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niesaysi   
Feb 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / Toefl - Government should spend money for developing ICT or meeting basic needs of people? [5]

Globally technology- Global technology

Globally technology is ruling world by making tasks much easier and faster.

Global technology has been ruling world through inventions which make tasks much easier and faster.
Although technology has great impact in the development of many countries,
many people believes
can satisfy various basic needs

I discern that acceleration of computer technology can satisfy various basic need of the people as such government must invest money in developing or purchasing computer technology .

I discern that acceleration of computer technology can satisfy various basic needs of the people, so the government must have a goal supporting it and invest money for win win technological development.
niesaysi   
Feb 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Home is wherever I am with my family members; PLACE WHERE I AM PERFECTLY CONTENT [6]

It is been always true to the ubiquitous me -- wrong grammar and the word "ubiquitous" is not correctly used.

It is been always true to the ubiquitous me

-- Revise this sentence.

My family and I used to have some activities at front yard to killfulfill some time during weekends.

playing hide-and-seek with barely any shoes on.barefooted.

All the memories, has been the best bits-- All the memories have been the best bits...Remove the comma and change "has" to "have" since the subject is plural.

Now that I am a teenager, I am able to understand that it is his special way to show his love. I know he was trying to make me strong; not depending to anyone perhaps it is a way to protect me from getting injures in the future.
I recalled an incident which my mother received a dreary phone call from my teacher complaining that I had purposely pushed a student down the stairs. No one could have believed me at that moment but not my mother. I remember that my mother didn't claim for any explanation yet she held my hand tightly and I could feel the warmth from my heart flowing through my entire self. From then on, whenever I was about to give up life, an invisible force pushed me to carry on and I believe this incident is a life-lesson that I have to bear in mind.

If the preceding para talks about your past, to achieve a good transition, better make this as another para since you're pointing out changes in the story.
niesaysi   
Feb 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: kindly check my introductory paragraph (hook, etc) [6]

As the saying says, "Mens sana in corpore sano", I agree with this saying that people with a great mind would have a healthy body.

Better present also the English translation of that saying.
Ex. As the saying says, " Mens sana in corpore sano which means...., I agree that people with a great mind would have a healthy body.

Therefore, some people focus on training their brain, while some people prefer getting involved in sports to maintain their healthy life. I omitted it for it is already understood.

schoolchildren sports-- school children

Hope this helps you :)
niesaysi   
Feb 15, 2014
Undergraduate / MSc Econometrics - studying in the Netherlands. [2]

Having Being exposed myself to these methods independently..
I will have a strong basis to perform well on the course, given that I have already studied
I continued to supplement my learning through online courses on Coursera.
The potential for extracting useful insight from this data ismay be invigorating.
on high-frequency data interest me greatly; such as the Bayesian Structural Time Series system.. -- Why did you use semi-colon? It is unnecessary. Remove it.

fulfil -- fulfill (spelling)
vice -captain
I have experienced organising large groups...
In closing-- In conclusion --It is more formal to use.
niesaysi   
Feb 16, 2014
Letters / Letter of Motivation for applying to a Scholarship for Master education [2]

I have found your University website several months ago...
A

According to the researches that I have done about Umeĺ University , the universityUmeĺ University is alive with enthusiasm, creativity and original ideas. UmeĺIt is also known as a large university city...

Umeĺ is known as a large university city where international students are taking part in developing knowledge along with researchers and entrepreneurs, which has attracted my interest a lot to the city itself.

This university attracted my interest for it is known as a large city university where international students are taking part in developing knowledge along with researchers and entrepreneurs.

I have talked to some students who had already been in Umeĺ...
Also by having a look at the interviews conducted with the current students,
Through the data from the interviews conducted by current students,
According to my research, I understood that Umeĺ University has a similar system which is very good because I will be able to learn a lot in each topic step by step. -- Mechanically incorrect, unless there is a comma.

The Umeĺ students that I have met have pointed that people of Umeĺ city are very friendly and helpful.
I met students studying in the university, and they pointed that people of Umea city are friendly and helpful.
I am looking forward to joining Umeĺ University ...

