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topic - condom machines in school

NEW - hi gloria! This is the same assignment as the other essay i sent u. i am doing two essays...

Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 27, 2008 -
My beloved island of Puerto Rico - UF Admission Essay

4 - Yes, I was originally leaning more towards the first one too. Thank you so much for your time!...

Undergraduatejessyalm - Oct 26, 2008jessyalm - Oct 27, 2008
Ramapo Essay - React to a crisis or critical moment in your life...

5 - You're very welcome. I don't think writing a new piece is necessary, just add a little bit more to...

Undergraduatexf0olishf0ry0u - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
Passion for the sport of basketball - UF - Admissions Essay

NEW - TOPIC: Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college...

UndergraduateMIKERAND - Oct 27, 2008 -
Parkour, Short Answer- 150 Words>

13 - haha oops i guess i just misread. my bad. well thanks for all the help guys. I got a...

UndergraduateJSFlash - Oct 26, 2008JSFlash - Oct 27, 2008
The theme of the contest is WOW - my short story

2 - Good afternoon. Since you didn't really provide specifics about the prompt (I don't know what "WOW" is), I...

Writing Feedback4ever2bleed - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
how my writing has changed - my self-evaluation essay

2 - You have a good self-evaluation here. You examine your strengths and weaknesses, and are very honest about both. You...

Writing Feedbackfabiola017 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
"I love to deal with numbers" ..Another GTown essay..

4 - Good afternoon. Much more organized. I have a few corrections in the last paragraph though: "The third...

UndergraduateEcho - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
I love music and sports; A High-Tech Forte - U of I essay

9 - Again, with some fine tuning in regards to the specifics of this prompt, this piece would be a good...

UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
King Lear "Violation of trust"

2 - Good afternoon. How about the deceit of injustice that permeates the entire work? Or, the deceit in the...

Essaysanniechen36 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
"Do you play basketball?" - Trying to get into UF.

5 - Once again, you are amazing. : P Once implementing your revisions, I will submit my essay and my application...

UndergraduateAutogazim - Oct 21, 2008Autogazim - Oct 27, 2008
Claudius in "Hamlet" by Shakespeare

NEW - Hamlet is a brilliant tragic play by William Shakespeare. Claudius is the former king's brother. After he kills king...

Book ReportsXecaris - Oct 27, 2008 -
Music, a new way to communicate and relate - Commonapp essay

NEW - Hope that members and moderators could critique my essay. Thanks in advance. "Beautiful..." an evocative word whispered, soft...

Undergraduatecloudone - Oct 27, 2008 -
Classical Essay - Abortion The Right to Choose

3 - Thank you very much, I will rewrite it now....

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 24, 2008taiyaki - Oct 27, 2008
'no longer felt like a foreigner' - a setback you have faced - UMich and Purdue

NEW - Describe a setback that you have faced. How did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect you? If...

UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 26, 2008 -
The problem of balancing family priorities and education -Admissions Essay

NEW - Hey just want to see what you think. Thank you very much! I am running down an endless...

UndergraduateZatt - Oct 26, 2008 -
our sixth loss in a row - Common App. 150 word short answer.

NEW - 150 words exactly. Our football team had just suffered our sixth loss in a row. A winning season...

Undergraduatederricktv - Oct 26, 2008 -
I have faced many obstacles to overcome - Personal Statement

NEW - Below is my personal statement for admission to UCF. Any advice would be appreciated! Thanks! Personal Statement: ...

Undergraduatexlogan7 - Oct 26, 2008 -
'How much does the Smokey Jack's Burger cost me?' Dissect my essay... ED to UPenn

4 - Thanks, I'm shaving down the middle sections. Does anyone else have any comments?...

Undergraduatelikaitai - Oct 26, 2008likaitai - Oct 26, 2008
Significant school activity

NEW - Discuss the significance to you of the school or summer activity in which you have been most involved. ...

UndergraduateEcho - Oct 26, 2008 -
"more valuable than winning a contest" - a significant experience, its impact on you

7 - Well, go through it carefully and look for things such as "can't" and "won't." If you see any of...

UndergraduateEcho - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity My UF admissions essay

5 - You're very welcome. An admissions board is looking for a bit more than an one-liner as to how this...

Undergraduatemimi101 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
UF Admissions Essay - Overcoming Rejection

2 - I am concerned that the second half of the prompt is not addressed in your essay. You've done a...

Undergraduatex3racha3l - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
the activites you mentioned - Short Answer Common App

2 - There is so much emphasis placed on kids getting involved in sports that people overlook the importance of the...

Undergraduatex3racha3l - Oct 26, 2008Chink - Oct 26, 2008
Mock Trial - 250+ common app essay any revisions would be a great help

2 - Good afternoon :) This is a good subject for this type of essay. Mechanically, make sure you are...

Undergraduategokhalea09 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
Marlboro First Aid Squad/ Real parental Support/ Goal; RUTGERS U- 3Essays

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to the first essay, it seems that your point is that one must allow...

Undergraduateto91 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
UPenn, why Penn essay 1 page, need input applying ED

NEW - Hi I need some help with the Why Upenn essay, the actualy question is. Describe your course of study...

Undergraduatelorinajdzin - Oct 26, 2008 -
Question- Evaluate the influence your family has had on you.

3 - Wow. I am really surprised you think my essay is that great. You really lifted a huge amount of...

Undergraduatenikokoskinas - Oct 26, 2008nikokoskinas - Oct 26, 2008
'being dismissed from class' - Emory University Supplement

2 - Good morning. A couple of suggestions: "One needs to imagine oneself at the..." Since you stayed...

Undergraduatesreekar - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
The use of contractions in my admission essay / I am vs. I'm

5 - The use of contractions is largely inappropriate in formal academic writing. Many instructors will count off for their use,...

Grammar, Usagejujubean - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
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