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Scholarship Essay, a love of writing and education

4 - Your writing involves a high level of diction, which is good, and general grasp of grammar and appropriate academic...

Scholarshipmckyle - Feb 20, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
Georgetown - Somalian Pirates

8 - Pirates are indeed criminals, and not terrorists, when they carry out their activities for financial gain. The mistaken nomenclature...

Undergraduatemissingfeet - Feb 20, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
"Freedom is like air", UT Austin, statement of purpose

4 - "Upon graduation, I will strive to help my fellow man and improve our communities." I would try changing...

Undergraduatesoultrang9 - Feb 20, 2009shan00ts - Feb 22, 2009
common app short answer- macaroni penguins

4 - This is a well written essay, too bad you have to cut it down! One thing you could do...

Undergraduateprettylush - Feb 20, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2009
Taking courses of more than one subject prepare students for a broad spectrum of careers

7 - Also, you could add that exposure to a wide variety of topics develops certain general learning skills that make...

Writing Feedbackcici510988 - Feb 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 6, 2009
Starting Huckleberry Finn!

12 - You can actually have your choice of symbolism and moderately thorough explanations of the symbolism and its importance by...

Essaysboonster - Feb 19, 2009Holt - Dec 18, 2017
PSEOP Admission Essay - post secondary essay (every ounce I have)

8 - The ending is fine. Good luck in school! :)...

Undergraduatemedgirl44 - Feb 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2009
Help with Religion Assignment?

10 - hi dear in my view, it will be fine if you mention to India as a country with a...

Research Paperssupremogino - Feb 19, 2009Fardin - Jul 17, 2013
The Psychological, Physiological, and Neurological effects of Marijuana and Cocaine Use in Humans.

34 - Yes, that's right, and I have been thankful about it....

Research PapersMustafa1991 - Feb 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2009
Starting Research Paper (Kring's "Heroes")

19 - In keeping with Tyler's comment, I repeat what I said before: "If you really want to write about Charles...

Research Papersdboyd435 - Feb 19, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 27, 2009
'years as a police officer' - SOP Essay for UT - Austin

5 - Hey, specific is good in this case, for sure. You might want to say "a focus on developmental psychology"...

Undergraduaterustydoornob - Feb 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 21, 2009
Experiencing a rescue just in time

2 - I wanted to get some fresh air, so I joined with the group and went with them. What...

Writing Feedbackceberus - Feb 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009
How to Start an Essay (with the question?)

12 - It would help if you posted your introductory paragraph here. That way, we could comment on the appropriateness of...

Essaysshannu - Feb 19, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 6, 2009
My 2nd Admissions Essay for University of Austin, become more independent

3 - From My mother, my girlfriend, and even my current job have all had an impact on me not being...

Undergraduatetsumlakers88 - Feb 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009
University of Hartford (future businesswoman)

11 - If accepted I will establish what I am capable of, I believe the University of Hartford will help me...

Undergraduateanibete11 - Feb 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 20, 2009
I longed to do a Sport Management Major; UT Austin- SOP

6 - You should not make your essay too long, because it would make the admissions tired... Also they may look...

Undergraduatetsumlakers88 - Feb 18, 2009yasin391 - Feb 22, 2009
Analysis of an Art Piece, Creativity of Re-Use essay

3 - Hey now, I remember that formal analysis involves a specific set of instructions, probably given by your teacher. Here...

Writing FeedbackSomeone18 - Feb 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009
Critic my "Education" essay

3 - It can be used to advance oneself to a successful career; many college students are doing just that, but...

Writing Feedbackbluek7 - Feb 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 19, 2009
How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay.

14 - Thank you so much for your help...

UndergraduateYuta - Feb 18, 2009Yuta - Feb 22, 2009
Lit Review: How do I show I've critically analysed the studies I've read?

11 - Your logic seems okay from your second post. The only suggestion I have is that, in addition to saying...

DissertationsChicitaGatita - Feb 18, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 20, 2009
Being Me is Special - Essay Help

8 - This should be a lot easier than you thought. Think of things that you feel are special about youeself....

Essaysalwin - Feb 18, 2009plugging_along - Mar 18, 2009
Thesis Statement About My Goals (semi-pro football)

6 - I revised it a bit and shorten it some what. Dear Professor, Growing up in Bronx, New York,...

Writing FeedbackGHouse - Feb 17, 2009GHouse - Mar 19, 2009
Hamlet thesis - Gertrude's actions influencing Hamlet

4 - You might even start by simply listing key quotations from Gertrude and Hamlet, and then see how you think...

Essaysscottbusby2 - Feb 17, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 18, 2009
Not Mr. Towers, he and his family watched TV; Narrative Essay

8 - Adding dialogue would also be a great way to add more conflict. Perhaps at the beginning of your essay,...

Writing FeedbackCTowers - Feb 17, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
'My friend and Orlando Culinary Academy' - WHY DID YOU CHOOSE TO APPLY TO UCF

5 - Every year f For the past three years , I've been thinking about what I wanted to do after...

Undergraduatesushisbaby - Feb 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 17, 2009
wording problems in a paragraph

6 - I originally meant to write "not get what I want," and have edited my original post to reflect that....

Writing FeedbackNoob in writing - Feb 17, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 18, 2009
Thesis (six thousand words in six days) - art college

20 - Hey, how did it turn out, man? Did you get it done well?...

DissertationsTeddi - Feb 17, 2009Gautama - Mar 4, 2009
Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future

9 - Thanks Sean. I'll let everyone know if I get the scholarship....

Scholarshiparbennett - Feb 17, 2009arbennett - Apr 11, 2009
Assessment: Electronic Resources Research Exercise

3 - thanks do you have any more suggestions on the keywords that I could use? So far, I...

Research Paperscherrycola - Feb 17, 2009cherrycola - Feb 19, 2009
How many money was spend on different forms of entertainment over a five - year period.

3 - thanks a lot... I am so appreciate...

Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Feb 17, 2009pamfan0810 - Feb 19, 2009
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