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Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism

2 - Good evening :) I have edited the first two sections of your piece and also given some general...

Writing Feedbackjay45 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"Been a student, but not a teacher" -Common app short question 156 to 150

5 - You're very welcome. I do think the second one is a more appropriate response; it acknowledges the prompt...

Undergraduateluv4evr - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

3 - Thank you so much, i would definitely keep your corrections in mind.....

Writing Feedbackmie08 - Nov 24, 2008mie08 - Nov 24, 2008
Why do you want to study abroad? Is this SoP ok for M.Sc. Pet. Engrg?

9 - Oh, good choice! That is cool. I hope you have lots of success with it!...

Graduateolam - Nov 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
'crowded, polluted, noisy place' - a new high school may be built in the neighborhood

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Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 24, 2008Asselya - Dec 3, 2008
"I learnt to be positive" - UC prompt

2 - Good evening :) I think this is a great topic and answers the prompt very well. You describe...

UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"a spiritual change to impact others" - UC Prompt 2

3 - Thank you very much....

Undergraduatesome1uknown - Nov 24, 2008some1uknown - Nov 26, 2008
UC prompt 2, how a friend went missing, changed my life

NEW - Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this...

Undergraduatejoycewrice - Nov 24, 2008 -
UC essay prompts 1&2- "The Jaws of Life" Any Critique would be appreciated!

4 - Good afternoon :) I don't think that it is too personal; there is a difference between the familiarity...

Undergraduatejojomover - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
essay for the Pratt (plesase revise the grammar)

2 - Good afternoon :) I have corrected the first piece of your essay and included some general suggestions: ...

Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
'Class volunteer leaders' - Essay-elaborate one of your activities

NEW - The Common Application Short Answer elaborate one of your activities(extracurricular, personal experience, or work experience)(150words or fewer) plz...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Nov 24, 2008 -
Accounting research paper - any (advanced) topic - but easy as possible!

2 - Good afternoon :) What about doing a piece on IRC Sec. 651; trusts? I wrote a piece on...

Research Papersfibonacci - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"young teenagers" - UC prompt 1- does this work?

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited one section of your piece and then given some general comments as...

Undergraduatemathfun1227 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Topic: Macbeth vs Sonnet 29 of Shakespeare

2 - Shakespeare's somber tone in the onset of the sonnet displays overwhelming melancholy. In order to cite the quotations...

Book Reportsashaiba - Nov 24, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"my fervor for math grows" - UC personal statement. Promt #1

NEW - Hi, Gloria and other fellow proof readers. I really thank you all for saving people's lives here. As for...

Undergraduatet0mmypark - Nov 24, 2008 -
"I am the youngest of eight children" - Prompt 1 essay Help in title

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Undergraduatejrod91 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
'family of teachers'; how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

2 - Hi tonydengcnu, I'd make the opening more concise: I was born to a family of teachers; my...

Undergraduatetonydengcnu - Nov 23, 2008trinilissabee - Dec 9, 2008
UIUC essay - Child Education Work

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first paragraph of your piece and included some general comments: ...

UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Are self-published books worth giving reviews on?

2 - Good morning :) Not all of the time. My experience has been that many self-published books are very...

Book ReportsGianna - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"Visiting Vietnam in the summer of 200" - UC PROMPTS

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduatemike0oh - Nov 23, 2008 -
sentence structure question

13 - You can write like this: "It enables us to take old experiences out of the box and to explore...

Grammar, Usagemichel92 - Nov 23, 2008Nancy Quan - May 19, 2013
The importance of the attachment in infancy - Short question...

6 - Thanks Kevin, I'm surprised and so proud of myself (: It was a wonderful help!...

Undergraduateapramone - Nov 23, 2008apramone - Dec 3, 2008
"born in Salinas, California" - application essay

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first paragraph of your piece and made some general comments as...

Undergraduatemember123 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Cumulative class essay about supervisor

NEW - Hello, we were told to write a 4 page essay on our supervisor at work using the material we...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Nov 23, 2008 -
A stem cell and genetic biologist - UC prompt 1

4 - Thank you dasani, and thank you Gloria once again....

UndergraduateTosyl1051 - Nov 23, 2008Tosyl1051 - Nov 26, 2008
'greatly influenced'; Statement of Purpose, Graphic Design MFA

3 - Gloria, Thank you for your advice. As a student I remember having a problem with over using commas,...

Graduaterwalker - Nov 23, 2008rwalker - Nov 23, 2008
"The special interest group"; what do you think? - considering civil engineer B.S

12 - Thank you so much (:...

UndergraduateFYI - Nov 23, 2008FYI - Nov 27, 2008
How do I start my research paper on anti-censorship?

2 - Good afternoon :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...

Research Paperslillypop215 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
Mechanics a Great Experience

2 - Good afternoon :) Avoid beginning your sentences with conjunctive/transitory words such as "so," "but," or "and." In...

Undergraduatejrod91 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
"I have volunteered at our neighborhood's public library" - UC prompt 1

2 - Good afternoon :) Make sure that you don't begin your sentences with conjunctive/transitory words such as "but," "so,"...

Undergraduategora2867 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 23, 2008
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