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obstacle and family history, culture - UCF personal statement essay

3 - I think you should revise the sentences: The loss of my cousin brought my whole family together as a...

Undergraduateluckyplayer777 - Oct 30, 2009masood_mj - Nov 3, 2009
The locket. Last words my sister said to me at the airport

4 - thanks so much...may you please check my poem on Poetry Writing section. .... thank you again......

Undergraduatebilal ABUZENAH - Oct 31, 2009bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 3, 2009
Personal statement for a Master program- Need assistance

8 - Hi , you have actually written very good SOP , I could not see any of the disabilities...

GraduateKarmele - Oct 8, 2009NEHALB - Nov 3, 2009
My dad has always had this personal history of how he escaped from communist Bulgaria

4 - Thanks, Janson, for making a great contribution here!...

Undergraduatefendij3 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Mary Kay Cosmetics - Thesis Help

4 - Oh, I hope it is going well for you. You must be in class right now (Tuesday) presenting whatever...

Essaystbteague - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Rice "Why this college" motivation essay

3 - ...program and strong reputation for providing quality education. Another thing that attracted me to Rice was its relatively...

Undergraduateblubunny5 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Conduct Explaination- UF

4 - Yes, college is big business, and you stand a good chance despite these issues. I suggest rewriting this...

UndergraduateBrickwiggles - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Any topic related to: Whitman, Dickinson, Yeats, Frost, Stevens, or Eliot

4 - Jeannie, you have been giving some great advice. I always smile when I see you have responded to a...

Poetrysummerbabe - Oct 31, 2009Notoman - Nov 3, 2009
Undergraduate Student Exchange Presonal Statement Essay, How to make it well?

6 - You have answered the prompt. I am not familiar with the Upper Intermediate Writing qualification. You prof is wrong...

Undergraduateanisa yosef - Oct 27, 2009linmark - Nov 3, 2009
Does music pay a important role in people's life?

2 - I particularly enjoyed reading this essay because I myself am a musician and understand where you're coming from :)...

Writing Feedbackmandyhhhhhhhh - Nov 3, 2009rechungp - Nov 3, 2009
Montage--the Four Essences of Cooking

7 - Very original, engaging and refreshing!! (satiating??) Aside from inconsistent tenses and some typos, I have 2 new pointers: ...

Undergraduatezouztingt - Oct 22, 2009linmark - Nov 3, 2009
yale supplement -- i am defined by who i actually am

4 - Are you still pursuing this thread or did you already submit your essay? If yes and no, aside...

Undergraduatebpsullivan92 - Oct 24, 2009linmark - Nov 3, 2009
'To be influential' commonapp essay

5 - wow, it feels sooooo great to see your reply, THX!!! I was thinking about reiterating the question at the...

Undergraduatejwbx2yl - Oct 30, 2009jwbx2yl - Nov 3, 2009
sending criminals in jail or offering them education & job training

3 - Thank you Kevin. I deeply appreciate your modification and advice.The next article, I will try my best to avoid...

Writing Feedbackmandyhhhhhhhh - Oct 31, 2009mandyhhhhhhhh - Nov 3, 2009
UC Application Personal Statement "Timidity"

3 - UCs look for people that can contribute to their schools. They are like communities. I don't exactly think this...

Undergraduatepepperist - Nov 3, 2009chrisraiden - Nov 3, 2009
Infinities of Chess, 150 word common application short answer.

10 - EF_Kevin thank you very much. As a thinker, I've always enjoyed games with the potential to exercise the...

Undergraduateqomoco - Oct 30, 2009qomoco - Nov 3, 2009
"Participation rights of children" - it's difficult to get my essay started!

2 - Oh, I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. I hope you are doing well with it. The...

Essaysmillymoo - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
I've been in my field for about 15 years ; PhD Cover letter for Irish Uni?

2 - Hello! Please post that CV only if it does not appear anywhere else on the Internet. Sounds like...

LettersShaari - Oct 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Active voice or Passive voice? Need clarification

4 - You got it. Can you feel how much more powerful it is? Instead of, Kevin was killed by a...

Grammar, UsagePencilToPaper - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
UF essay- "New perspective from a close experience"

5 - Yes, delete "the" and keep "swung on swings." Sorry I'm late! Yes it makes sense, no you...

Undergraduateapa6177 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
unfamiliar teenagers - BROWN SUPP. Best Advice

5 - It will be great if, at the end, you reflect on the advice and talk about it, using the...

Undergraduatesammiepuddle - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
Rutgers Essay about benefiting from and contributing to its community

3 - I think you should write seventeen instead of 17. In academics, I've always been talented with subjects that...

Undergraduatebyflash - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
UF Admissions Essay - Meaningful Event - Left by Dad

2 - Great job! I found some corrections to make here: I didn't realize it at that time that I...

Undergraduatejlooser09 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
"Making a change for the better, a photo at a time."-UF adm. essay

6 - "My experience in my photo class has been a brilliant experience so far, and has already made a change...

UndergraduateBrickwiggles - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
How my life has shaped me towards a career in robotics- UC application essay.

5 - Some people think "over" is not quite right: Being one of more than 1.5 billion Indians in the world,...

Undergraduatecaffino54 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
UF Admissions Essay -- Boarding School

5 - ...was not only challenging but also turned out to be rewarding. It was a little awkward. You can...

Undergraduatechewyy123 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
The Aurora Borealis

5 - I had the idea, while reading this, that it will be better if you use more image words --...

UndergraduateGoldSwimmer - Oct 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
Strange admission essay questions (University of Victoria - social work program)

3 - The first one says they want to make sure the applicants really do have aspirations that are consistent with...

Undergraduatejbonnell - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
"My real estate bubble" - Stanford essay #1 & "Why I want to go to Stanford"

5 - I don't think every Stanford applicant has determination. Determination is rare....

Undergraduate10jinw - Oct 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
Transition question (Christian philosopher...)

2 - Hi there, if you need help with a transition, I have to see 2 things. Show me 2 things...

Grammar, Usagekjkar - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
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