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SAT essay: Are people's lives the result of the choices they make?

4 - Thanks ^ ^...

Writing Feedbackkitty Freud - Apr 9, 2009kitty Freud - Apr 10, 2009
UCF admission essay (why did I choose to apply and family influence)

4 - Thank you so much it has been very helpful!...

Undergraduategizzy1376 - Apr 8, 2009gizzy1376 - Apr 9, 2009
Definition Essay: Building the Blocks, Becoming Successful (The Climb)

3 - "Success" is derived from the Latin word "successus"... You can follow Sean's advice by using a new topic...

Writing Feedbackbhoptl - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2009
Appeal letter - Goals, Good Intentions, Seeking Reevaluation

7 - I hope you get to do what you want to do! If you have a clear vision of what...

Letterskrzyazn - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
IELTS ESSAY: lessons with teachers versus others sources

8 - oh,yes,sure it does. i appreciate your help!...

Writing Feedbackeffy_sun - Apr 8, 2009effy_sun - Apr 11, 2009
Pushed to hard work-----a positive or negative development?

4 - Yes, as you refine the essay to cover the prompt perfectly, it will be good to add one more...

Writing Feedbackkirin - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 9, 2009
TOEFL essay: movies - serious or amusing?

11 - If you like Blackadder, you should check out some of Atkinson's stand-up comedy. A few skits are "Mr Bean-ish,"...

Writing Feedbackeric_ly - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
'Schools are nestles of education' - Essay on Violence in schools.

13 - Thank you very much for trying to understand me and what I try to say. Your help really is...

Writing FeedbackChidem - Apr 8, 2009Chidem - Apr 24, 2009
problem-solution essay (domestic or international problem)

4 - Kevin is right, narrowing down your topic might make the assignment more manageable. In addition to picking a specific...

EssaysMzITalia316 - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Political Allegory

3 - As you rework this essay, think about how you can move, as you progress from the introduction to the...

Writing Feedbackhannahkim91 - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Economic paper: the role of opportunity cost in financial decision making

5 - Like Kevin, I can only guess at your meaning, as a result of unfamiliarity with the subject matter combined...

Writing FeedbackAbby002 - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Convincing my professor that I understand: Structure of Writing

5 - I agree with Sean. Begin expanding on yuor ideas and generate a thesis to base your essay on....

Essayslilmisha - Apr 7, 2009Sammy - Apr 20, 2009
Scholarship Essay on How High School Sports Influenced you

8 - Congratulations! Don't forget to spread the joy by helping others with their scholarship or admissions essays!...

Scholarshipshupirate2013 - Apr 7, 2009EF_Simone - Jun 18, 2009
What is a Research Paper?

3 - A research paper is generally exactly what you would expect it to be, a paper that summarizes and evaluates...

Research Papersbrayanpeter - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
Need assistance finding academic journals on 'operating systems'

3 - Here is something that might work. Go to Google Scholar, and do a search for "Linux." Then try doing...

EssaysAlexW - Apr 7, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 8, 2009
How to Run a Debate in English, rather than Malay.

6 - i would try youtube, or google. Basically list out ur main points, also list out points that ur opposing...

Grammar, Usagekina - Apr 6, 2009ttc1234 - Apr 19, 2009
Hypocrisy in the Chrysalids

5 - Your are most welcome!...

Writing Feedbackmacawtopia - Apr 6, 2009Rosamond - Apr 8, 2009
Pride and Prejudice Research Paper

3 - This is pretty vague. "Submissive" means that she is quick to give in, give up control. To react...

Research PapersEBGames - Apr 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2009
Creative essay about New Zealand

5 - Maybe the essay is not supposed to be expository. Maybe you do not need to know about New Zealand...

EssaysPanpan - Apr 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 7, 2009
Explaining my circumstances in better way, for an interview.

6 - Not compared to you! :)...

Graduateektaansh - Apr 6, 2009Rosamond - Apr 6, 2009
I don't know how to start my essay..

13 - there are so much advice above. I'm just saying that I'm not better than you in writing either. I...

EssaysFluffyWambler - Apr 5, 2009Krystal318 - Apr 26, 2019
Limiting the Use of Dispable Plastic Bags

5 - Chidem and HD, thanks for those great insights. It helps in more ways than you know; it helps me...

Writing Feedbacklenzo537 - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 6, 2009
Help with narrowing down research question and thesis

5 - "Online classrooms allow students to learn through a limited screen and only see teachings one dimensionally. Learning is a...

Research Papersyangstauwm - Apr 5, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 7, 2009
qualities required for a happy marriage

3 - "Marriage is defined as a legal union of man and woman as a husband and wife to spend the...

Writing Feedbackkaynling - Apr 5, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 6, 2009
The higher goal the bigger efforts for it. (SAT Essay)

5 - About that thesis, I think you should move this sentence to the end o the first paragraph: People should...

Writing FeedbackGiovane - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 6, 2009
It's with God's miracle that human miracles are innovate; Human Mind vs. the Computer

8 - I'm not getting angry. You asked me what grade I would give you, and why. I answered your...

Writing FeedbackRosamond - Apr 5, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 6, 2009
The individuality, use of machines and traveling for pleasure - essay

7 - Yes, that's what I meant! :)...

Writing FeedbackChidem - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 10, 2009
Essay on The Evolution of Beer

4 - I guess I think that first paragraph and the second one should be... hmmmm. Yes, I think the first...

Essaysdtturner12 - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 5, 2009
Essay on England's Right to Tax

7 - Hey, you are not being a bother. I did not see this in time to talk about it before...

Writing FeedbackReborn777 - Apr 5, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 6, 2009
(Hardships / Family history / Institution / Qualities) - college essay remake

6 - The first para definetely needs improvement. Make it more real life by alluding to an actual set of circumstances....

UndergraduateMr2009 - Apr 4, 2009vistasad - Apr 7, 2009
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