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"americanism means to be proud" - essay

NEW - American means to be proud. It means to stand up for what you believe in and to fight for...

Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 28, 2008 -
Describing an object through a capitalist lens!

2 - Good evening. How about, "Weary of changing from my classic journal to this novel, inutile, nugatory bibliopegistical I...

Essaysdimitrom - Sep 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Intern for Barack Obama's campaign ; EXTRACURRICULAR

2 - Good evening. In the common app, it is usually best to use the brief space you have to...

UndergraduateDamselfly - Sep 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Personal Statement- meaningful experience ("Antonio stung my heart")

2 - You've got a unique premis here, but it could use some more personal details from you to really make...

Undergraduate4ever2bleed - Sep 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
"strong morals are necessary in today's society" - FSU Admission Essay

2 - I think you have a great essay here. You explain how this characteristic affects your life and give great...

Undergraduatejkrusemark1 - Sep 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay

2 - Good evening. Well, you've definately gotten a topic, haven't you? :) Don't be afraid, it's just a fancy...

Writing Feedbackkaytee - Sep 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
'multifaceted culture' - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission; a vibrant community

7 - By "showing" you use adjectives, metaphors, and similies frequently but not too frequently in your writing. By being concise,...

Undergraduatekotak07 - Sep 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Palm beach County's Zero Tolerance policy - UF essay

NEW - THis is my essay for UF, I would greatly appreciate it if anyone would read it and let me...

Undergraduateredfishh2 - Sep 27, 2008 -
Speed essay - free interpretation

NEW - Hi, can you help me look through this? Thank you! Racing Speed Daemons The rain slicked down...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 27, 2008 -
Orlando's beauty/internship and employment opportunities; WHY CHOOSE UCF?

NEW - Why did you choose to apply to UCF? In April 2008, my family and I traveled to Florida...

Undergraduateekinkler90 - Sep 27, 2008 -
"Next up, from New Jersey" - do you think I've answered the question?

2 - Good evening. Grammatically and mechanically the essay is clean. If the word count allows, I suggest adding a...

Undergraduateekinkler90 - Sep 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 26, 2008
'pelagic domain' / 'white uniform' / 'Russian math' - 3 UC Essays - Comment

2 - Good evening. In regards to the first essay, I believe your text answers the prompt effectively. You use...

Undergraduatesgrockergirl - Sep 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 26, 2008
the gregarious young man to be - admission essay

3 - Thanks Gloria!...

UndergraduateJaguarKing100 - Sep 25, 2008JaguarKing100 - Sep 26, 2008
Accomplishment essay (skiing Tiger the most difficult slope @ Boston Mills)

NEW - Hi, I would appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on this and let me know how...

Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 25, 2008 -
FSU essay---desire to major in pre-law. suggestions for improvement?

3 - thank you thank you thank you!!! i really appreciate your help :) but i do have one more question......

Undergraduateccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008ccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008
Don't change our teacher - keep him until the end of the course 059.

2 - Good evening. What are the specifics of your assignment? Thanks. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Lettersflor - Sep 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice

2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....

Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
"the signs of Lepromatous Leprosy" - phd sop

3 - Good evening. OK, let's see: "There it was...the telltale sign on her hand. [...] The incident started...

Graduatesrau - Sep 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay

3 - Good afternoon. Without having access to the lecture and notes, I have to say I think you've fulfilled...

Writing FeedbackBradlays - Sep 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Education and my parents - Ucf admissions essay

2 - My parents' influences in my academics is personified through me everyday; however, my loving sisters are responsible for my...

Undergraduatemcsmike - Sep 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
"traditions which I can relate to as a student" - fsu essay

2 - I'm not really sure if your essay answers the prompt. You define tradition very nicely and illustrate examples of...

Undergraduatejaw7000 - Sep 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Obstacle, family history, uniqueness - UCF essay

NEW - UCF We ask that you respond to two of the topics below. Your personal statement should be no longer...

Undergraduateccw_20 - Sep 25, 2008 -
AODAI - MY NATIONAL COSTUME - description paragraph

3 - thanks u so much. I got an A on this one. nice day,...

Writing Feedbackglass2611 - Sep 23, 2008glass2611 - Sep 25, 2008
'Unexciting homework' - Common Application Activity Essay

5 - Good morning. Well, this boils down to what you feel you can answer more in a way that...

UndergraduateAndrea09 - Sep 11, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
"To An Athelete Dying Young" - poem analysis

7 - You've got a good idea for your introduction here. I think you can shorten it up by stating that...

PoetryArvi - Sep 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Essay for scholarship - Master of Architecture in Deakin University in Australia

6 - I have one more question. I need some kind of heading. What do you think about: "My motivation...

Scholarshipsabrina - Sep 20, 2008sabrina - Sep 25, 2008
Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?

NEW - Hi, I have to write an essay about the effects of participation in a sport ( which i...

Writing Feedbackconchonho - Sep 25, 2008 -
Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research

NEW - Human Cloning Research The scene of this conversation takes place at Sacramento State University science clubroom. This is...

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Sep 24, 2008 -
"This is the worst economy I've ever seen." - Personal Essay

3 - Thank you very much for the critique :) Much appreciated! I would say this forum is really helpful for...

Writing Feedbackkids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008kids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008
FOGANA, Indian cultural dance competition - common app activities essay

NEW - Hi, I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on this and tell me if i should...

Undergraduatemihirmj - Sep 24, 2008 -
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