:)
niesaysi   
Feb 16, 2014
Essays / Our lives are a journey with regular decision points ; Narrative on moving states [3]

"Okay, time to leave!" my mom said as she placed the last suitcase in the car. The moment she said this, I began to think about the town I was leaving behind, I had spent my whole life in Las Vegas and although happy to move, it was a bit upsetting to think about leaving my family and friends. My stepdad had recently received a job in Maryland and although a nice opportunity for change I could not help but feel a bit somber...

Below are my revisions :
>I began to think about the town I was leaving behind, I had spent my whole life in Las Vegas and although happy to move, it was a bit upsetting to think about leaving my family and friends.

I began to think about the town I was leaving behind - Las Vegas. Although I was happy to move, I was still a bit upset to think about leaving my family and friends. I had spent my whole life in Las Vegas for (how many years?)

>My stepdad stepfather had recently received a job...

Just always remember that in narration, you are "as if telling stories to the children". Thus, it is vital that there should be an element of surprise. Use TIME SIGNALS to greatly connect one point to another. Your ideas here should be chronologically arranged.

but am completely lost! I have no idea how to continue this essay.

Write down all your ideas about the topic. Afterwards, arrange them logically and chronologically. That is the strategy. Please continue your narrative composition even though you feel you're taking the wrong path. We will help you how to improve it.
niesaysi   
Feb 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: Capital punishment (the death penalty) in society [12]

the increasing of violence is one of the problems ...

people' live is in danger as they

people's lives are

If they get no chance to live, it means that they get no chance to repent his or her sins.

-- We call this faulty sentence as Unnecessary Shift of Point of View (USPOV). You mentioned the pronoun "them" (plural pronoun), therefore, "his/her" is definitely incorrect (singular pronoun). Just be careful.

not fair

unfair

punishment will shows

will show

which not only making them

make them
niesaysi   
Feb 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / STRICKLY ENGLISH (Article re-write) [3]

Here are my corrections. Pardon me if it is quite long ...

British columnist-newspaper Simon Heffer discuss about his

discussed

to brighten about their mistake of English language using

usage

Studying English in the University force me to know more

forced

why we should aware about subjects verbs in a sentence

subjects and verbs

This is encouraged me to know more

This encouraged me . It is ought to be in active voice.

Furthermore, language has a deeply meaning for me

deep. Intensifier is just used to "intensify" the degree of an adjective it describes: intensifier plus adjective, not intensifier plus noun.

What that was happen in the differences of word meaning usually happen in several field of study.

What happened in the differences

standardization dictionary

standardized

Our language has a great settlement and codified, in which is stereotyped people recognized and comfort with

Omit be verb "is".

Moreover, English grammar should not become debate material.

should not be used as a debate material

Many authorized writers seems have

seem

Most of scientist was billingualist, indeed if asked

Most scientists were

They do not immerse themselves such a trend while their write for journals.

they

If you confused to communicate with select group

If you are confused to communicate with selected groups

Hope those corrections will help you :)
niesaysi   
Feb 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / Every generation has a lot of differences - because problems, technology and ideology surrounded [2]

because recent research has showed how our body

shown ( has plus past perfect tense of verb)

my generation developed a healthy conscious

has developed

Another example of this can be saw when

Here is another one :seen, not saw ( "be" plus past perfect)

n addition, my generation enjoy of communication's facilities than my parent do not.

enjoy more of communication's facilities

I can communicate with my parents by email, skype or any other kind of product.

means

but there are many more like fashion and education.

It is no longer to mention in your essay at all. We call it as "extraneous detail". Better if you already presented in your intro that the differences between your generation from your parents' generation delimit only in terms of communication and health.
niesaysi   
Feb 25, 2014
Scholarship / SSF housing scholarship: About Me, My major , and unique experience [3]

As well as, my uncles, aunts, and cousins who often visited?

This is supposedly not a question. It is simply a statement . You may connect this from the preceding sentence :I had my grandmother, and my grandfather who lived with me, as well as my uncles, aunts, and cousins who often visited us.

