Writing Feedback / Technology as A Supplement in Education [4]

The growth of technology has significant impact in several parts of human's lives to maximize their merits. In this case, I want to highlight related to application of technology in educational sector. It is commonly known that a number of employees at the school should utilize technology to support their occupation. Although technology cannot replace teacher's jobs, it has some benefits in education world. Consequently, technology should be applied in educational institutions due to the fact that it makes the learning process more interesting, is possible for students to study everywhere, and engages students to perform powerfully.

First, in digital era, technology makes lessons much more attractive for students so it will help teacher to deliver his subject easier. Another reason why technology should be maximized is that it has flexible value for students to study at their own place. They are able to learn whenever and wherever for getting comprehensive access. Finally, even though technology cannot substitute teacher's position, it has essential role to persuade students in learning process effectively.

In short, the development of technology has a lot of advantages in education. Both technology and education are the perfect combination to support learning process in educational institutions. However, technology should be enhanced in traditional teaching wisely.

Writing Feedback / Tourism as a Crucial Key for Promoting Cultures and Increasing Local Income [3]

Entertainment is one of essential needs for human's lives to kill the leisure time with their lovely family. It is generally known that everyone has different ways to spend their holiday by enjoying breathtaking views and stunning landscapes. Exploring tourist destinations is one of the perfect ways to deal with their time, so that is why tourism should be enlightened as an important aspect in each country.

Although tourism may become possible local traditional and cultures to be endangered, it has some other benefits for every states. Therefore, tourism should be developed in a number of countries due to the fact that it promotes local cultures and is able to increase local income.

First, as a popular leisure activity, tourism brings tourists to get new experience different cultures when they go on holiday to explore several places of interest. Furthermore, they can open their minds and learn to speak other languages. Second, tourism attracts tourists to spend their money in which helps to improve standard of living in local tourist attractions. Then, local people can increase significantly their income through local crafts, services, and foods. In addition, tourism creates job opportunities in accommodation and entertainment.

In conclusion, as a vital entertainment, tourism has several merits owing to its positive impacts. However, developing tourism should be maximized by native people and government to introduce and protect local tourist destinations and cultures.

Writing Feedback / The Highlight of Introverts' Powers (TED) [2]

According to Susan Cain, she considered that introversion is tremendously different from shy. Introversion is about a way to respond stimulation, while shyness is about scare of social judgment. She said that nowadays, a number of institutions are generally formed only for extroverted people and it happens in schools and workplaces. For instance, most of teachers design the atmosphere of class to work by grouping in all subjects. It may become a merit for extroverted students, but not to introverted students because they prefer to work alone or by themselves. It only makes them feeling so guilty due to the fact that introverts seem like individual people. As a matter of fact, introverts have fascinating powers as their strong points. According to research, they have more deep knowledge and get better grades than extroverts do. In addition, they often show better outcomes to manage works completely in their workplaces.

Writing Feedback / Home-schooling: A Way to Educate Children or Seclude Them? [3]

Education is a crucial key for getting better lives and giving people to broaden their horizon and skills. As an essential qualification to find work, education is utilized to get higher salary and open many better job opportunities.

As of now, although some parents decide to educate their children at home by taking home-schooling because they are not satisfied with local schools, home-schooling has several negative impacts for children. Consequently, home-schooling is not a right decision to educate their children because it will make them to be an individual person and gives them lack educational skills.

Firstly, home-schooling only provides a little of social skills due to the fact that there is hardly no interaction in its learning process. It is caused because children do not know how to socialize with each other and get the social experience that school offers. Secondly, formal schools provide children to get a better overall educational experience because children will be taught by several different teachers. It is contrary to home-schooling that they only learn with a few lessons and teachers.

In conclusion, as the evidence shows, home-schooling is not an alternative way to educate children owing to its disadvantages. The current method of home-schooling causes children to be an antisocial person and getting lack of knowledge and capabilities. However, social values and wide horizon should be had by all students as their educational outcomes.

Writing Feedback / Be Careful for Your Bike, The Thief Will Grab It [2]

Do you fond of cycling? Most people like cycling because it is a convenient way to keep their body fit. If you are quite fond of cycling, you must have a bike or may be several bikes, do not you think? Nowadays, you should be careful because there are a number of thieves who want to steal your bikes. As a matter of fact, approximately 1 million bikes are stolen every year in the United States.

