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[toefl] topic (dis/agree) There are times when lying is acceptable.

4 - I think lying for good purposes is not only acceptable but also necessary. White lies are sometimes very useful....

Writing Feedbacksugarzhi - Aug 26, 2009tuanlnc - Aug 26, 2009
Celebrating Nerdiness - Tom Rogers

8 - Don't ask me what's in the article. Read the article yourself. What does your teacher want? A summary...

Essaystempestuous - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 27, 2009
What's the biggest writing fail in your writing?

35 - Hi! I remember once I wrote an email, but I made a mistake. I wrote the wrong word and...

Student TalkEssayist - Aug 26, 2009Kany2711 - Jun 12, 2025
'Everyone was burned to crisp' - "Jacob" - grammar for my Essay?

4 - This part is confusing to me. You should state that Jacob insisted on quitting school first. Otherwise, there...

Writing FeedbackSPak - Aug 26, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 26, 2009
Shakespeare's Sonnets, Analysis

6 - The use of the first person is generally frowned upon in formal literary criticism for the reason it is...

Book ReportsNotoman - Aug 26, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 29, 2009
"the count of monte cristo" - i need help on a thesis paper

4 - For what level of schooling are you writing this paper? Your thesis is fine but simplistic. In the U.S....

Book ReportsBeachBound4ever - Aug 26, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 29, 2009
single parent home - Proofread, suggestions-MSU Personal statement

3 - This is great advide,and exactly what I was looking for. THANK YOU!...

UndergraduateMG4192 - Aug 26, 2009MG4192 - Aug 26, 2009
Taking standardized tests to prove learning progress - Toefl IBT writing essay

6 - Well, this shows that is not a good prompt for the TOEFL, as it requires some cultural knowledge...

Writing Feedbacktuanlnc - Aug 25, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 4, 2009
Mistakes make success--GRE Issue

5 - Where are you from? I am from China....

Writing FeedbackHellgreeting - Aug 25, 2009yx200986 - Sep 4, 2009
"How you?"; my first two words to my first teacher in the US -- Common app essay

8 - The essay is well-written, and proof enough that you have mastered English. And that seems to me to be...

UndergraduateanaMorphine - Aug 25, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 27, 2009
help pick my essay topic (applying to art colleges)

10 - haha yea i guess i'm ok with cartoons, still developing my style though x_x. nah that's a good amount...

Undergraduateautumnclouds67 - Aug 25, 2009autumnclouds67 - Aug 27, 2009
'money and riches' - What Is the Purpose of Higher Education?

5 - If you seperate your paragaphs by an empty line then it's clearer & easier for everybody to read. In...

Writing Feedbacktho91 - Aug 25, 2009tuanlnc - Aug 28, 2009
Personal statement fot Residency (Medicine)

6 - I have seen they like specifics as well as introducing yourself. Like you are going to an interview and...

Graduatesabinanb - Aug 25, 2009tinamiller1 - Aug 28, 2009
Challenges for Chinese to Study English

20 - I am a Chinese student. My English is not very well. I am still learning. Now I am...

Student Talktsp8487 - Aug 25, 2009kantyjang - Jul 19, 2016
esssay -global warming&natural disasters

8 - In the long term, burning off fuels in trying to grow up the industry for the better economy are...

Writing FeedbackHarryK - Aug 25, 2009jgv115 - Sep 4, 2009
Money or Health

10 - wow, you are more more better than me. Thank for your paragraph it help me to improve my essay...

Undergraduatejeffrey L - Aug 25, 2009jeffrey L - Aug 26, 2009
princeton summer- I practiced soccer with my cousins

4 - What is your thesis? That is, what main point do you want the essay to make about you, that...

Writing Feedbackladidi - Aug 25, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 25, 2009
When to use "to+ -ing"?

9 - This language pattern is somewhat difficult to understand if you want to refer back to grammar rules. I...

Grammar, Usageescritor - Aug 25, 2009Keng - Sep 28, 2009
(A cheating incident I was involved in) is essay topic is OK?

9 - ^People's decisions are influenced by other activities, surrounding them, that occurred in the past, or can possibly happen...

UndergraduatePhoenix1300 - Aug 25, 2009Liebe - Aug 26, 2009
Qualities to be a good and complete student

11 - The thing is, what you should do depends very heavily on the level of proficiency you are striving for....

Writing FeedbackBlack_Code - Aug 25, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 4, 2009
Why I chose to apply to UCF? (my journey to success)

21 - If there really isn't anything about the essay that is well written or if there isn't any good points...

UndergraduateMieMie09 - Aug 25, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 26, 2009
Non-traditional Student College Personal Essay

6 - Thank you so much for the tips. This was the first draft which popped in my head. I know...

Writing FeedbackSFLady77 - Aug 25, 2009SFLady77 - Aug 25, 2009
Moral and ethical standards and effective leadership--GRE issue

3 - Why do you mention business leaders? The prompt specifically asks you to discuss public officials. I think you...

Writing FeedbackSuperkid - Aug 24, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 25, 2009
Art university communication and design department - how should i end my sop?

5 - I'm disturbed that your essay begins with two paragraphs about problems or failures. Start, instead, with some stories or...

Undergraduateaslen - Aug 24, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 24, 2009
"chances of me getting into Yale are slim" - Yale Supplemental Essay - Unique

6 - Well, since its the supplement, I think you can afford to go a little quirky...but I agree that the...

UndergraduateGabrielle - Aug 24, 2009Beautifulnights - Aug 30, 2009
'like a zombie' - Standord intellectual engaging supplement essay

14 - So should I modify the last paragraph so as to make the parallel more apparent, or just leave it...

Undergraduateeternal flame - Aug 24, 2009eternal flame - Aug 26, 2009
"Perseverance is failing 19 times and succeeding the 20th." Rhodes Scholarship Essay

7 - Hello Simone, Once again i am extremely thankful and truly appreciate your efforts in this regard.Thank you ever...

Scholarshipmuhammadhayat86 - Aug 24, 2009muhammadhayat86 - Aug 29, 2009
Paired Text Essay: Their Eyes Were Watching God and A Farewell to Arms.

4 - Or you could use the phrase, just being sure to explain your interpretation of it as clearly and concisely...

Book Reportsfuzzy0097 - Aug 24, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 24, 2009
RISD SHORT ESSAY

16 - Hi, I am so new Anyway I read your essay. It's okay maybe your real experience could help....

Undergraduatebenz - Aug 24, 2009h Y - Aug 26, 2009
GRE Argument ---antibiotics study results

7 - I am in favor of Simone. What you really should focus on is the last sentense. Since you have...

Writing Feedbackyx200986 - Aug 24, 2009Superkid - Aug 24, 2009
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