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Thesis statement: "Why Are Company CEOs getting Higher Bonuses?"

13 - Yep, Kevin's absolutely right. The explanations are long-winded and generally dull. Lay out your argument first, then use your...

Research Papersbiz09 - May 3, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
SOP- for MBA in Finance - how to write?

6 - Kasi, when you post a draft for us to look at, please start a new thread. That way, we...

Essaysmaliknitesh - Sep 19, 2008EF_Kevin - May 8, 2009
"There is no doubt in mind that Macbeth was a villain"; How Macbeth became a villain.

3 - Yeah, I think Macbeth deserves more credit, but don't be discouraged! You can make little adjustments at key spots...

Book Reportssally12 - May 8, 2009EF_Kevin - May 8, 2009
Thesis Statement with 3 points (global warming)

15 - Global warming is an event that will affect many people and animals all over the world. Humand will...

Research Papersparadox28491 - Apr 26, 2009biz09 - May 8, 2009
qualities that would make you a good candidate for engineering-essay

4 - Hi tjay1988, I think that you should state more clearly your two qualities and add transitional words (or...

Undergraduatetjay1988 - May 7, 2009Thuong - May 8, 2009
Reflective Essay On This School Year: "Closed Doors Are Not The End"

6 - Ah, you get to workshop this essay a bit, then, do you? It's always nice when teachers let you...

Writing FeedbackBabiix - May 6, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
work hard, find the best in each other, and live with confidence.

6 - I just finished advising someone else to do this, but it bears repeating here -- use strong verbs. Read...

Undergraduateshupirate2013 - May 6, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
"The Contested Terrain of Media Text and its Effects on Contemporary Culture"

3 - This is a fascinating subject. I notice you didn't mention that the world of 24 had an America governed...

Writing Feedbackgudjuju22 - May 5, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
'It is something extra' - Personal Statement (the European Business School London)

9 - Cutting is easy, when it other people's writing you are cutting. When you have to cut your own stuff,...

Undergraduatecommeleciel - Apr 16, 2009EF_Sean - May 8, 2009
"Portrait of a Young Man" with St. "Catherine In Prison" - Compare and contrast essay

2 - You pretty much have answered your own question. Explain what characterizes Italian mannerist paintings of the late 1500s, and...

Book ReportsMoeMoe1 - May 7, 2009EF_Sean - May 7, 2009
"Our desire to conform is greater than our respect for objective facts." - Essay

15 - Yeah, I know what you mean. They have their purpose. Still, I am often surprised at how much better...

Writing Feedbackx0vicksz - May 3, 2009EF_Kevin - May 7, 2009
Rinor: My first CV for a job application

6 - Thank you Notoman, EF_Sean, elzbietabielec, michaelfrye1970. Your advices really help me to rebuild my CV. I do appreciate your...

Lettersrinori89 - Apr 26, 2009rinori89 - May 7, 2009
Essay on Traditional meal in Christmas Day

6 - :) Sarma mmmmmmmmm, hi neighbor! :)...

Writing Feedbackgacesaa - Apr 30, 2009Chidem - May 7, 2009
Analytical Essay -- methods

5 - Thanks so much for your reply. Basically, the methods are: narration, description, definition, process, comparison/contrast, division and illustration. I...

Essaysdavid_m - May 3, 2009david_m - May 6, 2009
English Comp. CLEP - practice essay "Impossible Goals"

9 - Well, they are testing for English competency, and so presumably have backgrounds in language rather than in computer science....

Writing FeedbackSairaTasartir - Apr 24, 2009EF_Sean - May 6, 2009
1st person - writing question

12 - well its totally ok. i dont mind at all. good thing u didnt go with "it". lol...

Grammar, Usageluke - Apr 12, 2009newsha31 - May 6, 2009
What essential skills young people should have in our complex society?

14 - These days, I am busy preparing... Awesome, see you when you get here! :)...

Writing Feedbackflorazhou - Apr 22, 2009EF_Kevin - May 6, 2009
CLEP Practice Essay - effect of computers on work now versus 100 years ago

4 - Thanks so much. My intro was much longer in draft with a better hook and a more specific example...

Writing Feedbackabryant - May 5, 2009abryant - May 6, 2009
Driving alternatives in Hampton Roads: Proposal Essay review

3 - As with any large city area that undergoes a process of growth, the Hampton Roads Area is (say something...

Research Papersmichaelfrye1970 - May 4, 2009EF_Kevin - May 5, 2009
My Father as a source of inspiration and enlightenment to me

13 - From my place I am thankful for every lesson he taught me, especially those lessons that I was going...

Undergraduatemenamilad - Jan 20, 2009EF_Kevin - May 5, 2009
Aboriginal Rights in the Twentieth Century-My term essay for History

7 - Great question! Fluidity comes from having a central theme for the whole essay, and then having a mini theme...

Writing Feedbackmacawtopia - Apr 25, 2009EF_Kevin - May 5, 2009
Archimedes; "Eureka!" essay

10 - Hmmm . . . what exactly were the assignment instructions? If you are just writing a biographical piece, you...

Writing FeedbackFreedomMoto - Apr 30, 2009EF_Sean - May 5, 2009
TOEFL Essay - Convenience food can not improve the way we live.

15 - Perhaps it is a good idea to make time to be healthy? For that matter, while some people have...

Writing FeedbackMonkeyDDragon - Apr 15, 2009EF_Sean - May 5, 2009
Summer Calculus and it's Interdisciplinary Role

3 - In April of 2007 , when I applied for Columbia's Summer High School Program, I remember writing about my...

Undergraduatebizkitgirlzc - May 4, 2009EF_Kevin - May 4, 2009
"The Masque of the Red Death" by Edgar Allan Poe Research Paper

3 - This is high-quality stuff. You write very well, so you can now go up to the next level by...

Writing FeedbackLunasly - May 3, 2009EF_Kevin - May 4, 2009
Globalization - an opinion letter in essay form

12 - But this would a be a good thing, surely? If you eliminate the notion of money, which seems...

Lettersttc1234 - Mar 26, 2009EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
Language-Way of Dialect-

5 - The exact instructions would help, as Tyler said. Also, you might want to consider adding more detail to your...

Writing Feedbackcin ali - Apr 29, 2009EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
My attitude towards writers is mostly positive. Writers have creative and imaginary minds.

9 - It will be impossible to completely eliminate the use of "I" in an essay on this sort of topic,...

Writing Feedbacksally12 - May 2, 2009EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
Statement of Purpose "An Award for Drawing"

25 - The paragraph is looking pretty strong now. I'd change the first sentence back to "I am engineer who is...

Graduatecvani - Apr 25, 2009EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
Select a developmental or psychological theory/perspective; how to structure it?

4 - If you give a brief summary of attachment theory, and of your preliminary ideas on how it connects to...

Essayselzbietabielec - May 2, 2009EF_Sean - May 4, 2009
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