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Art Self-Evaluation piece: the process of creating your art portfolio

3 - I have had to take a long look at the last four years in LaGuardia & my art through...

Writing FeedbackJd87rh - May 21, 2010EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
Technology, one offspring of science, is a world of imagination being made true

7 - to some extent* :? Interesting way of approaching the prompt. placing down arguments for the assertive and...

Writing Feedbacktriplesmickey - May 12, 2010meisj0n - May 22, 2010
Memories of a teacher from elementary school.

2 - Hi Comments: Try to have less about the general statements about teachers in the beginning unless you...

Undergraduateshalini singh - May 22, 2010meisj0n - May 22, 2010
It is easy to welcome innovation and accept new ideas

3 - Is this really how they wrote the statement? It is a run on sentence. I would do...

Writing FeedbackGary1986 - May 21, 2010EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
'Writing that haiku' - Pomona Supplement - Fun activity

6 - At 2:00 a.m., four friends and I packed our bags and set out toward [name of school] high school....

Undergraduategumdrop41 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
ESL art poem - Mona Lisa

9 - The best kind. This poem planted a familiar and powerful image in my mind (the Mona Lisa) and...

Poetryvincenthessel - May 10, 2010EF_Kevin - May 22, 2010
MSc programme to support your career and personal development - how to answer it

8 - Thank you so much Kevin. And hey am really flattered....

Graduatea 100 hills - Apr 21, 2010a 100 hills - May 22, 2010
Today we have a variety of food and we have various choices to prepare food

3 - I also think that eating "fast food", whether it McDonald's or the Olive Garden it's not as healthy as...

Writing FeedbackArshin - May 21, 2010haeddleman - May 21, 2010
Speech on : Life and Gifts, help editing my speech

9 - No it's not a essay. It's a informative speech for my communication class (public speaking)....

SpeechesHigherEducation - May 19, 2010HigherEducation - May 21, 2010
Tech(No or Yes)logy. A means to an end

3 - haha, I already love it. When you begin to write, you need to have a big buildup of...

Scholarshipmeisj0n - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
Texas App. Essay About Open Mindedness

4 - Thanks so much for the pointers! :)...

Undergraduatepinkpoodle - May 17, 2010pinkpoodle - May 21, 2010
Compare and Contrast Essay About "The Giver"-Feedback

2 - I think you should add one more sentence to the end of the first paragraph, before you start...

Book ReportsTh3KaNgSt3R - May 20, 2010EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
Music and art in school essay

6 - In conclusion, undoubtedly, this is the era of computers and science. Therefore, schools must be flexible enough to...

Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
ESSAY- Comment on freedom on choice of clothing in schools - FEEDBACK

2 - No comma necessary here: School is the place which lays foundation ... progress or their overall personalities ....

Writing Feedbackprince303 - May 20, 2010EF_Kevin - May 21, 2010
Peace Corps Admissions Essay, reasons for wanting to serve

3 - Thanks for the response! I will definitely implement those changes....

Undergraduatebsquared - May 19, 2010bsquared - May 20, 2010
"a career in mental health, substance abuse" - Graduate Admission Statement help

3 - I often wandered wondered why I never said ... hen one day one of the girls asked me...

Graduatewade2466 - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Help with identifying a specific and feasible research project in Bio safety

2 - You have tons of options, obviously, and you also have more knowledge in this field than I have, but...

Dissertationscampbem - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Marine Pollution Introductory paragraph

2 - Source of survival is a strange phrase. It might be better to write: Water is the most crucial factor...

Writing Feedbackeveehp - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Question on Style - dividing points to paragraphs?

4 - Yep, I agree that it is best to split them into 2. I like paragraphs to be about 100...

Essaysschroodles - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Economic forecasts - briefly discussion of proposed research areas

3 - Yes, I think Jon might have been talking about this number agreement problem: Forests are important economic resources; they...

Scholarshipmyraniel - May 19, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
My hero, Terry Fox born in Canada

3 - Yes, that is true. It seems that Namon is struggling to improve her/his English, though, so let's help...

Writing Feedbackthailand - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
how should i write my introduction for an essay on celiac disease?

3 - Jon, that's great advice. I think this is a case where it is VERY important to wait until...

Research Papersbrookenoel92 - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
Parents should encourage their high school students for part time jobs !

4 - Working twenty years at an inconsequential job may not give as much satisfaction as a highly prolific and demanding...

Writing Feedbackshalini singh - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 20, 2010
SAT: even though having a good leader is important, we should not blindly follow his decision

5 - Thank you for your advice :)...

Writing Feedbackpuroodsy - May 18, 2010puroodsy - May 20, 2010
"True beauty" is the good humanity

6 - I think your grasp of English is really good actually, but it just takes practice Tips on writing:...

Writing Feedbackyangzom - May 14, 2010meisj0n - May 20, 2010
IELTS; MOVIES & TELEVISION CAN POSITIVELY INFLUENCE PEOPLES' BEHAVIOR

2 - try to avoid writing firstly, secondly.. instead use sentences like one of the significant reasons.. over all good ideas,...

Writing Feedbackphuocqui - May 17, 2010prince303 - May 19, 2010
Research paper: Which tense to use when describing well established tests? (APA)

6 - Hi Kevin, thank you very much - that's what I wanted to hear ;) regards, PsychWriter...

Research PapersPsychWriter - May 15, 2010PsychWriter - May 19, 2010
I have to write a satarical essay about modern day life

3 - I agree! This is a good topic. But there are others, too. I hope you came up...

EssaysLeet0nee - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 19, 2010
Cigarette/alcohol ads, personality vs experience, energy - argumentative essays

2 - No, you can't avoid learning how to do it. You have to learn how. I wonder if you are...

Essayskresha91 - May 18, 2010EF_Kevin - May 19, 2010
Course about which i had expectation which may not have been met

3 - steel steal It is quoted by A famous quotation of Theodore Roosevelt reads, "Those who have... ...

Undergraduateshalini singh - May 17, 2010EF_Kevin - May 19, 2010
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