It is generally known that some bike thieves are very discerning due to the fact that they only steal for expensive bikes. Yet, sometimes bike thieves are not quite smart. For instance, my friend Matt had a luxurious bike with a painted mark in collage. Unfortunately, it was stolen while he was in class. At that moment, he reported it to the police, but his bike could not be found. As a result, he begun looking for it by himself and luckily, one day he saw his old bike near the cafeteria. After investigating the location, a student came out of the cafeteria and Matt immediately took the bike.

At first, the student laid when Matt asked him about the bike. The student persuaded Matt that he bought the bike two years ago. Then, Matt will call the police directly if the student does not admit his lying. Finally, Matt grab his bike and rode home with pleased feeling. However, we should beware wherever and whenever.

Writing Feedback / (TED) What Makes A Good Life? Lesson from the Longest Study on Happiness (Robert Waldinger) [2]

Everyone has their own definition about a good life. A recent adult survey stated that over 80 percent said that getting rich was the most important life goals for them and another major life goal was to become fame. In addition, The Harvard Study of Adult Development tends to be the longest research of adult life. The researchers of this study have spent their time to get the clearest description about teenagers' lives for 75 years. In fact, good relationships are the answer of this 75-year study because these relationships keep us happier and healthier. From this study, we have learnt three big lessons in life such as social connections, the quality of relationships, and healthy relationships which brought people to create a good life. It is contrary to people who had unhappy relationships, they had more physical and emotional pain in their life. So, how about your life?

Writing Feedback / Light Bulbs from Plastic Bottles, Water and Bleach [2]

Electricity is one of essential people's needs in order to support their routine activities. Most people utilize the electricity to be used in some electronic devices. Yet, over than one billion people live without electricity. Can you imagine that? In Nairobi, the Korogocho settlement is the first area which invents "water bulb" system to deal with the light problem. The youth group Koch Hope are the pioneer of this system. To develop "water bulb", there are some steps to be finished. First, a two-liter plastic bottle is filled with water and a little bleach. Then, the metal roof should be cut to make a hole and the halfway bottle is inserted into it. Next, the roof ought to be sealed to prevent the rain. In fact, this system has enormous benefits for people around it. Some people usually spent their money to buy kerosene to get light. Nowadays, they can save almost half of her weekly income. Furthermore, this idea gives another advantage for the other people. For instance, in Philippines, My Shelter Foundation is one of a nonprofit groups which has been inspired by the "water bulb" concept to get low-cost lighting solution. The head of this group says that the "water bulb" is better than candles and kerosene which can be used as an alternative way getting electricity.

Writing Feedback / (TED) Judson Brewer: A Simple Way to Break a Bad Habit [5]

It is commonly known that everyone has positive and negative habit in their lives. It is triggered by our brain which stimulates ourselves to repeat the process. Unfortunately, it is so hard to control and break a bad habit to go away from our mind. This video provides the answer to deal with this problem. Judson Brewer states that getting curious, feeling the joy, and repeating these steps are the main key in order to break a negative behavior. At first, getting curious brings people to change knowledge to wisdom and makes them to step out their negative habit patterns. As a result, they are the inner scientist in themselves. In other word, mindfulness training is a simple way to break their bad behavior.

Writing Feedback / The Story of a Mouse Deer and a Snail [2]

Once upon a time, the whisper of wind made a number of animals in a forest felt so sleepy. A mouse deer went to walk around the forest to find a river. As a mouse deer walked, he said that "who does not know me? I am a clever, smart, and brave animal in this forest. I can solve every problem". When he arrived in a river, he met a snail. He did not know if a snail was watching him. A snail knew that the mouse deer is the most arrogant animal in this forest. As a result, a snail challenged a mouse deer to make a racing competition. Finally, they made a deal to do that. Then, the snail arranged a strategy to beat the mouse deer by asking the snail's friends. The snail asked his friends in order to hide behind boulders and called them while he was in front of the mouse deer. When the competition was started, the mouse deer walked slowly whilst the snail swam into water. Boastfully, the mouse deer believed that he would win this race. After a few steps, the mouse deer called the snail but surprisingly the snail appeared in front of the mouse deer. Next, he quickened his steps to chase the snail. But, again the snail arisen ahead. Then, the mouse deer run faster to win this competition and thought that the snail left behind. Yet, astonishingly the snail won the race. From this fable, we learnt that don not to be arrogant with your cleverness because everyone has their own plus and minus.

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