I want to know Spanish and Russian Fluently

-do not capitalize letter "f".
niesaysi   
Feb 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / Toefl evalution - Impact of television on children [4]

Among all the entertainment option

options

but effect of television on growing children is

but the effect

childrenis major concern

is a major concern

different vision in the field of easy entertainment

visions

channels like national geography,History channel.

National Geography and History channel

many animated series and movies helps kids to learn

help

his eye- site

eyesight

Children starts imitating

start

Hope this helps:)
niesaysi   
Feb 26, 2014
Undergraduate / Columbia GS Essay from perspective of former semi professional hockey player [3]

My father is a PE coach, and as his oldest son, he was very eager to get me started in sports as soon as possible.

Run-on sentence. Put a comma in combining two independent clauses.

Through out

Throughout

I say this not as a mere generic answer to an essay prompt

this is not

there's a world

there is

would I have the chance

I would have

:)
niesaysi   
Feb 26, 2014
Writing Feedback / Paid work must be appreciated but it must be good for children's health and mind [5]

Paid work is hard, but sometimes it is attractive beneficial and sometimes it is essential for people.

These children are doing work in different factories such as cement, acid, and soap factories and in these factories their owners misbehaved with them and order them to do such works that are not suitable for children and affect their health badly.

Let us cut this into two sentences.
These children work in different factories such as cement, acid, and soap factories. At some point, they experience abusive
treatment from the owners, specifically, work exploitation.

niesaysi   
Feb 26, 2014
Undergraduate / Admission Essay to UT Austin - I was the only child to single mom in the US Navy [2]

With my mother who was always working , and our little family on the move every few years, entertaining myself became an important daily task.

I was a wildly optimistic kid with a creative edge, and art became my favorite pass time.

When adding another idea in the sentence, always leave a comma.Most students usually commit this error in writing. Don't combine two different ideas by just leaving a coordinating conjunction like "and". Always put a comma.

Good luck:)
niesaysi   
Feb 26, 2014
Writing Feedback / Internet advantages and disadvantages. [4]

Using internet becamehas become an indispensable part of life for many people.However, some people think that it has a lots of drawbacks. Before drawing a reasoned conclusion, let us first discuss both sides of view. - Give your own opinion.

First of all, internet noticeably facilitates our lifes .
For example,if in the olden daysbefore, people payedpaid money for telephone calls, or wrote by hand letters and sent them per post, now we can send e-mail and make internet calls.

Also we can make video calls and through online, see someone who live away from us.from a far place.
We can find there any needed data, news, movies, and books.
niesaysi   
Mar 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: distance education to classroom-based education ? [4]

Education has not been apart from this changes.

these

n the latest years, new technologies have acquired such an important transformative role in our everyday lives.

New technologies have brought important changes to people's lives.

Whilst there are strong arguments to support this, I would suggest that the classroom-based education has better results. This argument will be proven by looking at how the face-to-face interact and the groups are essential in the development of the students.

In my point of view, I believe that classroom-based education is more essential, because this involves face-to-face interaction needed for the development of the students.
niesaysi   
Mar 2, 2014
Undergraduate / Global Perspective Semester At Sea Essay [2]

Below are some grammatical errors you've committed. Hope those are helpful:)

They're stories offer the rare gem

Their

I have witnessed animosity between both countries and understand that political climates

understood

therefore driving

each countries atmosphere

each country's atmosphere
niesaysi   
Mar 7, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Private car ownership has grown, led to traffic congestion [3]

The advantage of this policy is that the one who would like to purchase a car will have to consider carefully -- what is to consider about?

Another opinionAdditionally , is thatthe government could make and ban enforces laws for these transport types.

For example, we need to stipulate clearly that which streets the cars are or not allowed to run in.
Besides, for the streets where the traffic jam is frequently taketaken place..

Your essay is evidently short. Actually, second and third paragraph can be combined as one. I can't see any reason to separate them.You still need to present more specific examples to support your main topic.
niesaysi   
Mar 7, 2014
Writing Feedback / "Where I see myself in ten years" but written in third person essay. [3]

Many people thingthink about their future

Men and women usually strive to marry a amazingstrong and caring person, in other words that someone would be strong and caring.
Adolescentsage kids are easy to work with because their bodies heal so fast.

