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Gambia to Georgia -- entrepreneur in the resturaunt business.

5 - Thank it helped alot...!!!...

UndergraduateBrownpd - Apr 2, 2009Brownpd - Apr 16, 2009
A persuasive speech on discrimination

6 - If you are going to write a persuasive speech, then presumably you will be less interested in what the...

Speechestwashington0541 - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
500 word image essay (Black Hair Report)

4 - You seem to be on the right track. Now go into more detail. Why were they "jumping" through the...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 14, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 16, 2009
Poetry about the Enron Scandal

7 - oops, i meant add more in haha txs for the advice...

Poetryjianxian - Apr 13, 2009jianxian - Apr 15, 2009
"Parting Gift" poem

9 - Hey, good news for me. Sean's advice for you improved my own perspective on poetry a lot. I actually...

Poetrysilverystars - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 15, 2009
Lord of the Flies essay: characters, concerns and language of the novel

5 - no, we are stuck to these three themes...

Book Reportsmeshaal - Apr 9, 2009meshaal - Apr 14, 2009
Early human development is strongly influenced by nature

2 - The first paragraph should have the thesis statement. You say that you will be talking about the impact of...

Writing FeedbackAlshebah - Apr 14, 2009Gautama - Apr 14, 2009
"the chase" story

4 - thank you guys, ur really helpful. but Sean can u suggest some better verbs. im really bad at this....

Writing Feedbacknewsha31 - Apr 13, 2009newsha31 - Apr 14, 2009
Essay to Compare and Contrast Two members of Your Family

5 - Ahhh!! That is harsh. Parents are people, too. How would you like to have your mom say she...

Writing FeedbackQueenie31 - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
a paragraph that updates my activity in a waitlist letter.

7 - Great! Good luck, I hope it is well-received....

Undergraduatejianxian - Apr 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
Psychology Concepts applied to the real world

5 - ...taught them to sew their clothes... She stayed very close to her sister and brought her along so...

Writing Feedbackteelyons - Apr 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 14, 2009
"Who Swims with the Tuna" by Quammen and "Riches of the Sea" by Scully

3 - I think it was David Brin who first pointed out that environmentalists are always only really concerned with creatures...

Writing FeedbackCodyB - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
Appeal essay, UC Davis of Engineering

3 - I'm very appreciative that University of California Davis has offered me an opportunity for an appeal. After receiving the...

Undergraduatexwy - Apr 13, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 14, 2009
(symbolic / character interpretation)? - my new essay is on lord of the flies.

15 - Should parents be responsible if their children behave badly? Most children in the duration between childhood and adulthood may...

Book Reportssc15pcz - Mar 26, 2009Winpapamon - Apr 14, 2009
Why you are specifically well-suited to contribute to this internship

2 - I looks like you have a good grasp on the importance of volunteer work. I may change this sentence...

Graduatepia - Apr 13, 2009teelyons - Apr 13, 2009
counselling essay

2 - I would often judge people on assumptions I had been brought up with. Since starting college, I have...

Writing Feedbackkazzy31 - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
I need help review this essay ("the greatest goal you hope to achieve")

3 - Please give a little bit more substantial help to other members! Then, I'll spend time helping with your essay....

UndergraduateGrammarFool - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
Scholarship Essay - Effect of Presidential Election

4 - Yeah, don't use the forum quite that way. It should not be a resource the enable students to avoid...

Scholarshipcali - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
Many people regret that they had not attended a university, but none regret that have a degree

4 - Hi adalumi, your topic and mine are the same thing :D essayforum.com/writing/university-career-preparation-self-6375/ I think your essay is...

Writing Feedbackadalumi - Apr 10, 2009MonkeyDDragon - Apr 13, 2009
Referencing question concerning Harvard Referencing style

6 - Josephus, F. (1987). The Works of Josephus: Complete and Unabridged. William Whiston, trans. Massachusetts: Hendrickson Publishers. This is...

Grammar, Usageniord - Apr 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2009
SOP for MS in Digital electronics field

2 - ...so that I can get ample exposure to the technological advances and allow myself to contribute to its immense...

Graduaterajendranr7 - Apr 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2009
Education Playground -- letters after your name

3 - I got confused when I read this. I realize now that you mean to say "a part of"...

Writing Feedbackzoomdots - Apr 11, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 12, 2009
Esteban - Thesis statement for an arguementative essay

3 - You should definitely add in the title of the story and the author's name. Also, you should revise your...

Essaysep505 - Apr 10, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 11, 2009
IELTS ESSAY: lessons with teachers versus others sources

8 - oh,yes,sure it does. i appreciate your help!...

Writing Feedbackeffy_sun - Apr 8, 2009effy_sun - Apr 11, 2009
Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future

9 - Thanks Sean. I'll let everyone know if I get the scholarship....

Scholarshiparbennett - Feb 17, 2009arbennett - Apr 11, 2009
Class Office Speech (strange high school traditions)

2 - Then...it's toga day! and the most-anticipated senior prank. You write very well, and you do not seem...

Speechesfittifitz - Apr 10, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
Appeal letter - Goals, Good Intentions, Seeking Reevaluation

7 - I hope you get to do what you want to do! If you have a clear vision of what...

Letterskrzyazn - Apr 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Apr 11, 2009
SAT essay: Are people's lives the result of the choices they make?

4 - Thanks ^ ^...

Writing Feedbackkitty Freud - Apr 9, 2009kitty Freud - Apr 10, 2009
TOEFL essay: movies - serious or amusing?

11 - If you like Blackadder, you should check out some of Atkinson's stand-up comedy. A few skits are "Mr Bean-ish,"...

Writing Feedbackeric_ly - Apr 8, 2009EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
Persuasive Speech: Schizophrenia and Suicide

4 - It sounds like an excellent topic to me -- it's a bit different from the usual run-of-the-mill topics that...

Speechessilverystars - Oct 7, 2008EF_Sean - Apr 10, 2009
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