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Learning from failure - CommonApp essay

7 - Oh, thanks! I didn't catch that! And I was wondering about the naive thing, too. I wasn't sure...

Undergraduatedocument1 - Oct 26, 2008document1 - Oct 28, 2008
University of Pennsylvania: most interest you / favorite Penn professor

2 - Good afternoon. First, a few mechanical concerns. Make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the...

UndergraduateAleksey - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
'the gruesome scene in summer' - Life Experience Common App. Essay

2 - Excellent essay. Very organized, good flow, very descriptive. You stay on topic and answer the prompt very well. You...

UndergraduateAleksey - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
My research project Common APP 150 words extra-curricular commitment

2 - Good afternoon. It is probably this browser, but I can't tell what is at the beginning of the...

Undergraduatecloudone - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Why I applied to Molloy - I need some help with my admission essay

2 - Good afternoon. I would discuss the specific aspects of Molloy that drew you to it. What is it...

Undergraduatennelson07 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Our volleyball team - Short Answer on Common App

2 - I think this is a good response to the short answer prompt. It is difficult to make an impact...

Undergraduatelinzroz18 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Penn Admissions Essay - having a hard time finishing ..

2 - Good afternoon. I suggest focusing a bit on why you would fit into this school so well. You...

Undergraduatex3racha3l - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
How will college ed. help you achieve personal+professional goals? [Purdue]

8 - You're very welcome. Sure. "House Captain," "Annual Day, Sports Day," Computer Engineering." It's really up to you...

Undergraduatemrhohoha - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
holding my flute tightly - Common App: elaborate your activity

4 - Thanks for advices, I really appreciated them. I wrote my essay again but I'm still not sure whether I'm...

Undergraduateahpahf723 - Oct 27, 2008ahpahf723 - Oct 28, 2008
Drawing Guinness - 150 words or less work experience (common app)

6 - Good evening. It's really up to the admissions board. Some times they won't even consider something that exceeds...

Undergraduatelburgess88 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
I owe everything to my family - it has greatly influenced who I am today. UCF essay

2 - Good evening. So from a young age I always would strive to get good grades and to be...

Undergraduatefawnbolak591 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
Two children / Orlando Knight - Two UCF essays

2 - Good evening. You've got two good pieces here, so I'm going to give you some suggestions to help...

Undergraduatesaragreen - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
My Exchange Year--elaborate on one of your activities

2 - I like the conclusion of this piece, but I'm not sure the beginning and middle match it. For instance,...

Undergraduategracetm - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
choose a medieval villager - Historical essay

2 - Good evening. Well, as to the first, you should probably write a narrative essay. This is an essay...

Essaysbip - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
topic - condom machines in school

NEW - hi gloria! This is the same assignment as the other essay i sent u. i am doing two essays...

Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 27, 2008 -
My beloved island of Puerto Rico - UF Admission Essay

4 - Yes, I was originally leaning more towards the first one too. Thank you so much for your time!...

Undergraduatejessyalm - Oct 26, 2008jessyalm - Oct 27, 2008
Ramapo Essay - React to a crisis or critical moment in your life...

5 - You're very welcome. I don't think writing a new piece is necessary, just add a little bit more to...

Undergraduatexf0olishf0ry0u - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
Passion for the sport of basketball - UF - Admissions Essay

NEW - TOPIC: Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college...

UndergraduateMIKERAND - Oct 27, 2008 -
Parkour, Short Answer- 150 Words>

13 - haha oops i guess i just misread. my bad. well thanks for all the help guys. I got a...

UndergraduateJSFlash - Oct 26, 2008JSFlash - Oct 27, 2008
The theme of the contest is WOW - my short story

2 - Good afternoon. Since you didn't really provide specifics about the prompt (I don't know what "WOW" is), I...

Writing Feedback4ever2bleed - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
how my writing has changed - my self-evaluation essay

2 - You have a good self-evaluation here. You examine your strengths and weaknesses, and are very honest about both. You...

Writing Feedbackfabiola017 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
"I love to deal with numbers" ..Another GTown essay..

4 - Good afternoon. Much more organized. I have a few corrections in the last paragraph though: "The third...

UndergraduateEcho - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
I love music and sports; A High-Tech Forte - U of I essay

9 - Again, with some fine tuning in regards to the specifics of this prompt, this piece would be a good...

UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
King Lear "Violation of trust"

2 - Good afternoon. How about the deceit of injustice that permeates the entire work? Or, the deceit in the...

Essaysanniechen36 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
"Do you play basketball?" - Trying to get into UF.

5 - Once again, you are amazing. : P Once implementing your revisions, I will submit my essay and my application...

UndergraduateAutogazim - Oct 21, 2008Autogazim - Oct 27, 2008
Claudius in "Hamlet" by Shakespeare

NEW - Hamlet is a brilliant tragic play by William Shakespeare. Claudius is the former king's brother. After he kills king...

Book ReportsXecaris - Oct 27, 2008 -
Music, a new way to communicate and relate - Commonapp essay

NEW - Hope that members and moderators could critique my essay. Thanks in advance. "Beautiful..." an evocative word whispered, soft...

Undergraduatecloudone - Oct 27, 2008 -
Classical Essay - Abortion The Right to Choose

3 - Thank you very much, I will rewrite it now....

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 24, 2008taiyaki - Oct 27, 2008
'no longer felt like a foreigner' - a setback you have faced - UMich and Purdue

NEW - Describe a setback that you have faced. How did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect you? If...

UndergraduateBeast53 - Oct 26, 2008 -
The problem of balancing family priorities and education -Admissions Essay

NEW - Hey just want to see what you think. Thank you very much! I am running down an endless...

UndergraduateZatt - Oct 26, 2008 -
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