essay form of...

Lettersemnikkhil - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Ielts writing task 1: the water usage

2 - Formatting is the main problem that I see with this essay. A task 1 essay should be composed of...

Writing Feedbackpthngannnn - Sep 11, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think this is happening?

2 - The essay does not meet the minimum 250 word count requirement. At 207 words, the deductions that will be...

Writing Feedbacktthaorrr - Sep 10, 2024Holt - Sep 15, 2024
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