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'my dream with various courses' - Northwestern essay

3 - Although there are many reasons why Northwestern is my higher education destination, my primary reason is its academic excellence....

Undergraduatedelta598 - Nov 1, 2009Lunacy - Nov 1, 2009
Sum up of all the facts: Conclusion help?

4 - Like when writing the theses, instead of writing 'I believe that the internet is really helpful,' You can either...

EssaysEzzii45 - Nov 1, 2009flyingseahors3 - Nov 5, 2009
Applying for the University of Miami... My essay is over the word limit--- what do I do?

8 - Yes, it is good to meet their challenge and get it under the limit. Sometimes you can get rid...

Essaysteresagvl - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
"culture shock" - my first question

4 - Your thesis statement should be an important idea, the main reason for writing the essay. When students write...

Essaysdeem1 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Short answer-desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future

2 - Interesting opening which leads naturally to your point about coming from a large (200??) family. What does it mean...

Undergraduatetkkt1 - Nov 1, 2009linmark - Nov 1, 2009
Basketball has become an indispensable part of my life - Common app short essay

7 - Thanks everyone :D This is my second draft. But it's 160 words long ==! So help me to cut...

Undergraduatetrung2012 - Nov 1, 2009trung2012 - Nov 3, 2009
My friend recommended me to read "The Great Blue Yonder"

2 - This is so good! However, you seem to be using yonder incorrectly. Google it. I think it refers to...

Writing Feedbackcryingpiggy - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Tug of War - Evaluate a Significant Risk-Macaulay Honors Essay

4 - kwami, would u look at tht. i found your essay. and i do like it the struggle with your...

UndergraduateKwameOcran - Nov 1, 2009farhanaxp - Nov 28, 2009
SOP help for Master Program on Construction Management

9 - Well, it is not all background, not all history, because they ask for "how you might contribute to social...

Graduatetjchenfeng - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 8, 2009
"Anthem of My Independence" - Georgetown Essay

5 - The essay is fine for the prompt (which you feel best describes you .) So you need to devote...

Undergraduatecngo15 - Nov 1, 2009linmark - Nov 2, 2009
Why did you chose this major?--Bucknell supp

3 - ...the relation between nature, science and humanity . I don't think the problem is that it is too...

Undergraduatedark horse - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
UM - Ann Arbor Undergraduate Admissions Essays

4 - ...two years, but it was not until this year that I finally gained insight that was truly meaningful --...

Undergraduategino250 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
My dad has always had this personal history of how he escaped from communist Bulgaria

4 - Thanks, Janson, for making a great contribution here!...

Undergraduatefendij3 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Wrestling - College Essay...any suggestions?

6 - Thanks becca!!! You too!...

Undergraduatec7939950 - Oct 31, 2009c7939950 - Nov 9, 2009
Mary Kay Cosmetics - Thesis Help

4 - Oh, I hope it is going well for you. You must be in class right now (Tuesday) presenting whatever...

Essaystbteague - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
"Participation rights of children" - it's difficult to get my essay started!

2 - Oh, I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. I hope you are doing well with it. The...

Essaysmillymoo - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'Beauty and the beast' - Stanford #1: Intellectually engaging activity

3 - As a reader who does not know much about music (beyond jazz, some classical and some pop/hip hop) and...

UndergraduateBartok - Oct 31, 2009linmark - Nov 1, 2009
Rice "Why this college" motivation essay

3 - ...program and strong reputation for providing quality education. Another thing that attracted me to Rice was its relatively...

Undergraduateblubunny5 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Diversity has always been important to me ; Why Emory Essay ^^?

3 - Thank youuuu! I will fix immediately....

Undergraduatemadmadiah - Oct 31, 2009madmadiah - Oct 31, 2009
The locket. Last words my sister said to me at the airport

4 - thanks so much...may you please check my poem on Poetry Writing section. .... thank you again......

Undergraduatebilal ABUZENAH - Oct 31, 2009bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 3, 2009
Conduct Explaination- UF

4 - Yes, college is big business, and you stand a good chance despite these issues. I suggest rewriting this...

UndergraduateBrickwiggles - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Active voice or Passive voice? Need clarification

4 - You got it. Can you feel how much more powerful it is? Instead of, Kevin was killed by a...

Grammar, UsagePencilToPaper - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
I want to push the submit button tonight (Stanford)

19 - VERY NICE! however, nitpicking: My Hard work, sweat, and perseverance all climaxed to that point. - this...

Undergraduateekfoong - Oct 31, 2009twizzlestraw - Nov 25, 2009
Putting my thoughts on paper; UT austin Statement of Purpose

7 - I think this will be my final, before my submission. Thank you Kevin for the editing that you done...

Undergraduatenuncio900 - Oct 31, 2009nuncio900 - Nov 18, 2009
My thoughts on a story - "Hatchet" book

NEW - Hey, please correct my grammar and structure. This essay is on the epilogue on the book "Hatchet" Also, i...

Book ReportsLearner123 - Oct 31, 2009 -
45 min CLEP essay: "Should acts of hate be criminalized?"

3 - Thank you so much! I have a test very soon... and it has to be written in 45 min......

Writing Feedbackcelesteshimizu - Oct 31, 2009celesteshimizu - Nov 4, 2009
Common App #4 - Fictional Influence (Free Thinking)

4 - Thanks for the suggestions Vulpix. My English teacher told me the same thing about the abstractness, but what I...

UndergraduateSesmo - Oct 31, 2009Sesmo - Nov 1, 2009
Any topic related to: Whitman, Dickinson, Yeats, Frost, Stevens, or Eliot

4 - Jeannie, you have been giving some great advice. I always smile when I see you have responded to a...

Poetrysummerbabe - Oct 31, 2009Notoman - Nov 3, 2009
UF essay- "New perspective from a close experience"

5 - Yes, delete "the" and keep "swung on swings." Sorry I'm late! Yes it makes sense, no you...

Undergraduateapa6177 - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
unfamiliar teenagers - BROWN SUPP. Best Advice

5 - It will be great if, at the end, you reflect on the advice and talk about it, using the...

Undergraduatesammiepuddle - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 2, 2009
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