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Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....

Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
For advice: Account of my experience

4 - Oh, that is an interesting question! In common usage, "temperament" suggests emotion, and ability to control one's temper,...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 20, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 9, 2008
Realism Essay - the readers choice

NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Nov 20, 2008 -
I need strategies in writing an analogy

2 - Good afternoon :) An analogy is the thinking process of transferring characteristics of your source item to another...

Grammar, Usagetanty - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement

2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Master in Advertising - my true passion and my hard-working spirit is strong enough

NEW - I am very grateful for your help on my essay - regarding structure, grammar and spelling etc. Requirement:...

GraduateTarlGis - Nov 20, 2008 -
'study group' - aspiration for my life - UC Prompt #1#2

4 - Good evening :) In regards to the first piece, please see my comments on it previously. In...

Undergraduatedrtick - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
'Curiosity in mathematics and science' - University of Rochester

2 - "The education facilities there provide stellar academic programs related to the sciences in a cordial environment. Should I decide...

Undergraduatequack09 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Family, qualities - UCF Admissions Essay: #2 + #4

NEW - 2. How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are? For Centuries, America has been...

Undergraduatejumpydrummer - Nov 19, 2008 -
to expand my knowledge - FSU essay, opinions and suggestions on improvement

2 - You have a very good essay here; a few structural/mechanical suggestions, but you answer the prompt effectively. You discuss...

Undergraduatelps227 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
International Youth Leadership Forum travel - UC Essay prompt #2

3 - Good afternoon :) I believe you have answered the prompt effectively. You describe the experience as well as...

Undergraduatejedijessy91 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"to even graduate" - PROMPT #2 PERSONAL STATEMENT

NEW - I am the first person in my family to even graduate from high school; when my father was not...

UndergraduateBARBAKAREN - Nov 19, 2008 -
"Mi casa es tu casa" - Common Application- Personal Statement

3 - Good evening :) I think you have done a fantastic job answering this prompt. You have described the...

Undergraduatejdsams02 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Global Warming Phenomenon- Research Paper

5 - I really like your introduction; it is catchy, and it lays out a path for the rest of the...

Research PapersSergioc1 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:

2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
For revision or suggestions: The activity I like most

5 - thanks for your suggestions and recommendations...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008tonydengcnu - Dec 9, 2008
For UC transfer essay, some questions.

4 - Sounds great! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Undergraduategalz - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
The Freedom to Choose Death

NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...

Writing Feedbacksearch4gk - Nov 19, 2008 -
Passionate Art Student's PS for UC! Learn about a foreign kid's experience!!

7 - Good afternoon :) I do like your changes. In regards to the sentence, I suggest "All these...

Undergraduatecrappyhair - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Field of Linguistics, anyone?

6 - I absolutely do. Try to get as much English exposure as you can. Do you have anything like a...

Dissertationsmikitung - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"Norwalk Titans football team" - UC Prompt #2 In need of revision

5 - Oh haha, thank you very much for the corrections Gloria! I've recommended this forum to some of my pre-UC...

UndergraduateXegonyv - Nov 19, 2008Xegonyv - Nov 26, 2008
"The alphabet I know consists of only seven letters." -UC statement pr 2

2 - Good evening :) I have edited one section of your piece and then provided some general comments in...

Undergraduatecuecomeber - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Personal Statement: biochemistry in your University

3 - thanks, it is a great help...

Undergraduatetonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008tonydengcnu - Dec 9, 2008
"my life is prepared for all methods" - UC Prompt #1

3 - Great thanks, u've helped me a lot :) I was just wondering my passage was a little bit irrelevent...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Nov 18, 2008hallelujah - Nov 21, 2008
International student to apply Tesol - Statement of Purpose

2 - I'm not really sure about the content of your essay. Have you been to college already and majored in...

UndergraduateMinJung - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
UCF essay about family dinner

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then made some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduatefruban - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
"Playing with my Yoshi doll and making new friends" - UC Prompt #1

6 - In regards to content, I'm not sure really where you are going with it. In the introduction you talk...

UndergraduateXegonyv - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
'Growing up I hated to read' - Fashion Institute of Technology essay

2 - Good evening :) In regards to flow, there are a few things that you can make sure of...

Undergraduatesunsetswitheli - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 18, 2008
FU Essay - Significant experience/Achievement - Revisions Needed

3 - Thanks for the input....

Undergraduateahhitsj0e - Nov 18, 2008ahhitsj0e - Nov 18, 2008
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