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'Healthcare Documentation Integrity' - essay for admission into an Art School

9 - Thank-you again I submitted my application today Is there anyway this thread can be erased?...

UndergraduateKWM - Aug 10, 2008KWM - Aug 22, 2008
Essay: Who should pay tuition fees? STUDENTS or the GOVERNMENT?

NEW - It is sometimes argued that because the tertiary education is greater benefit to the individual than to the society,...

Writing Feedbackstressful - Aug 22, 2008 -
'Forget the presence and look at the future' - another FSU admissions essay

2 - Good job. Your essay is very confident and spirited. You explain clearly why this motto applies to you and...

UndergraduateRunyen - Aug 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 21, 2008
'Computer discovery' - essay for acceptance in Computer related field

NEW - [current date aligned to right] [my name aligned to left] [my address aligned to left] Title: How...

Undergraduatepenner - Aug 21, 2008 -
'Invisible things' - Religion Argumentative Essay

NEW - prompt: R.D. Gold in his book Bondage of the Mind basically says that religious dogmas, and religion itself, is...

Writing FeedbackKIDS - Aug 20, 2008 -
Essay about The Fountainhead by Ayn Rand

2 - Good afternoon. Ayn Rand was a philosopher, so try and look at her works from another (all) point(s)...

Essaysdorkee - Aug 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 20, 2008
'Introducted to Jesus Christ' / 'Varsity soccer' - where you come from and your world

NEW - Can you review both of my essays? Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from ď for example,...

UndergraduateFor3v3r - Aug 20, 2008 -
Darfur, Sudan - people, history, identity essay

NEW - hey! im getting marked out of 60 10 for background info-family size, geo, assets, jobs Description of conflict -10marks...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 20, 2008 -
LOOSING THE BEST FRIEND- Life obstacle!

3 - thank you soooo very much! that helped me out tremendously!...

Undergraduatebeebee - Aug 19, 2008beebee - Aug 20, 2008
Life of a death row inmate research, I have a thesis sentence

4 - I suggest you wait on the conclusion and the opening/thesis until after you've written the paper if possible. After...

Research Paperssheisabrat - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science

2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...

Scholarshipdjellel - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
"changing experiance" UF admission essay

4 - You are welcome. I think that since this is a very personal essay you put a lot of emotion...

UndergraduateDiiyah - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay

2 - You make some really good points in this essay. If you can find some research supporting how much the...

Writing Feedbackngngmaiphuong - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
'My popularity' - college experience, your contribution UF admission essay

5 - As I stated before, your focus should be on your thoughts and feelings after the scare. Remove as much...

Undergraduatedman0227 - Aug 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
How to avoid in writing in the passive tone

2 - Good morning. In regards to the passive tone, the biggest "key" to remember is, "Don't tell your readers...

Grammar, Usagesylock232 - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
pen names in MLA works cited pages

2 - Good morning. In this case, you should use the pen name. When citing, you should use exactly what...

Grammar, Usagesarek - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
'medicine and future hard work' - essay (with star wars), applying to pre-med

9 - Keep up your hard work! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Undergraduatetorchamp - Aug 9, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
'her husband, my father, has died' - UF - meaningful event

NEW - I would like some advice on my essay to the University of Florida the topic is: Describe a...

UndergraduateBrianOchuko - Aug 16, 2008 -
Being in the middle of the spiral staircase. Essay on Education

5 - Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is it not...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Aug 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized

2 - Make sure that everything in quotation marks is properly cited according to the specifics of your required citation style....

Writing Feedbacksylock232 - Aug 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
"Jennifer Lim" - College Application Essay

NEW - I was just starting fourth grade when I met Jennifer Lim. Then, I had just moved to the Philippines...

Undergraduateop2607 - Aug 16, 2008 -
Help with an Argument/research essay about "Animals in research"

9 - Hello Gloria, Thanks for your last minute kind response. I never ever forget this help. Thanks again. ...

Essaysnewworld - Jul 30, 2008newworld - Aug 14, 2008
'A dream come true' - Vires, Artes, Mores - FSU admissions essay

2 - I believe that it is. You explain how these values have impacted your life, and how you interpret them....

Undergraduatezaz - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
'the barracades blocking' - FSU Admissions Virfes, Artes, Mores

2 - You've got a good start here, and some opportunities where you can expand upon how these values have impacted...

Undergraduateoliviasimon - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
Identifying Line Numbers in Shakespearean Plays

2 - Good morning. Are there any explanations in the introduction or preface to the edition? Since each edition of...

Book ReportsBrendan - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
'How could I have Epilepsy' - FSU admissions essay:

6 - I agree with you; the second one is more focused and thus more appropriate. I was fortunate enough...

Undergraduatecollege_girl - Aug 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 13, 2008
'The Youngest' - Question about main common app essay.

5 - Ok thanks any advice on the essay itself?...

Undergraduatewwr - Aug 12, 2008wwr - Aug 12, 2008
The unique way designers think; SOP - Design

NEW - What intrigues me is how long it takes us to appreciated the importance of design in our community and...

Graduatenandasc - Aug 12, 2008 -
Writing a a preface; need help with citation.

4 - You should put it in quotations since you are making reference to it as an entity. Regards, Gloria...

Research Papersevilwolfy - May 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
Topic 4: prohibite smoking in public places

3 - Let's see: Nowadays, people go to public places such as cinemas,restaurants, or bars after long days at offices....

Writing FeedbackSophie - Jun 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
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