Scientists claim that children under ten years ago suffer easily childhood diseases due to a weak immune system.

Scientists claim that children under ten years ago

It is proved that vaccine injection not only improve children's immune system but also help them to develop the physical and intellectual, what is more, apart from children vaccinated, other children who go to nursery and primary school with them could also not be affected by infectious diseases.

As many economic grew, most of environments has been destroyed. Deciding between supporting arts or to protecting environment is difficult, but in my viewpoint, spending money to grow up arts is a requirement, but without a safe environment, supporting the art is meaningless. We need a safe environment to survive; we need to provide a health environment for future descendants.

Such changes, in writer's point of view, bring about both positive and negative impacts on the social life.

It becomes fade up of monotonous events happening in their life.

From the birth to death, a person goes through different phases of life and faces many people as his/her teachers.

One considerable argument in support of athletes is that they are much more popular than some other workers.

Moreover, they can even become children's heroes.

Our intentions were clear, although they were not to strengthen our relationship with God as they were expected to be.

Maybe I didn't write the topic clear enough due to the word limit .

The world 's economy has witnessed unprecedented boom in recent years . Such situation contributes to more employment opportunities in different cities .

Meanwhile , graduation students are often presented with two major paths to pave the ways for their future development , either to stay in their hometowns , living in familiar environment and hanging out with old friends , or to spread their wings in strange cities, experiencing different local life and meeting with new people .

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Art is an important aspect of our lives and so does our environment.

A company which is ready to spend money on either supporting art forms or protecting environment, needs to select one of the two choices.

The people who not only can't tolerate the status quo, but also decide to change it profoundly.

while the line graph compares the percentage of these travelers visited Australia induring the same period.

It is obvious that food and cars constituted the largest part of all spending in both years. The highest percentage of expense was in food, at 44% in 1966, but it sharply dropped to 14% in 1996. In contrast, the proportion of expense on cars nearly doubled, rising from 23% to 45% within 30 years.

Family environment has a very big role in contributing to who you become.

Your surroundings leave impressions on you and shape and mold you into the creature that you call yourself.

My family environment, consisting of my mother and father's high standards and two role model seeking younger brothers, has had this same effect of molding me, into me.

Many stubborn diseases such as heart disease, diabetes even the cancer can be cured.

However, science and art cannot be divided. Science without art is the body without the soul.

Over the 5 years after 1985, the number of people from Japan travelling abroad increase steadily about 4 millions visitors.

However, there was a slight fluctuation in the popularity of Japanese travelling abroad between 1990 and 1993.

Successful entrepreneurs and sport stars can affect many people.

The reasons are the followings.

It shows what percentage of teachers were male and what percentage of teachers were female.

The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of teachers in different educational institutions from nursery school to university in UK in 2010.

There is a view that people should workpermanently in the same company, while others prefer to change various jobs many times.

Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations

Misunderstanding of culture would cause many problems for both side: the native and the foreigner. Take for example someone who use body language without taking into account inhabitants' culture, would insulting religious customs. For instance, in Muslim countries shaking hand with alien women is forbidden; Moreover wearing scarf and loose-fitting clothes is common among Muslims nations due to feeling secure as written in holy Quran. As a result it is better to take some research in advance to familiar much more with destination. Thus cultural misunderstanding has many drawbacks.

It is sensible that someone hold the view that it is necessary for those people who are suffering from a natural disaster to work together and help each other.

The bar chart illustrates the differences between the proportion of foreign students and UK students in terms of obtaining the second class degree or tertiary education at a university of United Kingdom in 2009.
It is evident that both home and international students were passionate about learning with more than a half achieving second level or higher education. In addition, the abilities of students depend on the group of subjects studied.

I don't agree with this opinion in any way. Compulsory voluntary work is a contradiction, and not only in a literal way.

Follow this approach for the introduction paragraph:
1. Start with an interesting statement to catch the reader's attention
2. Give the background context to the reader
3. Express your view

Thanks for reminding me to include the prompt.
The prompt is "Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have already taken place."

We all received many advices from others that can help us reach our goals through the right direction. There is no doubts that advices are very powerful and helpful. Some claim that advices from older people are crucial because it come from true experience; others might say that suggestions from friends are acceptable and doable due to the same environment. Personally, I think that advices from older people are more valuable for me to adjust myself and to accomplish my tasks.

In my opinion team sports give more benefits to a person in terms of personnal development than individual kinds of sport do.

In spite of the fact which precise kind of team sport a person pursues, one of the major requirements to the person is to be a responsive part of the team, a particle of the complex structure.

Firstly, it is clear that approximately half of all the people use cars, while around one-third preferred the light rail transit system. However, the figures for travelling by bus and taxi are equally important, reaching 10 per cent for each of these methods.

Also, the foremost reason for using an automobile is commuting to work, at a little over half of the total percentage. Although, it is followed closely by the need to take children from school and business-related activities, being at 40 and 45 per cent respectively. It can be noted that shopping and various lesure activities are the main motivation for 15 per cent of the surveyed populace each.

In conclusion, the residents of Edmonton are especially keen on cars, while they are mainly used for various work issues.