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Global warming presents a genuine risk to our existence; INTRODUCTION

2 - Great job! One small change though: "After years of research scientists have finally come to the conclusion that...

Writing Feedbacknangy - Aug 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
Essay on "Best companies to work for" - Struggling Marine!

2 - Good evening. OK; let's start with what your definition of "good" is. Benefit packages: i.e. health benefits, dental,...

Essaysmidas8412 - Aug 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
Unique qualities - UCF essay; I am loyal, dependable, and hard-working

2 - Good job. Just a few mechanical errors, but I do like the ending much better. Keep up the nice...

Undergraduatesportzgrrrl - Aug 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 25, 2008
Morgan State University - how my job influence my life

6 - Thank you so much I really appreciate you giving me your insight....

Undergraduatekbsmith - Aug 23, 2008kbsmith - Sep 8, 2008
STAGE,Excite staff; UF admission - Experience, event, possible contributions, etc.

2 - Your first and second paragraphs are not very well connected. I am unsure if in the first paragraph you...

Undergraduateseniors09 - Aug 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 23, 2008
Research Question - Death Penalty; Need a direction

10 - Hope what I say may help you. Argument 1: It doesn't necessarily mean that punishing someone for his...

Essaysmsturri64 - Aug 22, 2008Xiaokai Jin - May 31, 2013
Essay: Who should pay tuition fees? STUDENTS or the GOVERNMENT?

NEW - It is sometimes argued that because the tertiary education is greater benefit to the individual than to the society,...

Writing Feedbackstressful - Aug 22, 2008 -
'Forget the presence and look at the future' - another FSU admissions essay

2 - Good job. Your essay is very confident and spirited. You explain clearly why this motto applies to you and...

UndergraduateRunyen - Aug 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 21, 2008
'Computer discovery' - essay for acceptance in Computer related field

NEW - [current date aligned to right] [my name aligned to left] [my address aligned to left] Title: How...

Undergraduatepenner - Aug 21, 2008 -
'Invisible things' - Religion Argumentative Essay

NEW - prompt: R.D. Gold in his book Bondage of the Mind basically says that religious dogmas, and religion itself, is...

Writing FeedbackKIDS - Aug 20, 2008 -
'Introducted to Jesus Christ' / 'Varsity soccer' - where you come from and your world

NEW - Can you review both of my essays? Prompt #1 Describe the world you come from ď for example,...

UndergraduateFor3v3r - Aug 20, 2008 -
Darfur, Sudan - people, history, identity essay

NEW - hey! im getting marked out of 60 10 for background info-family size, geo, assets, jobs Description of conflict -10marks...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 20, 2008 -
Discrimination and predjudice - psychological and sociological views

5 - Im sorry, if u still need help, i would be more than happy to help you out. i havent...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Aug 20, 2008sarahmk - Jan 12, 2009
"Doctor's passion" - UF, meaningful event

3 - Wow, thank you for the corrections! I appreciate the time you put into correcting this... you all are wonderful...

Undergraduatekola - Aug 20, 2008kola - Sep 6, 2008
Essay about The Fountainhead by Ayn Rand

2 - Good afternoon. Ayn Rand was a philosopher, so try and look at her works from another (all) point(s)...

Essaysdorkee - Aug 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 20, 2008
Life of a death row inmate research, I have a thesis sentence

4 - I suggest you wait on the conclusion and the opening/thesis until after you've written the paper if possible. After...

Research Paperssheisabrat - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
UCF admissions essays, Why did you apply? what characteristics do you have?

3 - In college I think that qualities such as, caring, love, and genuine kindness could go a long way in...

Undergraduatezaz - Aug 19, 2008giuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008
Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science

2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...

Scholarshipdjellel - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
LOOSING THE BEST FRIEND- Life obstacle!

3 - thank you soooo very much! that helped me out tremendously!...

Undergraduatebeebee - Aug 19, 2008beebee - Aug 20, 2008
no other tools than face-to-face talk can replace human needs to meet and share joys and sorrows

4 - Both of those are fine; they are still used frequently today. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackurgent - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay

2 - You make some really good points in this essay. If you can find some research supporting how much the...

Writing Feedbackngngmaiphuong - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
"changing experiance" UF admission essay

4 - You are welcome. I think that since this is a very personal essay you put a lot of emotion...

UndergraduateDiiyah - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
How to avoid in writing in the passive tone

2 - Good morning. In regards to the passive tone, the biggest "key" to remember is, "Don't tell your readers...

Grammar, Usagesylock232 - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
pen names in MLA works cited pages

2 - Good morning. In this case, you should use the pen name. When citing, you should use exactly what...

Grammar, Usagesarek - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
Need help for answering for questions in MA admission Essay

5 - I think you are in the right track. Have more emphasis on the details how the course would help...

Essaysboomerj - Aug 17, 2008dumi - Jun 7, 2013
Great Gatsby Essay for a private school

4 - Hi, What you write in your body paragraphs depends on what you establish in your thesis sentence. Writing...

Essaysrusty - Aug 16, 2008judas - Mar 25, 2014
'her husband, my father, has died' - UF - meaningful event

NEW - I would like some advice on my essay to the University of Florida the topic is: Describe a...

UndergraduateBrianOchuko - Aug 16, 2008 -
essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized

2 - Make sure that everything in quotation marks is properly cited according to the specifics of your required citation style....

Writing Feedbacksylock232 - Aug 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
"Jennifer Lim" - College Application Essay

NEW - I was just starting fourth grade when I met Jennifer Lim. Then, I had just moved to the Philippines...

Undergraduateop2607 - Aug 16, 2008 -
Being in the middle of the spiral staircase. Essay on Education

5 - Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is it not...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Aug 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
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