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Common App Essay: Fictional Character... Dreams Are My Nuts and Bolts!!

15 - I'm applying to Yale, Brown, Duke and some others...so we do have 3 universities in common!...

UndergraduateAkshat - Dec 22, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
Art, music, science, math, literature + secretly like - My UVA Supplement Essays

5 - Mhmm, I think I agree. The second one was written in kind of a get-it-over-with attitude. I'll probably keep...

Undergraduateahsanxr - Dec 27, 2009ahsanxr - Dec 27, 2009
What is the best piece of advice you've ever been given, and why?

8 - Post it again once it's revised. :) I'll help make sure that all of the English makes sense!...

Undergraduatelinhexi - Dec 26, 2009owls - Dec 27, 2009
Common Application: A Historical Figure, Richard Feynman

4 - Gauss's law for magnetism can be put in many ways: "the divergence of the magnetic field is everywhere zero,"...

UndergraduateAbhijeetS - Dec 24, 2009codelieb - Dec 27, 2009
RICE UNIVERSITY - why medicine? Hospitals are my vacation homes

5 - Hello. Glad I could help you a bit ;) I actually do have an essay that I REALLY need...

Undergraduatemichellem58867 - Dec 27, 2009dayae21 - Dec 27, 2009
Amherst applicants, do we have to refer to the quote in the essay?

4 - I'm writing the same essay. I didn't exactly plan to include the quote in the essay. I think that...

Essayssportybluei - Dec 24, 2009cucciola21 - Dec 27, 2009
the First Responder team, Tell us something about you

3 - The sound of my pager ripped through the silence in the classroom -silence "of" the classroom This student-run...

Undergraduatedavidlin1992 - Dec 27, 2009m126531 - Dec 27, 2009
Common App short answer (both sides of the stage)

4 - perhaps you may want to elaborate more on the last sentence. what do you mean by "learned the importance...

Undergraduatejmk55 - Dec 24, 2009hbrad8002 - Dec 27, 2009
Common App Activity Essay : Splash or Mozart Vs Beethoven?

7 - xtremewishes Yes I am sacking the music linkage!!I'll make it more to the point!! @Simrath Yes...

UndergraduateAkshat - Dec 26, 2009Akshat - Dec 27, 2009
Rochester Short Answer. why good fit + different points of view

NEW - Rochester Supplementary Short Answers 1. What makes the University of Rochester a good fit for you? In answering,...

UndergraduateEsaias - Dec 27, 2009 -
NYU supplement; 'A day in NYC with anyone'

9 - "endeavoring through a concrete jungle" This sounds a bit awkward, though i understand the point you are trying to...

Undergraduatedizzydaydreams - Dec 23, 2009nadine83 - Dec 27, 2009
MIT Creativity Essay - "Nighttime is like Progresso New England Clam Chowder."

4 - I would expect since this is MIT, that many people will want to flaunt their extensive research projects. They...

Undergraduateqwe123 - Dec 26, 2009tiliu - Dec 27, 2009
Hey BEN what can I contribute to your community? (UPENN supp)

2 - Eliminate the last paragraph the one before it is a much better ending and leaves the essay on a...

Undergraduateekfoong - Dec 26, 2009caisson22 - Dec 26, 2009
a liberal arts education anchored in Christian values - Pepperdine's common app

4 - It's a christian school so I thought you had to talk about an education integrated with religious faith because...

Undergraduatejuesewang - Dec 24, 2009caisson22 - Dec 26, 2009
Don't know how to start sop -- applying for an engineering course at UG level

2 - wow, well, say something about yourself, ask who are you? What type of person you are, what is interesting...

Undergraduaterohstar - Dec 26, 2009srandhawa - Dec 26, 2009
Trinity College essay (how will u free the mind of prejudice)

2 - I even disliked foreigners because... ...I discovered many things, of which I had known little. The colorful...

UndergraduatePrettyBoyu - Dec 26, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 26, 2009
Dissertation topics-in built environment subjects

4 - Liebe yes, absolutely I agree with you but I can get a variety of ideas that's what my intention....

Dissertationscicin - Dec 22, 2009cicin - Dec 26, 2009
"marching band camp" An essay of how I spent my summers

4 - I spent two very memorable weeks during the summer of 2008 at a camp called "Global Scholars," where... ...

Undergraduatesportybluei - Dec 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
Common App: Topic of Choice (leadership) ---

4 - Leadership takes patience to acquire, it is rarely immediate and the effect and influence are impossible to trace. ---...

Undergraduatesara_h20 - Dec 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
Georgetown essay - Perfectionist

2 - Clearly, my desire to make sure that my job was done correctly proved that I likened to perfectionist policies....

Undergraduatessuraj - Dec 25, 2009SkittleRose - Dec 26, 2009
"Guardian of My Life" - a person has a huge influence on me.

NEW - Please watch my grammar too. All helps will be very appreciated =) Moving from Vietnam to California -...

Undergraduatemonkey13330gg - Dec 26, 2009 -
'The final football season' - NYU: how you spent summer vacation: 500

4 - I'm applying to NYU too! good luck!! but anyway i didn't think it was bad...but i agree with Mellzzer......

UndergraduateWrestlingnba - Dec 24, 2009dizzydaydreams - Dec 26, 2009
UMich Prompt--Describe your interests&aspirations in engineering

5 - Thank you all for the feedback. Here's my second draft. I took the advice of Kevin and made some...

Undergraduatemammal - Dec 23, 2009mammal - Dec 26, 2009
"I can have a sense of security" - JHU Supplement Help

6 - Sorry, we have to suspend you for ignoring the thread title rules. You may be able to access the...

Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 26, 2009EF_Team - Dec 26, 2009
UPenn Supplement Essay- Pakistan Society and One Health at Penn

3 - Use a comma to separate the 2 halves of a compound sentence: The University of Pennsylvania Pakistan Society is...

Undergraduatezain12qa - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
UNCW Essay - Carolina's Paradise

2 - Less is more with unnecessary details: Once a week, o On Monday nights at 8:00 p.m., I make ......

Undergraduatelowcal - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
"The focus and dedication" - George Washington University Common App. Supplement

2 - That first sentence is a strong one! You should follow it with a sentence that gives an example of...

Undergraduatejuesewang - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
"dreams drive men of purpose" Personal_Statement_PhD_Mech engineering

2 - Use the active voice: I spent my entire educational career has been spent in the most prestigious organizations and...

Graduatemerinadica - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
"Oh... sometimes things happen." Something that didn't go as planned - MIT essay

8 - This is really great, I really like the detail you gave on Susan and Brian, it made me feel...

Undergraduaterzj123 - Dec 25, 2009mokie257 - Dec 26, 2009
Ichigo - Common App essay- significant influence

4 - This one's newly revised with some stuff added. I have not deleted the "Kevins" part because I have to...

Undergraduatemeliza8809 - Dec 23, 2009meliza8809 - Dec 26, 2009
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