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Letter to Director of Financial Aid

7 - thank you for your help. I gladly appreciate it. and not to sound obviously, that mistake in the second...

Letterschelisajk - May 11, 2009chelisajk - May 18, 2009
How to write essay about teenagers / minors (who complain they are being treated like children)

5 - You have to write the essay first, then send it here for an edit and/ or advice. This should...

EssaysRidwaan - May 11, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 14, 2012
Detecting Deception Based on Nonverbal Behaviour Cues:a literature review

2 - I don't see any grammar mistakes, but I can tell you're lying by analyzing your sentence structure! No,...

Writing Feedbacklialia - May 10, 2009EF_Kevin - May 11, 2009
About Research essay Trifles

4 - And here is one you don't have to pay for: answers.com/topic/trifles-play-3 But Kevin's general point is excellent, and...

Research PapersStock - May 10, 2009EF_Sean - May 11, 2009
Two-book comparison essay: White Noise V. Good in Bed- Suggestions and feedback

2 - It's easier when you do the work in the right sequence: your thesis will be refined as you pull...

Book ReportsDandG4evr - May 10, 2009EF_Kevin - May 11, 2009
Problem-Solution Essay on Romeo and Juliet

4 - If the outline in the link I sent to you is massively different from what you think your teacher...

Essayspanmit - May 10, 2009EF_Sean - May 11, 2009
CHANGE or AVOID CHANGE? Which is better?

4 - It's interesting that you are honest and not at all ashamed about being mediocre. Since you said something interesting,...

Writing Feedbackkirin - May 10, 2009Mustafa1991 - May 15, 2009
sample size and defining variables

3 - Or is that you have to design an experiment of your own? The last part of the post sort...

Essaysbiggie11 - May 9, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
Performed art is a mirror for human society and the converse - MFA (Acting) Essay

6 - Thanks for all your feedback. I have made the changes and submitted the final draft. So we will see....

Graduatekarizma15 - May 10, 2009karizma15 - May 14, 2009
Hopsital Soap Opera - college classification essay

3 - I really like the gallery of people you introduce. However, if this is meant as a college admissions essay,...

Undergraduatesophiacelise - May 10, 2009EF_Sean - May 14, 2009
The New Great Depression

4 - Great ideas from Sean; and Marcel explained a problem better than I could have: overly colloquial. What a great...

Writing FeedbackDan - May 9, 2009EF_Kevin - May 10, 2009
Thesis paper on translation in famous works, confused about a topic

16 - Thank you so much...

Dissertationssaraa - May 9, 2009Azodi - Nov 6, 2013
"How must we change our lifestyles to meet the threat of global warming?"

6 - Thanks for this help, i am now feeling more confident on constructing this essay and it may lead me...

Writing Feedbackantondude - May 9, 2009antondude - May 12, 2009
what's a good and easy research topic for and economics that's 5-7 pages

6 - Here is a link that might help. Sorry I am not very knowledgeable about this subject: realtor/government_affairs/gapublic/report_real_estate_e conomy_2008...

Research Papersiamcentrum - May 8, 2009EF_Kevin - May 13, 2009
"Untitled" General Personal Statement

4 - How about this way: Carrie Bradshaw idolizes them. Michael Jordan markets them. The Wizard of Oz told Dorothy...

Undergraduatebstrickland - May 8, 2009EF_Kevin - May 9, 2009
Biology Reseach paper topic - Come up with a hypothesis

4 - How about "sleep deprivation reduces short term memory more than long term memory." Easy enough to test. Have one...

Research PapersKenny22 - May 8, 2009EF_Sean - May 9, 2009
"There is no doubt in mind that Macbeth was a villain"; How Macbeth became a villain.

3 - Yeah, I think Macbeth deserves more credit, but don't be discouraged! You can make little adjustments at key spots...

Book Reportssally12 - May 8, 2009EF_Kevin - May 8, 2009
Intermediate Level in science stream

4 - "I want to proceed further in my studies in the same stream at a foreign institution." "I have...

Undergraduateharry - May 7, 2009EF_Sean - May 13, 2009
exemplification essay for my English class/ global pollution/waste management

5 - I have a suggestion for the content: First, define toxic wastes, and put them in categories (if there are)....

Essaysalan49rico - May 7, 2009April April - Jul 25, 2012
qualities that would make you a good candidate for engineering-essay

4 - Hi tjay1988, I think that you should state more clearly your two qualities and add transitional words (or...

Undergraduatetjay1988 - May 7, 2009Thuong - May 8, 2009
Jem's Maturity; To Kill a Mockingbird

7 - [EF Sean] Okay, got it. [EF Kevin] I totally get what you're saying. Made me reflect on my...

Book Reportsfaithanatomy - May 7, 2009faithanatomy - May 10, 2009
A time-travel machine to go back in time in your own life and change something

22 - Your verb use is fine, as far as strength goes. I suspect that you have sometimes sacrificed grammatical accuracy...

Undergraduateivan9210 - May 7, 2009EF_Sean - May 23, 2009
Their Eyes Were Watching God . . . Need Help Outlining an Essay

13 - Depends on the college, I should think. Mostly, taking honors means having to take more courses in your chosen...

EssaysNotoman - May 6, 2009EF_Sean - May 11, 2009
work hard, find the best in each other, and live with confidence.

6 - I just finished advising someone else to do this, but it bears repeating here -- use strong verbs. Read...

Undergraduateshupirate2013 - May 6, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
Reflective Essay On This School Year: "Closed Doors Are Not The End"

6 - Ah, you get to workshop this essay a bit, then, do you? It's always nice when teachers let you...

Writing FeedbackBabiix - May 6, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
"The Contested Terrain of Media Text and its Effects on Contemporary Culture"

3 - This is a fascinating subject. I notice you didn't mention that the world of 24 had an America governed...

Writing Feedbackgudjuju22 - May 5, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
CLEP Practice Essay - effect of computers on work now versus 100 years ago

4 - Thanks so much. My intro was much longer in draft with a better hook and a more specific example...

Writing Feedbackabryant - May 5, 2009abryant - May 6, 2009
Job Portfolio: What do I include?

7 - Eric already mentioned this, but it bears repeating: a sample article tailored to the place you are applying would...

LettersMJames - May 5, 2009EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
Essay on advantages of computer games

16 - To make your essay a bit stronger in view point you could list a few well known negative views...

Writing Feedbacktara11 - May 5, 2009maextra7 - May 26, 2009
Driving alternatives in Hampton Roads: Proposal Essay review

3 - As with any large city area that undergoes a process of growth, the Hampton Roads Area is (say something...

Research Papersmichaelfrye1970 - May 4, 2009EF_Kevin - May 5, 2009
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