temptprovidence
Nov 16, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should the attendance be mandatory in universities? [5]
that was all i found grammatically... i would look for other aspects later ;)
BEST OF LUCK:)
Attending to[attending to means to deal with but you must mean here to" attend classes"] the classes may be useful for some students who can learn effectively by hearing whereas there are some students who would prefer learning on their own. Thus, there is no relationship between attendance and performance. Having flexibility in attendance also give[gives] students more chances for attend out-of-class activities such as drama, sport[addetc.at the end or just putandinstead of comma] . Each student is an adult and they[he/she] may have other obligations apart from attending the classes. For instance, some students have to work to pay their studies or have to take care of family at the same time. These incidents happen beyond their control. If a student was forced to attend the classes and he had some other obligations, he would not pay attention subjects during the class. This also effects outputs that he/she gets. Students who don't want to attend cannot be included to the classes by forcing . .
that was all i found grammatically... i would look for other aspects later ;)
BEST OF LUCK:)