|Advice on improving expression, sentence structure and flow of an essay.
3 - Thank you. I have borrowed the two books, and Elements of Style had an immediate impact. Are there...
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|Essay about Zambia - feedback on information, flow, and format appreciated!
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|The importance of the attachment in infancy - Short question...
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|"My life reflects intellectual strength" - FSU Application
4 - I look forward to seeing the UCF applications. Thanks for posting! Also, thanks for looking at other people's work...
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|Experience for intellectual, social, or cultural differences, essay U of M
3 - One of the most significant cultural experiences I have encountered began at the age of sixteen at my current...
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|TOEFL: Why people visit museums? History/ Broaden Perspectives/ Place of Attraction
3 - As a lover of travel and art, I always enjoy visits to excellent museum when taking a tour of...
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|Can someone help revise and detail my outline on the Julio-Claudian Dynasty
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|'crowded, polluted, noisy place' - a new high school may be built in the neighborhood
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|an enemy who was a positive influence on me.. application
6 - thanks...
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|It is now 2013. How has the Macaulay Honors College changed you? (300/less)
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|I have an essay question (character and citizenship trait)
3 - Mavictoria, citizenship traits include patriotism, participation in the political process, community leadership, and so forth. Annie, here is...
EssaysmavictoriaEF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|How to start researching a topic?
5 - Oh, this is tough if you have not read about the different kinds of electoral systems. In the U.S....
Research PapersjcfineEF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|Essay about selecting the course.
6 - However, this claim overlooks the potential advantages of students' own selected course, such as increasing students' motivation and their...
Writing Feedbackje2ks2EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|"a camper" - common app essay. really horrible 1st draft.
5 - Well, if you read about the school to which you are applying, and think of its special qualities in...
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|Hairs and Patience - UC Prompt #2 (Unusual but meaningful)
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|Creative work of art-Commonapp Personal essay
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|"Saih maht geanguh"- historical influence.
7 - Thanks four your comment on my essay. I like how your each paragraph connect to each other. I like...
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|Have there been any bumps in the road in your life.
4 - I agree with hasnaahmed.Maybe try and inverse your story,start from the end.If you wanted this esay to be semi-formal...
Writing FeedbackMoni09arthas13 - Dec 3, 2008
|"Choose one activity." Univ. of Ill essay
3 - At first, I was lazy and hated going to the volunteer service, but after (a) few months, I started...
Undergraduatejusanglee91timothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
|I have always wanted to play guitar - My UF essay
5 - "I have always wanted to play guitar. Guitar has always interested me," seems a bit redundant....
UndergraduateJoshrulestimothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
|toefl: overemphasizing on personal lives of famous people by media
6 - For me,writing an essay in English is not easy. It takes time to practice. Kevin,thank you so...
Writing Feedbackcamellia2008camellia2008 - Dec 3, 2008
|Bhangra, Indian folk dance Common - App. Short answer question -edit/trim
UndergraduateSwamiEF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
|Catch-22 Major Research Paper; "Generals Die in Bed"
7 - Well, I can correct the use of commas when using quotations. Revise this way: Occasionally, some define faith...
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|The most important activity of your life that teels something about you.
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|Three essays, choose the one you like best to edit! "Person You Are"
Undergraduateowojcik7sound10kp - Dec 2, 2008
|Narrative Ethnographic Essay - Needs help
2 - In 1995, a Minister, along with his wife and five children, emigrated from Guatemala City, Guatemala. Her youngest...
Writing FeedbacknguyendEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|Poltical Science, Multiple Questions Essay on Political Issues
Writing FeedbackiceboarEF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|University of Washington - Choose one of the following two topics and write a short essay.
2 - I know what you mean... sometimes you write something and you know it just is not inspired. However, some...
Undergraduateipo1107EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
|"Personal or academic interests." Univ. of Ill essay.
2 - Airplanes represents a kind of magic for little children, but as they grow up, children tend to shift their...
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