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"Never too Buff"; two examples of thesis statments

18 - Now, reading with my defense down, I can take advantage of his point of view. Thanks again, Sean Oh...

Writing Feedbacklilmisha - Mar 21, 2009lilmisha - Mar 27, 2009
Can someone help with me with this letter i wrote to the College President

3 - This essay is upbeat and energized. You seem to have a cool personality. I think I understand you about...

Lettersdewain - Mar 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 26, 2009
Does the election of Barack Obama mean the Civil Rights Movement is over?

4 - You should also decide what you think the goal of the Civil Rights movement is, exactly. Is it to...

Essaysben1038 - Mar 25, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 26, 2009
Meaning of "Memo & Articles of association are the constitution of a limited company"

4 - Hi Kevin Thanks you very much. that helped me. you guys didn't let me down. Again Thanks...

Essaysireland2002 - Mar 19, 2009ireland2002 - Mar 26, 2009
My pet essay

7 - That's a first, Mustafa! :)...

Writing FeedbackU to the Woods - Mar 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 26, 2009
Compose Topic Sentences

4 - Maybe "...is one of the must-have features" will do?...

Grammar, Usagebezabee98 - Mar 22, 2009Rosamond - Mar 26, 2009
One of Edison's invention - Does this article sound good in English?

4 - I though of this: When Edison was fourteen, he worked at a railway station only at night...

Writing Feedbacktasneemspring - Mar 24, 2009Rosamond - Mar 26, 2009
Proudest achievement of my life-linear generator buoy

3 - pretty impressive essay... specially ur ideas.. overall i don thin dis essay requires much of changes.. i agree wid...

Writing Feedbackabhishek - Mar 25, 2009savvy - Mar 26, 2009
political science question -- pick a topic, develop an argument

12 - Yes, in retrospect, I would focus on Gingrich's successes and not his personal failures. It is a political...

EssaysMoeMoe1 - Mar 23, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 25, 2009
What are the Typical Steps of the Doctoral Process?

2 - Haha, even though I'm a ways off from my dissertation, I still found this post interesting. Thanks for posting....

DissertationsEF_Team - Mar 24, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 25, 2009
Soldiers experiences in Iraq, World War II, Vietnam.

4 - This is a compare/contrast on the soldiers' experiences, not on the wars themselves, the way I see it. ...

Writing Feedbacksadly204 - Mar 23, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 25, 2009
Education in Columbia vs USA

3 - Yes, the order in which you write the essay might go like this: Write a paragraph about education...

Essayssteffi202 - Mar 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 25, 2009
Intro for my essay about army lowing its standards. Sound good so far?

3 - Another way to fix the error near that semi-colon is to just keep it the same and use a...

Writing Feedbacksgc88 - Mar 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 24, 2009
Catcher in the Rye: reality vs. fantasy

20 - That's great news. Hope we can help out with your next essay, too....

Writing Feedbacksc15pcz - Mar 11, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 24, 2009
Scholarship application essay for review (UK university)

4 - Working at this forum, I have something in common with admissions officers. I see enough of these essays to...

ScholarshipKhalil - Mar 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
Karl Marx vs. The Economic Hitman

7 - Yes, but the fact that people believe it does work means that they accept levels of income inequality that...

Writing FeedbackGautama - Mar 21, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 23, 2009
Short Response - to change one thing about my community

5 - Yeah, I would state exactly what you would do with that money? What is it that you would specifically...

Undergraduateflight23 - Mar 22, 2009Gautama - Mar 23, 2009
What is the biggest obstacle that have had to overcome in Life?

2 - "So as I sort out the biggest obstacle I think of my biggest challenge." --this seems a little unnecessary....

Scholarshipjoalex7 - Mar 23, 2009Gautama - Mar 23, 2009
I hopefully graduate suma cum laude in Cinematography

5 - For the sake of making that first paragraph well-structured, I think you should find a way to add one...

Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
review my quote essay ("The desire to know..")

7 - In all scope of All human achievement begins with a desire to know, and this desire is what drives...

Writing FeedbackGrammarFool - Mar 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
Save Me A Spot In College

7 - Well, the prompt doesn't ask to specify a college and in fact seems to point to all colleges in...

Poetryflight23 - Mar 21, 2009flight23 - Mar 22, 2009
success and their rules essay

4 - Yes, we're trying to get students to give it a try, first, or at least ask specific questions when...

Essaysjayshine16 - Mar 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
The final input came from my brother-in-law, cardiologist - why did you choose this career?

8 - I came to the United States as a n new immigrant in 2005. In my home country, Romania, I...

Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 7, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
Gay, lesbian, bisexual teens in America

2 - Here are some revisions and suggestions to get you started: "Gay, lesbian, bisexual people are treated like different...

Writing Feedbackchipmunk - Mar 21, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 22, 2009
Roman Empire: Cultural and Political Changes

4 - Also, those libraries that existed before the rise of the Internet are still in place, and may contain useful...

Research PapersJokestar - Mar 21, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 22, 2009
NUS Scholarship App Essay - Achievements & academic interests

3 - My interests in economics, business and finance have been long standing. Since youth , I have always been particularly...

Scholarshipkids_jessy - Mar 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
Pygmalion Paragraph for brochure

3 - Hey, that is good stuff from Sean! Yes, the parts where you tell some of what happens in the...

Writing Feedbackmenamilad - Mar 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
Essay on Professor's house & Old Mortality

4 - Alright, I will give it a shot first. Thanks!...

Essayssams - Mar 20, 2009sams - Mar 22, 2009
"Why do you slay the righteous?"/ Narrative Essay - Story or Narration?

13 - yeah i probably should've quoted, i thought it was from somewhere i just didnt know exactly where....

EssaysUMK - Mar 16, 2009UMK - Mar 22, 2009
Goals: Dancer, Hairdresser, Musician

5 - The first goal beside that of becoming a dancer is to become an elementary school teacher. One reason...

Writing Feedbackanzgurl - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 21, 2009
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