A physical therapist is the one who what helps and motivates the healsingof injuries and damages to the body.

A partner who is motivated and amazing in everything they do, in other words a human that is fervent and fierce.

This is incomplete (phrase).

In vision this person is someone who enjoys and will behas become successful in his or her chosen career.accomplished in a career
niesaysi   
Mar 7, 2014
Writing Feedback / Egypt and United State: Differences and Similarities [4]

As we aware ofknow, Egypt has a long history andhas beenthey believed it has been created for about 3,200 BC.

Though United State is such a big country, like Egypt, it has alsowith a long history. but not same as Egypt.

However there are still similarities between these countries..

Both of these countries haveare considered as multiracial . For example,because of the diversifiedthey have manyethnicity such as Native American, African American, Hispanic, European and Indian.
niesaysi   
Mar 9, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Let students still have some challenges in art-based subjects, but not give mark on their work [4]

However, they are not necessarynecessarily compulsory..

It is generally thought that there might not be always faireno fair grading on student's work in art-based subjects.

n a domain of arts, teachers who have studied or researched some specific field that they were interested in during their university studies.

So? Complete the idea.

Teachers perception of student's production is a vital

To make matter worseSimilarly, if some of them are also not good atin maths or language, possibly they would find themselves useless.
niesaysi   
Mar 9, 2014
Writing Feedback / One national cirriculum is forcing students to study materials they dont want to [5]

I do not agree to the idea that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum intilluntil they enter college. This is because students have varied interests and want to purse different careers. So all of them would require different background knowledge on their subjects that they shall be studying in college. Making them study the same national cirriculumcurriculum would be forcing a student to study it.

Your introduction needs to be improved. Before presenting your own opinion ( I do not agree...), state first your main topic or thesis statement.

This allows the students to choose their careerspath earlier..
niesaysi   
Mar 9, 2014
Writing Feedback / Struggling for writting and speaking skills in English. [4]

When in secondary school, I met with my English teacher. As a student of her, she noticed that my English level is truly not at where it should be as a secondary student.

When I was in high school, my English teacher noticed that my English level did not meet the performance standard set off for a high school student.

Now, it's my time to enter degree, hence I once again determined to face my weak point and do whatever I can to improve it.

Now that I will enter college, I have to be determined to face my weak point and strive more to improve my linguistic skills.

I can relate to you. When I was just starting learning the language, I felt I was the most incompetent English learner living in the world!! But I did my best to face it. The secrets? Positivism and determination. I know you can communicate well using the English language, and I see that capability as I am reading your essay though there are still things that you need to improve :) ) "MABUHAY KA!"
niesaysi   
Mar 9, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing: Qualities for Becoming Successful Can't Learn At A University? [6]

In my opinion, I disagree with the ideas expressed above. Conversely, I believe that higher education is a proper way to equip youngsters with needed qualities to be successful.

I agree with them. Change this intro.

Here are my grammatical corrections:
First of all, it is only in universities could young people could learn professional knowledge, which is the cornerstone of their successful career.
Therefore, theirthere are good resources when you ask for help.
..your communication skills will be improved and you are already capablewith teamwork abilities will be enhanced necessary when huntinglooking for a job.

In conclusion, I think higher education could provide students with all qualifications that required by a brilliant career in the future, particularly in terms of professional knowledge, social communication skills and networks as well as personal characters.

Good conclusion :)
niesaysi   
Mar 11, 2014
Writing Feedback / Today, man is master and machine is slave but tomorrow, machine will be master and man wil [6]

This is twenty-first century, almost and every aspects of our life is assisted with technological inventions.
It'sAdvancement and upgrading is augmenting in every minutes and so do our working style.
Money is being extravagantly used in new research like making robots more intelligent, weapons more effectiveand destructive, more reliable, drugs etc

Even though science has always been a part of our daily life, I personally believe that
takeover-take over
niesaysi   
Mar 12, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY - Short stories are preferred more than movies,explain your position. [7]

but watching movies are the most popular option among all
In many ways
Theater and movies have evolved phenomenally in recent years, therefore it has gained...
Movies are liked by people for several reasons, for instance, a script's dialogues and characters are played by mortal actor or actresses.
It is apparently realistic, colorful, and bright.
but it has secured its audience till school going kids
On its merit side, it is used most fort o informing children about basic social information
It requires attention...
Reading stories wereare good means of amusement in primitive days.

