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"Tryouts" - essay prompt 1

2 - Good afternoon :) I do think that this is too specific for their prompt. I believe they are...

Undergraduatesncooper10 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Asian Americans and the glass ceiling" - Prompt #1 UC APPL

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Undergraduateswt_babiigrl - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 25, 2008 -
IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

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Writing Feedbackmie08 - Nov 24, 2008mie08 - Nov 24, 2008
In search of an Epigraph for an essay on Poe's "Ligeia"

3 - I actually liked Antoine's more, but I thought I might've been biased. The Little Prince is my all time...

EssaysTe Amari - Nov 24, 2008Te Amari - Nov 24, 2008
'my grades did not meet my standards' - University of California PROMPT #2

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Undergraduatekids_jessy - Nov 24, 2008kids_jessy - Nov 24, 2008
UC Santa Barbara Application: Prompt #1

4 - this piece is nicely done. it is a touchy story...

Undergraduatebwood - Nov 13, 2008cielov - Nov 24, 2008
UNC essay - the result of my curiosity

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"Gained social, intellectual, or cultural differences" - UM Diversity

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Undergraduatemihirmj - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism

2 - Good evening :) I have edited the first two sections of your piece and also given some general...

Writing Feedbackjay45 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"I learnt to be positive" - UC prompt

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
essay for the Pratt (plesase revise the grammar)

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Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Accounting research paper - any (advanced) topic - but easy as possible!

2 - Good afternoon :) What about doing a piece on IRC Sec. 651; trusts? I wrote a piece on...

Research Papersfibonacci - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"young teenagers" - UC prompt 1- does this work?

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Undergraduatemathfun1227 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Animation career - Essay Question (how to begin and topics to cover)

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Essaysjasleen - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"I am the youngest of eight children" - Prompt 1 essay Help in title

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Undergraduatejrod91 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
UIUC essay - Child Education Work

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
A time when you tried something for which you had no talent. Essay.

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"born in Salinas, California" - application essay

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Undergraduatemember123 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
my first intro to chemistry class - UM Major

3 - yea sorry i forgot to answer what exactly i wanted advice on but I just wanted to know if...

Undergraduatemihirmj - Nov 23, 2008mihirmj - Nov 24, 2008
"Music is discipline" - Prompt #2 uc essay

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Undergraduatehsgrad09 - Nov 22, 2008hsgrad09 - Nov 24, 2008
Law School SOP (single mother)

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Telling the truth is not a best option always

5 - Good morning :) I think I'd probably give it a low C right now, as it is without...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Are self-published books worth giving reviews on?

2 - Good morning :) Not all of the time. My experience has been that many self-published books are very...

Book ReportsGianna - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"Ping pong is serious business" - common app essays

9 - You're very welcome. I think your tone comes across just fine; I wouldn't worry too much about misunderstandings. Best...

UndergraduateNikhil - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
UC prompt 2, how a friend went missing, changed my life

NEW - Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this...

Undergraduatejoycewrice - Nov 24, 2008 -
'Class volunteer leaders' - Essay-elaborate one of your activities

NEW - The Common Application Short Answer elaborate one of your activities(extracurricular, personal experience, or work experience)(150words or fewer) plz...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Nov 24, 2008 -
"my fervor for math grows" - UC personal statement. Promt #1

NEW - Hi, Gloria and other fellow proof readers. I really thank you all for saving people's lives here. As for...

Undergraduatet0mmypark - Nov 24, 2008 -
"Visiting Vietnam in the summer of 200" - UC PROMPTS

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduatemike0oh - Nov 23, 2008 -
To enrich Howard University - Help with law school personal statement.

9 - Good evening, I apologize for using all caps, I had no intent of yelling at you. Thank you...

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