:)
niesaysi   
Mar 13, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY - Short stories are preferred more than movies,explain your position. [7]

Reading stories were( are )good means of amusement in primitive days
Great emphasis! :) Please undo it. I'm sure I just overlooked it. "Primitive days" is a time signal used to express past occurrence. I thought it is a generalized statement ( your opinion to conclude your essay ) so, I changed it to "are". .

Other than that, I scrupulously edited your essay as to mechanics. Presented above are some of the grammatical mistakes you have committed. Hope it's not confusing at all :) LOL
niesaysi   
Mar 16, 2014
Research Papers / Compound words - Need proofreading [3]

Compound structure is formed by combining two substructures, two free morphemes, so compounding is the process of combining two free morphemes, be they nouns, adjectives, or verbs to make a compound word to describe new idea and objects.

This one has grammatical issues, so let us make it into two sentences.
Compound sentence is formed by combining two substructures and two free morphemes. So, compounding is the process of combining two free morphemes, be they nouns, adjectives, or verbs to make a compound word todescribedescribing new idea and objects.

There are three forms of compounds: closed form which elements of the compound word are written as one word, without any hyphen or space, another form is by putting a space between the elements, the last form is they are written as two hyphenated words.

Let us revise it this way.
There are three forms of compounds:1.)closed form whichor elements of the compound word are written as one word, without any hyphen or space; 2.) compounding with space between the elements ; 3.) compounding in which elements are written as two hyphenated words.
niesaysi   
Mar 16, 2014
Research Papers / Compound words - Need proofreading [3]

The process of compounding combining arehave various ways.structures.

Peripherally, a noun compound consists of two elements, the modifier either it is verb or adjective or the head is noun.

Peripherally, a compound noun consists of two elements, the modifier which is either a verb or an adjective and the head noun.

The meaning of compound words can't reveal through the meaning of its components. Also, we cannot add any word between elements of compound words and, the compounds have mostly a falling intonation.

-- Yes, this is true.

Hope those help you :)
niesaysi   
Mar 17, 2014
Undergraduate / correct the grammar and punctuation and help me add some clasical words [4]

After my bachelor I wish to continue to a Masters degree, in which I could keep mastering my business skills.

After my bachelor I wish would like to continue tofor a Masters degree, so I could keep mastering my business skills.

I hope one day to use these skills to run my own company, maybe with a business partner that I will meet at IE.

I hope one dayI will use these skills to run my own company, maybe with a business partner that I will meet at IE.
niesaysi   
Mar 17, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL - studying art and music will develop one's mind [4]

It can bring to everybody all pleasant views from all over the world without the need of expensive travelling.

On the other hand music and art can represent all this beauty which is hidden for the eyes.abstract in nature.

To express all these feelings that can bother them.

This is not a sentence.

Studying music and art could be very good therapy against most psychic problems which are common for children nowadays.

When parents don't have enough time for theirstheir children,

For example, when I was in 10th grade I started playing the guitar.

When I was sad, my melodies waswere sad
niesaysi   
Mar 17, 2014
Writing Feedback / Celebrity/ famous film star/ sports personality - 'opt for entertainment field' [5]

However, I would personally agree with the fact that being a celebrity brings much of fame, monetary gain and luxurious life style.

This is actually not what your prompt requests you to agree on.

I agree with Dumi. Stick to the topic you are about to discuss.

Tom Cruise, is one the the super stars of holly wood film industry,

I would like to mentioned an example here. Infinitive to plus base form of verb . Also, avoid writing that way; it is not a good transitional point.

To conclude this , I would like to present my point of view on this. Instead of writing that way, you may directly present your view/s for your conclusion.
niesaysi   
Mar 17, 2014
Undergraduate / FIT Transfer Admissions Essay: Long past in need of guidance! [3]

Before coming across this quote from the late 90's cartoon show Daria, I sat and pondered everyday contemplating what direction was my life heading in.

The quote you have presented doesn't need to be supported with too much details. It just needs a brief opinion as part of your introduction and then state your main topic. Your introduction is merely focused on the quote ( supposedly just a springboard towards your thesis) which just ignores your prompt. Introduce your topic clearly or be consistent with the essay question. Don't start by introducing something out of the topic.
niesaysi   
Mar 18, 2014
Undergraduate / A vacuum is a bad learning environment; Transfer NYU USC Mexican [2]

Rarely do we talk about "cultural social mobility" or a "cultural middle class". -- I know that this structure, in some corners of the world, is accepted linguistically. But conforming the standard English sentence structure, "do plus doer of the action " ( do we) is used when just asking a question; if it is simply a statement, "doer of the action plus do" (we do) must be used.

These were better than sex. Even now that I've had sex, I still think it's better.

No issues with this sentence :D ...really? LOL

Only 8% of undergraduates major in the humanities.

Complete this to be a sentence.

The 31 year- old showrunner --Use that punctuation.
niesaysi   
Mar 18, 2014
Writing Feedback / toefl essay: large company vs small company - which one is better? [3]

Workplace is important for both employee and employer.

For me, this is a good hook.

This is because, if employees are happy with their workplace then the company will be more productive and business will be profitable.

Before presenting this, introduce your main topic first. Then, give your own opinion :)

he said it is not not a piece of cakesimple to join in this kind of company. I know that idioms add descriptive effects to the writing, but in this case your priority is to effectively put across the message to the person/s whom will evaluate your essay.
niesaysi   
Mar 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 (Diagrama) - The Process of Cement and Concrete Production. [4]

Given is a diagram illustrating the different phases with the special machine in the process of producing cement and the making concrete.

The two diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Take note that there are two diagrams ,so "given is a diagram " is definitely wrong.
niesaysi   
Mar 20, 2014
Essays / A New Era, a New State of Mind: Requirements to Coexist [2]

Harmonious, diversity is a united portrait of flowing colors, shades and hues. Divided, diversity is a chaotic discordant mess.

Why is there a need to use comma?"Harmonious and divided" are both modifiers, thus there's no need to put a comma before the word they modify.

You have great ideas. But your intro is too long. Make it concise in a way you have introduced the main topic well supported with limited number of relevant details.
niesaysi   
Mar 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS-GT (Task-1): You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work [7]

I am writing to request you to grant me 01 week unpaid leave.Actually, it has been a while, I haven't been able to take my wife and son to a adventurous place where they can enjoy their leisure time by visiting new places and do some recreational stuff. This summer my son's school is announcing holidays starting from 10th of July to 17th of July. My wife is a school teacher at the same school and will be getting off at the same time. Therefore, I want to avail this opportunity by taking leave for a period of 07 days i.e. from 10th July till 17th July.

As far as I know, you have to greet the addressee first with "Have a good day!" Good day!" before going down with your concern.

I would like to request in your good office to grant me a one-week unpaid leave, for I will be attending my wife and son for a summer vacation. -- I think this sounds more positive. In the first paragraph, just mention your purpose and indicate the reason. Just expand it in the next para.
niesaysi   
Mar 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 question. 'Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant..' [5]

I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid. This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in a short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.

This is not an ideal introduction. Don't start your essay by expressing your own opinion. State first your main topic, then support it with your opinion. That's the structure. To be clearer, you need to pay attention to what Dumi has suggested to improve your introductory paragraph.
niesaysi   
Mar 21, 2014
Writing Feedback / Boston Leadership Institute (spelling and grammar) [2]

after my current school had told me that they wouldn't be able to gave me a Physics class the fall of my senior year, I signed up for one online.

with all the things I would learntlearnand, see , and experience

I have also completed a course in Android Programming (coursera)

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